Art A wallie I made

[Guest KittyAura]

Here's a wallpaper I made for a friend of mine on another site can you all tell me what you think?
[URL=http://img118.echo.cx/my.php?image=dreams9sk.jpg]http://img118.echo.cx/my.php?image=dreams9sk.jpg[/URL]
It's an abstract anime wallpaper so it's nothing fancy really :animeswea
When the window opens you can click on the wall to get the full view of it :animesmil

[PAche]

its great but maybe you could make the girl blend more into the background?

[sakurasuka]

[CENTER][SIZE=1]^ Yeah, she's sorta pixilated. Y'know, it's not bad, but she just doesn't have a nice edge. I'ts a good job on the background, though!

How long have you done graphics and what do you make them on? That makes a difference in how I critique.

Well, here are my other problems with this piece. First off, the words are just as pixelated as the edge of the stock. The stock itself is nice, but it really doesn't go with the blurry bg. Maybe if she was sofened up some, or you made the cloud-thingies sharper they wouldn't contrast as much.

This is a great wallpaper, nonetheless. You're not bad![/SIZE][/CENTER]

[Retribution]

[SIZE=1]Here we go:

Hey, It's not half bad, I'd say. I like the clouds and the positioning of everything. But things look pixelated, and looks as if things were resized to fit size requirements. If that hadn't happened, this would've been pretty good. The font would been bigger and more crisp, and the stock would be more defined. In closing, just make sure you don't have alot of empty space in your wallpapers, and you'll go far![/SIZE]

[komugi-chan]

Wow! That's really good(of course)! I love it! And I see that on the bottom it is dedicated to AngelKate? Aww! That's so sweet! Omg! Your kitten from MT, aren't you? I never thought you'd join this site! Nice to meet you! I hope you like it here at OB! Ja nee~ :animesmil