Al-araaf Posted October 10, 2005 Share Posted October 10, 2005 I have decided to post some of my poetry. Just so I can get some critism, suggestions, and feed back from people I do'nt know. Also feel free to post poetry of your own if you would like. I know none of you will like it since it barly makes sence but i'll do it anyway. NOTE: I wil have to censor quite a bit because someone may find it "offensive" Hope Long ago my hope left Will it ever return to me completly Hope What did I do to lose you All night memories of a past I hoped to forget haunt me I hoped for joy I hoped for love I hoped I was adopted But whenever you cross my mind hope returns for a short time You are what gives me light and small doses of hope It sucks I know but i'm still practicing, I just started writing recently and a few people I know said they like it but they were probly just giving me false encouragement. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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