Guest animemainframe Posted June 10, 2005 Share Posted June 10, 2005 keyojin walks on as the skys pouring rain soak him to the bone escept for his automail arm and legs. he had lost them in a street fight against a state alchemist. Element is making craters in the ground trying to splash in puddles. keyojin is an alchemist and a mechanic. one day he was walking in the middle of nowhere because he was chased out of a town because he was a state alchemist equil in strength to the famous alchemist of the people Edward Elric. he was walking on a empty stomach and he had neither food nor water just walking on and on and on till he came to a giant boulder. he walked toward it and he found that it wasnt a boudler it was a robot that looked like a boulder it was shutdown so he did wat he did to pass time back home besides alchemy he tried to fix the robot. he succeded but it lost its memory files he had the personality of a 5 year old child he was named element by keyojin because he had the power of all elements including earth air metal water fire and many more. so that brings us up to date. keyojin just walking on for miles and element making craters in the ground. now element looks dangerous but only when he is in danger he shifts his personality he has no control over this it just happens when he is in critical danger. he acts as a 5 year old most of the time he just plays around asks questians and buggs the living hell outa keyojin. at this point they are just trying to find a town called valkor for official state alchemist business. so on walks keyojin and on jumps element :animeswea (couldnt think of anything oh by the way this is sorta a first for me so im just goin by ear) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arcadia Posted June 10, 2005 Share Posted June 10, 2005 [size=1][color=#cc6600]animemainframe, I think the best place for you to post something of this nature would be in the Anthology and not the Square. This forum is for active RPGs only. You'll get all the constructive criticism you need in the Arena Anthology. Also, please try to improve your spelling and grammar. You can run your posts through Word's spell check and then copy them onto the boards quite easily. This way you can catch your mistakes and also help keep threads looking clean and organized. Read through the stickies you find at the top of forums, as well. They contain very important information and will go a long way in helping you on the boards. - Arcadia[/color][/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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