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Please read the background even though it is long:

It all began in the year 2590 on the mother planet. People now lived out among the stars, some even traveled to distant galaxies returning with stories of wonderful planets. The Mother Earth was at peace, the people were happy, life was good. But on that one fateful day, July 4, 2590, fate turned against all of human kind. It started out with sightings of strange creatures, demonic like beast, usually from far away. Soon after these sightings, people began to disappear out of their beds, cars, and even stores. No one thought much of it though, there were too many people inhabiting the worlds anyways. But on July 4, 2590, people finally saw the terrors behind the disappearances of thousands of people.

Video footage was captured by satellite image of an isolated mountain fort. It was manned by 50,000 US Marines, 50,000 British Commandos, 50,000 Chinese honored guard, and 50,000 of Japan?s finest, the cream of the crop, armed with state of the art weaponry, from plasma guns to laser guns, they were armed to the teeth. On July 4, 2590 a roaming satellite spy system captured video footage of an attack upon the fort. At approximately 12 a.m. 30 strange demonic creatures surrounded the fort. Twenty-eight of them were human in size and the remaining two were larger than elephants. The soldiers began gathering on the walls of the fort, staring at the monstrosities. One soldier aimed a pulse cannon, a weapon capable of demolishing a large city, at one of the two larger creatures and fired. At first, everything was obscured by a boiling mass of smoke, and then after ten seconds the smoke cleared away. The monster still stood in the same spot as if nothing had happened.

The soldiers became agitated and worried, who wouldn?t be? They had just fired one of their most powerful weapons straight at a monster that was only 200 feet away and it didn?t even singe the monster?s hair. They brought up their next most powerful weapons, double-shot laser cannons, capable of destroying and melting mountains. They aimed two at each smaller monster and ten on each large one, they fired hoping that the monstrosities would just die. The beams struck dead center, melting the ground that the monsters were standing on but the monsters still stood, not a single one of their hairs harmed. The terror that filled each soldier was now apparent on the video. They brought up their most powerful weapons, the demoleculizers, capable of destroying whole planets atom by atom. They fired them at the monsters at full strength. Their most powerful weapon had absolutely no effect at all, just like every other gun they had tried. The soldiers knew that they were goners.

The monsters attacked. They moved so fast that the satellite was only barely able to show even a slight blur of each creature. The entire fort, manned by 200,000 of the best soldiers in the world, was over run in mere seconds by 30 monsters. The feast afterwards was too gory to show to the human public. Yet one piece of the video was important.

That piece showed humans what could harm the monsters. It was a young soldier, corned by one of the human sized monsters with nothing but a sword in hand. He was able to do what the most powerful firearm wasn?t able to do. He was able to cut the demon and slow it down with one kick before it reached and killed him. He showed the humans that only physical assaults and weapons from the old age were capable of doing any harm to the monsters.

But, the only problem was that people were not near fast or strong enough to kill any of the monsters, no matter how many people were pitted against each one.

After this video was broadcasted on every channel that existed, humans clamored for scientists to develop a new kind of human. Scientists developed new strains of humans that was stronger and faster than normal humans. These new types of humans were not perfect, they developed and grew into adulthood in a year but they died by the time they were twenty. Even these new people weren?t 1/50 as fast as or as strong as the slowest and weakest of the monsters. They were mass produce and thrown against the solid wall of monsters like unthinking puppets, failing miserably at their purpose in life. Scientists stopped engineering these prototypes and developed new and better super-humans. They kept it up for years, trying to hold back the monsters with newer and better super-humans. It was discovered by a few astrologists, in the year 3258, that not only did humans face these monstrosities on Earth, but a vast fleet of alien starships, that filled every telescope, was coming to the Milky Way Galaxy.

Now, its the year 3590 and scientists have finally engineered the perfect super-human, model A-999 or the Dorsia. This new breed of super-humans is capable of matching the fastest and strongest of the known monstrosities speed for speed and strength for strength. They also live longer than normal humans do, up to 200 years. They are able to heal themselves much quicker than any other super-humans and are extremely intelligent, each with an I.Q. of at least 250. They are taken from the numerous bio-tech centers when they are born and are immediately educated in large facilities scattered around the galaxy. They become efficient and cold killers, obeying orders from their normal human superiors. They are humanities only hope and also the most despised beings among humans.

