Writing Untitled Story Line [M]

[ArunueShekamari]

[font=Century Gothic][color=gray]My story lines are always kept up in my head, I never write them down, which is probably why they get so scrambled when I try to put them into a story or RPG. So, I'm going to write this one down where i know I'll be able to get critisisim and acctually find it again...here >:|[/color][/font]
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[font=Century Gothic][color=gray][i] Sheryl Coreat and his older brother, [/i](yes, his)[i] Diath find themselves on the street one night. The night is warm and the stars are out in sight. They are aproched by a young mnan, asking for them to walk with him. in any other circumstances, two smart boys like that would have said no, and walked away, But whether it be Diath's cockyness or the strange, almost gravitational like pull the boys had twords the stranger, they didn't think it through and left with the young man.[/i][/color][/font]
[i][font=Century Gothic][color=gray] Night after night, Damon, as the young man said his name was, visited the Diath, though not disturbing Sheryl. Damon and Diath became attached and developed a bond, only to figure out that Damon is a creatur of the night, a vampire. Damon is ashamed when Daith finds out and leaves for months on end. returning one summer night, and taking Diath out into the night to talk to him seriously. [/color][/font][/i]
[i][font=Century Gothic][color=gray] Sheryl, awake when the reunion took place, slipped out of the house and followed behind, concerned for his older brother and curios about what he ment when he'd said 'I don't care what you are'. Sheryl knew nothing of Damon, of course, he was left asleep when Damon had visited his brother. Sheryl witnesses his brother being bitten by Damon, turned into a vampire, and is spotted by them both. He makes it safely back to his home, locking the doors and windows, but is afraid, a year later, that he is going to be victimized by Damon for witnessing something no mortal should ever witness. Signs start coming up everywhere that Damon and Diath are on his trail. He is finnaly confronted by them one night, scared and alone in his own home which he used to share with one of the men standing across the room from him with hate in his eyes.[/color][/font][/i]
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[font=Century Gothic][color=#808080]Ha, I gave alot more than I thought I would....when I strted typing this, I was thinking of a set ending.....it's one thing Inever can get. Guess I got one now ^^;;[/color][/font]