Writing Tasty Liquids [PG - Pun]

[Guest Sean]

[SIZE=1]I haven't wrote a poem in quite a while so I've changed my style and came up with this, I found it amusing, so I do hope you do.
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[b]Tasty Liquids[/b]

As the liquid slides slowly down my throat
The spasms continue and I have more
The steam starts to rise and float
A life like this isn?t a bore

Sitting on this here boat
Again the liquid hit?s the score
Hitting every note
In the excitement some fall upon the floor

Sucking gently on top
Then finally I let it drop
It falls upon the bowl below me
And I wipe my mouth slowly

And he says to my direction,
That was one hell of a concoction
I laugh and return to the cooker
Putting more in a bowl
Like a little soup hooker

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[SIZE=1]Ah, so, constructive critiscm if you may. I may go and have some soup now...[/SIZE]