Manga Kiss of Redemption: The Recantation(magna in development please tell me what u think)

[So-Seductive]

I also have a manga in the works called Kiss of Redemption: The Reincarnation, its about the rebirth of a 3 dragon races...that where at war with one another...I am still at work on this...this is but a fragment of what the story will be about...I have so much more that I want to add...and im still trying to develop the perfect charactor to carry this out


[b]They have three stages of tranfomation

1. (stage one human figure, still more advanced then human...faster,can see father,senses thing, 10x stronger)

2. (stage two, almost demonic form, fangs,long nails,wings,eyes change color. They are able to use 20% of there true hidden powers )

3.( stage three, full dragon form, can use 100% power very rear tranformation only the strgong will be able to do this)[/b]



[Dragons of the Ancients] Ancient Dragons are the second largest of the dragon race. They're 12x's stronger then the dragons of heaven. They have been around for centauries and are very peaceful race. Ancient dragons are known for there demonic gold, red and silver eyes. They have black scales and large black feathered wings. They have the Ability to transform into humans at will; they also have the ability to cast powerful dark magic spells and can do instant teleportation.

[Dragons of the Celestial] Celestial Dragons are the second strongest in the dragon race. They are smaller then the Ancients and have been around several centauries, But not as old and wise the as the Ancients. Celestial Dragons are know for there pearly white scales, large transparent bat like wings and bright colorful eyes .They have the Ability to transform into humans as well, They also can cast powerful white magic spells and can fly at impeccably fast speed.

[Legend of Dragons of Earthen]
Once a peaceful race, they believed in the beauty of the earth. They believed that the earth,rocks , trees and every living creature had a pure soul. They had the power to grow and restore life. They are as old as the ancients and as powerful. Centuries past they lived in peace until the earth opened and called to the. They followed the voice and ended up at the gates of hell; King Aka-mura was drawn into its powerful aura and touched the forbidden gates. The gates opened and a black plague formed the around the isles of the earthen. The plague tainted the minds of each dragon with its evil oracle. The dragons of Earthen now are now known as the Dragons of Forsaken a race known for death and destruction.

[Legend Dragons of the Forsaken] Once known as the peaceful Earthens, the Forsakens are race of Dragons tainted by the evil oracle of the gates of hell. They desired only power and hatred for one another. They killed each other off until the race was almost extinct. They are slightly larger the then Ancients and are a little bit stronger. No one has ever seen what they look like but legend is that they are prehistoric looking red scaled dragons, with black eyes and medium sized red demon like wings. They have the power to shape shift to different forms and manipulate others powers. They are enemies to all and wish to see the world in chaos.

[The wandering Saints]
They are wandering souls of saints who were sent to earth by the gods to find the guardians of the blessed keys. They must find the guardians before the forsaken do and recollect the keys so the holy gates won?t be opened by the wrong hands. They want all the dragon races extinct.

[The blessed Keys of the holy gates]
They are three Keys filled with the blood of the gods. Each key was divided up between the dragon races. The first key ?key of the past? was given to the Ancients, the second; ?Key of the present? was given to the Earthens and the third ?key of the future? was given to the celestial. The keys can only be used by the hands of a dragon.

[The Holy of Gates Heaven] the holy gates are linked to the heavens, once opened the world will be revolutionized to womb ever desires it to be. Meaning it will be destroyed and rebuilt by the hands of the key holders. If they are opened by the wrong hands the world will be destroyed and rebuilt in pure chaos.

[The Forbidden Gates of Hell] The gates of hell are linked to pure evil that wishes to rule the world and the heavens. The only way the gates can be opened is if the world is destroyed and rebuilt in chaos. The keys of the holy will turn black with dark energy and form the keys of the damned witch will enable the forsaken to open the gates.


[u]some of the characters in the works[/u]

The Forsakens
Aka-Mura(Male)
Prince Seji -Kamlyn(Male)
Maiya(female)
Akeno(Male)

The Ancients
Prince Tansei Ryuujin(male)
Ichiro Keiji(male)
Hara Shoda(Male)
Toyo Haru(Female)

The Celestials
Princess Hisa-Takara
Princess Hisa-Kohana
Hira-Renjiro
Ichi-Makoto


Was gonna use this for a role playing game...but my mother said I should make a comic out of it...personally I don't think its good enough...neither is my art work...i will post the cover of it up...I don't plan on having it publish because I don't think it would sell...this is being done for fun...

[b]HERE A LIL BIT ABOUT HOW THE MANGA WILL START OFF[/b]

[i]The gods weep convulsively for their beloved Ancients, tears of blood spilled from the sky and the world shook with their sorrow. The walls of the holy towers crumbled and the marbled floors cracked. The world shall soon end and once again be reborn?Flash...