Breakdown of story:
You have the choice of saving the humans or working to destroy them. Which one will you choose?

Sign up should be as follows:
Name:??
Age:??
Sex:?
Character description(includes personality): pic. isn?t necessary, good paragraph at least
Race: Human/ Super-human/ monster/alien
Abilities (max of 7) :Things in addition to the super speed and strength
Job:??(ship captain, government worker, soldier, navy seal, doctor, etc.)
Weapon of choice:??(mainly melee weapons)
Bio: basically want a character background, two 5 sentence paragraphs at least
Good/neutral/bad:

Options for Abilities:
Stealth-remain undetected until within arm reach of target

Enhanced Awareness- able to detect everything within a 2 mile radius, sense ambushes etc

Night Vision- can see everything even in the darkest places

Invisibility- become invisible but things may still be able to sense your presence

Eagle Eyes- able to see things clearly that are miles away (can spot a fly 4 miles away)

Sensitive Hearing- able to hear the slightest of sounds that are within a 30 mile radius

Sensitive Nose- can track anything, no matter how old the track is and can smell enemies within 40 miles

Telepathy- can communicate telepathically with anyone within 20,000 miles radius

Mind Control- able to control anyone for short periods of time

Berserker Fury- when close to death or in great pain, blind fury overcomes you increasing your strength and speed by twice its current stage, however, you lose all control and try to kill all within sight.

Resist Mind Control- not affected by mind control no matter how powerful the user is.

Increase/Decrease Size- significantly increases the size of your body therefore increasing strength but decreases speed.

Doppelganger- create up to 20 replicas of yourself, help you fight in battle, they disappear after a certain amount of time, can only use this twice a day

Sleep- cause enemy to fall asleep

Shape Change- change into anything for short periods of time

True eyes: See through any disguise

X-ray Vision- can see through walls or any obstacles

Stubborn Mind- focuses your attack on one enemy of your choosing and you can?t be killed until that target is dead, downside is that if any mortal wounds are received
during the fight, character dies after he/she dispatches the target

Spider Hands- gives you the ability to climb anything, hang upside down from
ciellings etc.

Breathe Anywhere- allows you to breathe in any atmosphere, in space with out a space suit, and under water.

Fly- allows the character to fly on planets and in space(requires space suit if the character doesn?t have the ability to breathe in space)

Hyper drive- slows time down, allowing the character using this ability to strike even
quicker or dodge attacks and approaching projectiles with ease. This only works for up to 10 seconds in real time, can only be used no more than 40 seconds every 2 minutes.

Recover- recover all of your energy, can only be used at full potency once every two days.

Revive- fully revives character from death without aid from medical machines, even if the character is chopped to bits and pieces, it puts them back together, automatically healing all wounds, can only be used twice in entire life.

Charm- Make anything of the opposite sex fall helplessly in love with the character using this ability for a short period of time, makes them lamb for slaughter. Can be used on only up to 2 targets at a time, can only be used 20 times a day.

The character I will be using:

