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im making my own manga but i need some help!


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[color=#503f86]A good place to start may be to tell people what kind of manga you're hoping to create- genre, style, what kinds of characters will be involved, and also what sort of things you're having problems with. Then everyone will be better equipped to suggest things to you. In the mean time, I'd suggest taking a look at other threads here and see if they give you any ideas as to what you need to do.

Try and put a little more substance into posts in future as well, please- posts that are too short or are of too low a quality (i.e. not using decent enough grammar, spelling and punctuation) will be deleted as spam. [/color]
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the characters are a demon(assasin /chick magnet) an elf( trigger happy loon) a vampire wherewolf hybrid( perverted and funny) a minotar(pirate/bootlager/really big lecturist(also huminoid))
a crazy human girl (exact oppisite of a teen heroine or damsile in destress)
angelus i need help on building the genre together i can draw like a mad dog but how to stat the story i find strangely difficult.......
the genre is action ,adventure(somewhat) slight romance and good ol fassion comedy!

[color=darkblue][size=1]In the future, please use the Edit button to add to your posts instead of making two post in a row. Also, Solo warned you about your grammar and I'm going to do the same.[/size][/color]
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Why don't you do it that the demon falls in love with the crazy earth girl but then the demon is imprisoned in time beacuse it is wrong to fall in love with humans. then they all go on a journey to save him but the come across a band of evil people and there is a never ending battle against them. It's the best i can come up with from the top of my head, it not a very good storyline but i not going to tell you my storyline for my manga
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why don't you have the elf as a bounty hunter trying to capture the demon, and the prevent can be found my the demon and the demon forces him to join him. The characters are interesting and if i thought about it longer i could come up with a better storyline.
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[color=darkblue]I do believe I'll step in now...

I'd like it a bit better if the participants in this thread would try to put a better foot forward in terms of the quality of their posts. Not to say that it's completely horrid, but proper grammar is just as important as proper spelling and common courtesy. Please try to keep that in mind in future posts.[/color]
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That alright and i am sorry if my grammar and spelling have been bad as well but i m not that good at english. So me and you will be against each other you with your demons and elf and me with my powered up characters. I am waiting for the starter books from the 'How to draw Manga' books so i should be starting to design my characters soon.
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Has anyone seen the anime [and manga] outlaw star? Why don't you do what they did in that just a big group of people and some of them start falling for the other. Like there is a diesease going aroud and close friends or family members of each of them has caught it so they meet up and decied to look for the cure together. But as always there is some one out there cause the illness and is trying to stop them....WOW how corney was that!? I have made A lot of Manga's and I sell them at school [But not vary many people like Manga at my school] But If you don't like the Idea then you could ask me for another...
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God I haven't been on in forever... anyway, I think you have a good plot for the characters. Open it with some sort of important moment, like the moment of first meeting, even if it does have to be a flash back. A lot of good manga artists do that and make sure the pervert and the lady killer are hot. :D
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Guest naotanandabsama
I believe that you should try to use the elf andthe vampire/werewolf as a pair of mercenaries and the other characters are going to try to buy their forces to attempt to kill the others off........maybe not, that is just too confusing, but it might not be too bad to see as a completed work. :animedepr
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Ok, i got an idea. It's says in the how to draw manga book that you should get a reference, of some kind. Find an anime or manga that has a plot you like and then change it, mmmm...

Like Outlaw star, do it so that they find one of the characters say they find the vampire and they take her on the journey to find the another girl, but the demon falls in love with the vampire. :animesmil Yay, Nay
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[QUOTE=duoikari]
Like Outlaw star, do it so that they find one of the characters say they find the vampire and they take her on the journey to find the another girl, but the demon falls in love with the vampire. :animesmil Yay, Nay[/QUOTE]

You have a good Idea going on there. Outlaw star had a good plot to it. But my favorite character died. :animecry:

It could be like on of the characters came to a city because he senced a bad Arua, then he gets tangeled with more characters. If you have't desing the characters yet do so and write some plots down and see how good there desing fits with the look of the character.
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[quote name='Sea Of Chaos666']My favorite character was Hida. I love the outcast type in anime. But, then they had to go off and kill her.... :([/quote]

I like jim and melfena, i think jim should of got together with that space private he meet :animecry: i'm sad.
Any way another idea you could do is excel saga plot line
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  • 3 weeks later...
This is a really cool idea. I love it so much I've been thinking about it more then my own manga. :animesigh I need to start working on that more. Anyway, the lady killer should fall in love with the vampire and the pervert should just be like, "I don't want a real realationship, cuz then I can't be a perv to other chicks" but then he falls in love with someone. I know... I'm messed up :D
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  • 4 weeks later...
many thanks and asuringly the demon is incredibly hot yet evil (gotta love it!) now ive ben gone using and testing all of these great ideas ill stick with the mercinaries and i did wind up using a flash back to start the first volume!have any of you guys seen my costom avatar... thats the demon! latley ive modified it to give him more of a poetic yet sadistic look ( i'm so proud!) ill try to submit in a new picture of him as soon as possible!
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oh i have something that will help u. i think from me makin them that u should use ur own ideas and dont lean so much on what u read from other mangas , its hard but if u think u will really have an idea out of this world. and oh also put a lot of ur own personally in the main charater, and put how u feel dont base it on other mangas or how u read them its ur mind make it ur manga. :animeswea
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How about: The Assassin and The trigger happy elf Are on a mission to kill said human girl. When they find her, she falls madly in love with Said assassin. They allow her to come with her... as for the minotaur, you're on your own there...
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  • 3 weeks later...
okay people ill give ya one at a time for now .....never mind just go to my ottaku
and find deagofallenangel okay.

[COLOR=#503F86][SIZE=1][b]soulreaper, please be careful with the quality of your posts in future- this is so close to being spam I almost deleted it. -Solo[/COLOR][/SIZE][/b]
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