Persona Posted May 3, 2005 Share Posted May 3, 2005 [COLOR=Red][URL=http://www.geocities.com/hypnotic_beauty2003/denisse/File0006.jpg][COLOR=DarkRed]Hei?...spellers block[/COLOR][/URL] [URL=http://www.geocities.com/hypnotic_beauty2003/denisse/File0008.jpg][COLOR=DarkRed]Yoko Kurama[/COLOR][/URL] [URL=http://www.geocities.com/hypnotic_beauty2003/denisse/File0009.jpg][COLOR=DarkRed]CG[/COLOR][/URL] I'm no expert drawer...but I'm not bad either. Please give constructive criticism. i drew these last year in may. I had drawn new pictures...but my friend hasn't scanned them yet :animedepr Thank you, [I]Momo[/I][/COLOR] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Delta Posted May 7, 2005 Share Posted May 7, 2005 [COLOR=#95005E][SIZE=1][b]Kurama[/b] Very manga. Stick some tone paper and it'll pass off as a manga. Proportions = good (love the shoulders!); Style = amazing. It seems to me like you hesistated with the outlines. Maybe you could darken them and probably rub the pencil shading to create a smoother, crisper look. [b]8/10[/b] [b]Hiei[/b] Lovely. Lovely. This is the type of outline I'm looking for. Excellent body (sexah!) and the face is symmetrical. *falls in love* Alittle tweak with the way the hands are rendered (a bit out of perspective) and it'll be perfect! [b]9.5/10[/b] [/SIZE][/COLOR] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Persona Posted May 7, 2005 Author Share Posted May 7, 2005 [COLOR=DarkRed][QUOTE]Alittle tweak with the way the hands are rendered (a bit out of perspective) and it'll be perfect![/QUOTE] When I had started sketching out the hands, it had looked strange to me. I simply didn't like the way his hands came out. I do thank you for the comments..makes me happy to continue to draw. :animeblus I do agree heie looks sexy...lol...Well you take heie I'll take my yoko...[/COLOR] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest LilAngel12621 Posted May 15, 2005 Share Posted May 15, 2005 hi i'm 4rm america, i just have to say iz that i love anime drawings n i want to learn how to draw them so bad. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Syk3 Posted May 15, 2005 Share Posted May 15, 2005 [quote name='LilAngel12621']hi i'm 4rm america, i just have to say iz that i love anime drawings n i want to learn how to draw them so bad.[/quote]Hello, Angel, and welcome to OtakuBoards! If you look around the thread and rest of the forum, you'll notice that members generally put a little more detail into their post to help the artist improve his or her work. Please read [url=http://www.otakuboards.com/showthread.php?t=32738][color=dimgray]this thread[/color][/url] carefully for more information. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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