Name: Jaru Yi (Alias- Shadow, Nickname-Ace)
Age: 16
Sex: Male
Description: 6?2?, 175 lbs.- He has short black spiked hair and mysterious gray eyes. He is extremely good looking and carries himself nobly. He usually wears a black trench coat with black shirt and black pants. He has a medium build, his muscles stand out and are cut. He has a perfect lean figure, with only 3% body fat. Sometimes he has an air about him that makes no one want to be near him because they fear what he might do. When he is angry it shows in his posture. His eyes seem to burn into the souls of whoever looks into them. He is a loner, isolating himself by pushing everyone away from him even though he yearns for attention. He rarely gets angry but when he does, the hairs on the bravest of men stand on end. He has a cold calculating mind. He kills without remorse but only kills when there is no other choice. With monsters and hostile aliens, however, he kills first and asks questions later.
Race: Super Human
Abilities: Stealth, Fly, Breath Anywhere, Hyper-drive, X-ray vision, Enhanced Awareness, True Eyes
Job: Vigilante
Weapons of Choice: Sword and his body
Bio: When he was still an egg cell in a test tube, a scientist, Hyrum Yi, stole him away from the growing facilities and took him into hidding. The scientist felt compassion for the test tube super humans and wanted him to try to have a normal life. He took him to his secret lab in the basement of his home. The scientist modified his genes, trying to make him normal, but unknowingly, he created an even more powerful version of the super humans that could not die from old age. Not only was he immune to old age, but his strength and speed were not finite. Hyrum didn?t know that his attempt to decrease Jaru?s natural powers, actually served to make Jaru even stronger. As he grew older, he would only get stronger and faster. The scientist, however, thought he had suceeded because at birth, Jaru showed no signs of being anything other than a normal human baby. The scientist raised him as if he was his blood son. The scientist was a rich man, he wanted Jaru to be able to protect himself against the monsters, so he hired the best of the martial arts teachers available to teach Jaru how to defend himself. His fighting lessons began when he was 4 years old.
They lived in peace, isolated from almost all humans for 12 years, the only people they saw were the masters and the maid who brought them food. But when Jaru was 13 years old, his whole world turned upside down. It was a stormy day, lightning flashed across the sky, Jaru and his adopted father sat around their fire, Hyrum was reading a story to him. They were almost done with it, Hyrum was turning to the last page when the electricity suddenly turned off. Hyrum told Jaru not to worry, even though he knew that it wasn?t the storm that had shut off the electricity. They had finally caught up to him. Jaru felt that something wasn?t right, somehow, he could sense other people around the house. It was during this time that his true self broke free of the shackles that Hyrum had placed on his genes while he was an egg cell.
Their home had been infiltrated by government agents, super humans sent to retrieve Jaru and kill Hyrum. They had been spying on the pair for years, they suspected that Hyrum had created a super human that was even better than the latest model, and they wanted him. The government wanted to dissect Jaru, they wanted to learn what made him even more powerful than the other super humans. But they needed to confirm their suspicions by sending 10 super humans to the house in an attempt to kill Hyrum and capture Jaru. The super humans broke through the windows and one knocked down a section of a wall. They surrounded Jaru and Hyrum. Hyrum tried to shoot them but the super humans kept dodging the bullets, calmly walking towards the pair. Jaru just curled up on the floor, tears of fear streaming down his face. ?Be calm my boy.? Hyrum told him. Jaru tried his best to stop crying. Hyrum continued to fire away at the super humans, trying to take at least one down with him. Jaru stayed huddles in a corner behind Hyrum. Suddenly Hyrum stopped firing, one of the super humans had stabbed him through the chest. The super human grinned at Jaru over Hyrums head.
That was when the real Jaru woke up. The tears stopped flowing from his eyes. He flew into a helpless rage, unknowingly going into hyper drive. He first tore off the grinning face of his dad?s killer, moving on to the next, sending his entire arm into the second super human?s chest cavity, tearing his heart out. He gruesomely dispatched all ten of the super humans, making them seem like sloths compared to his speed. To Jaru, hours seemed to fly by as he killed, but in reality only a few seconds had passed. When he killed the last super human by tearing its head off, his rage evaporated, leaving a dull husk behind. But he heard a voice, it was his dad. ?I?m so sorry son. I failed you. Please . . . don?t fall to evil. Use your abilities for good causes only . . . to hide your powers would only serve evil.? Hyrum whispered to him as he died, ?Flee, and go as far away as you can . . . take all of my wealth . . . so long son.? Hyrum died, leaving Jaru by himself.
Jaru went to work quickly. First he burried Hyrum in their backyard and gathered all of his money. Jaru fled, flying through the night. He ended up in a large city, 2,000 miles away from his former home. He bought a small hidden house where he lives in hiding, training himself and going out only at night.
Good/neutral/bad: Good
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OCC: this sounds like it is going to be a great story. Tell me if this is ok


