Guest Kakashi-San Posted June 25, 2005 Share Posted June 25, 2005 Here some Signatures of mine please give some Comments Not ony jeah thats good or oh thats bad, i want to hear what is good or bad on the image. Link one of my favourite Charakter [IMG]http://img153.echo.cx/img153/4715/link9ba.jpg[/IMG] Zone of the Enders :) [IMG]http://img162.echo.cx/img162/55/zote0wy.jpg[/IMG] Killzone (ps2 game) [IMG]http://people.freenet.de/AgCclan/KillZone1.jpg[/IMG] and two Naruto Signatures [IMG]http://people.freenet.de/AgCclan/GreenBeast1.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://people.freenet.de/AgCclan/KakashiSig1.jpg[/IMG] [URL=http://wallpapers.theotaku.com/artist.php?id=109816&sort=popularity&type=desc]Here are some Wallpaper (from me)[/URL] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nomad Posted June 25, 2005 Share Posted June 25, 2005 [COLOR=DimGray][SIZE=1]Some well done signatures you've got there. [B]Dark Link[/B]: The background is well done, but the colours of the background and Link don't match as they could. The font "Dark Link" doesn't seem to fit well. It may look better to change the font and add a border/drop shadow to make it stand out more. The "Kakashi-San" font is somewhat the same way. The font is alright, and may fit well if you could make it stand out just a bit more. I don't think "Dark Style" fits anywhere on the image with the font and colour you have chosen. [B]Zone of the Enders[/B]: I like this one more than the Dark Link one. The background and character image's colours match well with each other, as do the fonts' drop shadows. Both of the sets of text seem to not stand out well enough to catch the attention (more-so with the Kakashi-San text). Only thing I could suggest is to add a wider dropshadow, and/or make the colour of it darker. [B]Killzone[/B]: This one is by far my favorite of these. The background and character, once again, match each other well, and this is the best (colour wise) I've seen out of these. The placement of the character and texts are good. The "Kakashi-San" text could use a slightly better drop shadow/outline. The "Killzone" text is great, but where the background drops down into the lighter colours, it's harder to see the text. I think you could add a outer shadow or a drop shadow just to outline the harder to see parts of the text. [B]Konohas Green Beast[/B]: Background and character colour matching is decent, and so is the font colour choice. The image of Lee is really the only thing that irks me about this one. The motion blur-type affect seems to be taking away from it. Don't know. Also, the space between "Konohas Green Beast" and "Lee" is a bit too large. No real center of attention to be given on this one. It's balanced on both sides, which isn't always a good thing. This is the best attempt at doing your fonts I've seen. Easy to see, and the colours match very well with everything else. [B]Hatake Kakashi[/B]: The Kakashi image, background and fonts all match (colour-wise) very well. The outlining of the image of Kakashi is a little choppy around his fingers, and seems to have been cut off right next to his pinky finger. The "Hatake Kakashi" font is very well done. The outline and difference in colour makes it stand out enough to be seen. The "Kakashi-San" text doesn't stand out well enough, but would be alright if it would stand out a bit more. The image in the background is also a good choice to match the colours and mood of the signature. So yea. Only thing I think you should work on is your font choices and how to make them stand out well enough not to be overlooked, and adding borders helps out alot with the overall look of the banner, especially when they have brighter backgrounds. Very well done. Hope to see more from you in the future. :animesmil Oh, and welcome to OB. :D [/SIZE][/COLOR] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Retribution Posted June 25, 2005 Share Posted June 25, 2005 [SIZE=1]I don't think I'll individually critique each banner. I'll just give you a more general analysis. For all of your banners, you have a character on one side or another, with typography balancing things out. I'll start out saying that you're pretty good (assuming you didn't use pre-made brushes). Try blending in your stocks more than just the blend mode options -- try the smudge tool, lowering opacity, and other things. The last thing I'm going to touch upon is that you really shouldn't rely on typography to balance out the banners. It makes things look hollow/empty, and bland. Make typography secondary, and place your work first. Good luck in the future.[/SIZE] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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