Writing i give you a rose [E]

[Mitch]

I said i would get you a rose,
so here it is:

it's bloomed, lipstick red
the petals look fragile
the scent is pleasing
its stem is green of envy
the roots soil in ground
draining nutrients

it's bloomed, blood red
a heart green at the gills
dipped in blood and dried
to suitable color

it's bloomed, but as every rose
it has its thorns
prick them upon your palm
and feel their pain

this is the rose i give you
nothing fancy, but i hope
you can see it.

[Sueko02]

Okay, just to let you know I'm no expert when it comes to poetry, and for the life of me I can't write it. Though once and a while it is nice to read them even if I can't write them for myself... But I really liked this one. It had nice word use, rhythem, and... I can't think of the word.... comparison? Like, you pointed out all the things about a rose, both its beauty and pain, and I really liked how you described them. All and all, I give it an eight out of ten.