Name:Sara Jane
Nickname:SJ
Age:16
Gender:Female
Job:runs free
Character description:She wears a long midnight blue leather coat over a white
t-shirt. She has on a pair of short and tight shorts. Her blonde hair is cut close to her head. Personality, She is real talkative. She can alays find the bright side of things she always can find somthing to smile about. She dosen't kill when possible but when it comes to alians and the monsters shr will strike hard. But when it comes to people and other super humans she finds it hard to kill them even though she is a master in combat fighting.
Wepon of choice: one long curved katanna sword
Race:Super-human
Abilities: Spider Hands, True Eyes, Telepathy, Eagle Eyes, Enhanced Awareness, Shape change, Night Vision.
Bio:When Sara was at the human age of 12 she broke out of the lab she was at and found her way to a monks home. He took her in and gave her a home for the remander of his life. While she was there she improved on her abilites and incresssed on her fighting skills. There he gave her the name Sara after his late wife and she took on his last name has if had always been hers. They told everybody that she was his grandaughterliving with him after her mothers death.

After three years the man decided that she had learned enough to move to the near by monistary. The night before they were to leave for the monistary a small group of monsters attacked. They were able to fight them off but not without many cuts and scrapes. Later that night when they had gotten all of the bodys had been discarded, they sat down to meditate the old man realised that she would need to go out to help others. To be on her own, so her gave her some money and she packed a bag. As she stepped out of the front door he grabed her arm and said the last thing she ever heard from him "If there is ever anything you my ever need head straight for the monistarys you'll find a large portion of monks ready to help."

For the next year she traveled all over the place training and helping others. Her stangeth and speed incressed. She traveled to as many monistarys that she could find as the man had promsed they were eager to help and support her. They all promised to always be there when she would need them most.
Side:Good
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Ooc: I always love being a bad guy! I hope this is okay with you.


Name: Kyu Shyn
Age: 24
Sex: Male
Description: Kyu wears a relatively new form of armor. His chestplate is brown, like the base of the rest of his armor, and has a magnetized back to carry some of his weapons on. He wears a black cloth material under all of his armor, and it is protruding only on his hands, neck, and joint areas. His arms' and legs' armor is also brown, with curved areas for the knees and elbows, the backsides of his hands are covered in the armor. His helmet consists of three glowing, rotating green opticals that allow him different form of vision, and he has no mouthpiece. Underneath his armor, Kyu is a pale athletic, black haired youth. Strangely, his eyes are naturally white, no iris or pupil to be seen.
Kyu's personality can been summed up pretty quickly: he barely has one. His devotion to his masters is all the real personality he needs, following orders to the letter, and making sure others do the same. He is ruthless, inhumane creature without a soul, and he's perfectly happy with his life.
Race: Super Human
Weapons: Twin-Blade sword, various daggers, built in katars in his armor, hands and feet, and a single omni-rifle that can fire a large range of munitions.
Job: Monster information gatherer/ Monster assassin
Abilities: Night Vision, Eagle Eyes, X-Ray Vision, Infra Red Vision, True Eyes, Mind Scan ((Ooc: You said that the other abilities were only examples, right? Just PM me to make me change it.) Mind Scan works a little like Mind Control, except that the victim remains motionless while the user probes his mind for vital information using key words. Lasts for 5 seconds, used only three times a day, range of 50 yards. Can't affect anyone with cybernetic brain enhancements, or who has a strong will.)
Bio: The invading Monsters weren't just mindless brutes. Some of them were extremely intelligent, or lucky, and were able to create their own breed of super-humans as soon as they captured one of the facilities. The Monsters then used these heritical humans as their eyes among the worlds, gathering information about troop deployments and high standing diplomatic leaders. Kyu was one of the first four super-humans, and is ranked as close as general among the Monster following humans.
The other three each took different paths, but Kyu took orders directly from his masters, killing anyone, no matter how insignificant. With the threat of the new, monster powerful super-humans, loyal to their creators as well, Kyu has a new task, to kill their leaders as quickly as possible. Ever since, he's had only six successful missions to eradicate the super-human leaders. They're stronger, faster, and deadlier than him, probably smarter, too. But he's more determined to be one of the only humans left to obey the Monster horde until his dying day. The masses don't yet accept the truth that there are corrupted humans in their midst, and this may be their downfall.

Lately, Kyu has been stuck following a particualr human. He's supposedly more powerful than any other like him, able to kill any monster or super-human. Kyu must find a way to bring him back to his masters for further assimilation into the horde. He hasn't tried to capture him yet, but he has a deadline to meet, deadline being a literal meaning.
Side: Bad
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