I shall heal all that once was destroyed with my kiss of redemption?let the gods fall from the heavens and redeem all that was once at chaos; flourish the world with seeds of beauty and tranquility. No longer shall the darkness corrupt the minds of the innocents, for the light of the holy gates pours upon us in a blanket of
solace?.Flash?.[/i]

Darkness filled the room rapidly discarding all what little was left of light. There he lay
silently in dormant, thick strands of unruly purple black hair lay in a disarray along the cresses in the duck down feathered pillow. His fine carved features softened as his thin yet long lashes flutter slightly. He tossed and turned restlessly in his sleep, as disturbing images recollected upon one another creating a world he traveled to each and every night. The moon shown brightly threw the darken skies as each star lit up with each step he took. The wind swept pass him caressing the long stands of his unbound main, whispering gently in his ear as it passed threw him. You have finally come back to my sweet...how I?ve missed you so. Dominic came to a sudden halt as his slanted amethyst eyes narrowed, and his lips parted with distaste. The breeze washed elaborately over him once again like strong wave crashing into the shore. His throat was seemingly dry; but it still did not oppress him for what he had to say, his voice was deep and lifeless.?Who the hell are, you show your self...? He demanded, as his violet hues scanned over the vivid green scenery searching for any sign of life or movement. A ghostly figure of a women formed before him, she reached out to him lovingly letting her fingers seep threw his warm skin. A chill ran down his spine like electricity running threw a wire, he turned his gaze meeting her pale eyes and abnormally translucent face. She was strikingly beautiful despite her crystalline form. She tilted her head to the side and smiled delicately ,?You have come back to me my prince? she mutters with eyes shining brighter then diamonds reflecting light off the sun . His eyes widen momentarily flickering with a hint curiously. His thin but well shaped lips began to move with out thought, as he reached out to her uttering soft words.? What are you...? he rasped watching as his fingers glided threw her limpid form. She laughed light heartedly and smile at him seductively ?fallow me my love and ill show you...? she replied gingerly. Dominic was enchanted by her silky voice, he felt weak and venerable. He couldn?t move is body and his mind lay in a daze, she motioned for him to follow her and he did. His body staggered threw the dark forest, the only light he could see was that of the moons and her silverily aura guiding him along the shrubs and large bushes. His body ached as it he had been traveling for several days. The women glanced back at him with a reassuring smile ?soon you shall see what the gods have in store for you my beloved? her voice was laced heavy with deceit. The forest was unnaturally silent; all that could be heard was her soft humming and twigs snapping under his feet from his body weight. The scent of fresh water and pine trees flooded his senses. Dominic?s body came to a abrupt stop, his violet colored orbs narrowed to slits as he dropped to knees. A pool of dark purple hair spilled around his shoulders and hung in his delicate face, his long bangs tumbled into view as his eyes down cast to the dirt. His body broke out into a cold sweat and jolted in fear. He griped at the earth, letting his nails dig deep into the dark soil as if to brace himself. Each breath he took was shallow, and striving desperately of air. The ghostly figure smiled smugly to herself, she had accomplished what she was sent out for. Dominic rolled his eyes back up to the translucent figure with hate. ?*****...? he spat out with anger, ?WHAT HAVE YOU?VE DONE TO ME...? he demanded. She gazed at him momentarily before letting her head roll back into shrieking laughter. Dominic gritted his teeth with rage, he still couldn?t move his arms in legs. She began to move towards him in a slow stride her eyes never wavering from his. She knelt before him bringing her face close to his ear. ?Sh... my pet you will soon be set free? she whispered, pulling back letting her lips brush up against his. There was no warmth or physical feelings in the kiss, just a cold tangling feeling nipping at the flesh of his tender lips. A strong gust of wind swept pass them taking her airily form with it, she swayed with the breeze lifelessly her eyes closed basking in it. Dominic watched wide eyed as the wind washed out into the center of the lake coming to a stop. Her body began to glow brighter then before, as she floated inches from the surface of the water. Leaves and random flower petals streamed around her twisting and turning around her translucent figure. She began to hum once again, her voice carrying out each note with such elegance. Her eyes shot open and every thing ceased, the leaves and flowers fell like a halo around her. Both her arms reached out and her head lolled back, as her body plunged backwards and bursting into little sparkling orbs before hitting the cold water dissolving. The large lake lit up with a mysterious white glow, as one ripple multiplied into several spreading across the water like a plague. Dominic let out a ragged breath as he watched the lakes cryptic glow begin to wan. His body was still very tense but he was beginning to get feeling back in his legs and arms. The ripples faded out as well and the lake once more became placid as the surroundings around it. Dominic managed to stand up fully, his body weight shifted on his right foot to steady him self. His arms lay at his sides and his head sank; he felt heavily sedated and could barely hold up his own frame. His body wavered slightly as he tread towards the lake. He gazed into the calm water as if to search for the women?s ghostly figure, but none came to sight. The water reflected his handsome sullen face, his hair lay matted and plastered to his pale skin. His violet colored eyes were slanted and brimmed with long lashes, his lips thin but very well curved were clamped shut. He stood there fleetingly his eyes screening over every inch of the lake. He still didn?t find anything to his liking, he turned his back on the lake and began to head back towards the dark forest. TO BECONTINUED....grammer/spelling is bad...I know...this is just a rough draft!!!

[Persona]

[COLOR=DarkRed]Well, glad to see that you deiced to bring this idea back. Of course i'll be working upon this myself (Since we talked on the phone). The idea is wonderful and very beautiful. The only thing that needs to be done is our organization and confirmation upon doing this. Due to the fact, we had this idea runnig as an rpg for OB, but my b-friend and I got cuaght up in our own ideas and images for this magna that we put more though into it and decided it's not suitable for rpg. But soon after....like always we left it alone :animeangr. She and of course I would love for the fellowm members of OB to comment upon our idea and story.[/COLOR]