Writing All the Adversity [PG-LV]

[Retribution]

[SIZE=1]Here's another poem. It was exactly how I was feeling, so I can't really entertain crit like "You're trying too hard to be deep." It flowed from the pen. Nothing else.

[b]All the Adversity[/b]

"Cause sometimes you feel tired,
feel weak, and when you feel weak, you feel like you wanna just give up.
But you gotta search within you, you gotta find that inner strength
and just pull that shit out of you and get that motivation to not give up
and not be a quitter, no matter how bad you wanna just fall flat on your face and collapse."
~Eminem

Listen to my tears spilling through this pen
Transforming my soul to never get conquered again
Crying for the courage to look grim death in the eye
To be strong enough to shoulder my burden inside
To have the will to kill my inner-demon tonight

And my tears are flowing tonight so:

I welcome adversity to cross my path
Cause it'll get its infastructure collapsed
Raging wrath leaves its neck severed and snapped
Dismantle shadows of doubts, so they never attack
I was clever but cracked --
And my cowardice was a tether severed in the weather of black-ness.
Every final round was only a practice
My useless trump was a null-and-void tactic
Desparation was felt like kids in burning attics --

Too much reality

I wasn't good enough, wasn't worth it
Damaged merchandise wrapped up in a tourniquet
Had to pick up my pieces
Had to fight to the top
Had to pray to a Jesus
Iron out my soul in a knot.[/SIZE]