Sign Up Justice City [M-VLS]

[Blayze]

[size=1]I think you're somewhat missing the point, digiX. Your last two posts, complaining that you didn't get in, have had appaling grammar and punctuation. From that, I don't have reasonable grounds to give you another try, whether it is editing your current sign-up [b]or [/b]deleting it and creating an entirely new one.

So, I'm sorry, digiX, but there is no way I can let you into this RP. I just think the level of writing ability shown here would bring me to believe that you would bring the quality of the RP down a few notches.

And as for the rest of you who didn't get in, improving your sign-ups is not going to give you a chance to get in. If you can't provide a sign-up of reasonable quality on your first go, then it shows that you are not as interested in this RP as I would perhaps hope, instead bashing off a sign-up haphazardly. I don't want the quality of writing in this RP to be brought down at all.

I'm sorry, but that is the way I work.
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[digiX]

ok I'm sorry for complaining I wanted to be in this really bad I just have a hard time with grammar and such its not that I am lazy its just hard for me sorry wraith.

PS

I edited my post just in case you have a change of heart

[Tigervx]

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I've already spoke to Wraith via PM and he agreed that a normal person could be accepted, so here's my characters profile.

(Nickname): The Cane Man

Real Name: Canku (AKA Ku) Kwong

Current Occupation: Police Chief, part time bar owner.

Place of Birth: China, Shang hai,

Marital Status: Widowed

Height: 6?3

Weight: 178 lb

Eye Color: Hazel Brown

Hair Color: Light Grey

Hair Length: Trimmed down to his neck.

Clothing: A dark brown open trench coat accompanied by black slacks and a plane white dress shirt. He wears a simple brown hat with a inconspicuous label reading ?POLICE? scribbled on it. An oriental dragon cane is often grasped in his right hand, carved with great care in Beijing.

Personality: A usual calm and quiet man, its not to hard to compromise with such a man nor is it to deal with. However such a man has set limited, and should one break such limits you will see the brunt force of what is left in old man.

Character History: Born on September 28th 1945, Ku was born right at the end of the great Sino-Japanese war that rocked both China and Japan. His father was a veteran Chinese Nationalist soldier in one of the few remaining elite German trained divisions, and his mother a farmer?s daughter whom he met in the countryside during the battle of Shanggao. Within the war scarred port city of Shang hai they raised him as best they could, but fate seems never to kind to the people of China as the Revolution struck in a red tide just two years later.

With the ROC seemingly powerless to stop them, all the loyalist were forced to exodus the country or face the reprisals of the communist victors. As the family desperately fled the mainland they crossed onto the coastal island of Quemony, which they thought safe with thousands of ROC soldiers rallying in the location. There again they tried their best to raise Canku in an atmosphere of terror, of course terror is never unjust. Within another couple years, the PRC began bombarding Quemony with artillery, eventually killing the Kwong couple who were out walking towards the local fish vendor.

An American news reported had been close friends with the Kwongs and was deeply troubled by the event. He took Canku, whom was now an orphan, and returned to the United States were his wife and himself raised the child as their own. Canku quickly grew to a very tough and respectful child who eventually enlisted in the army to fight in Vietnam, winning a silver star for covering a South Vietnamese platoon retreating by manning a burning vehicle in the Tet Offensive.

Eventually returning from the war, he became a police officer and quickly climbed the ranks. A higher up noticed such talent and suggested to him that there was a new city that boasted an unbeatable police department, inquiring that Ku should be reassigned there. Such a transfer soon happened and he was assigned to Sergeant of the Justice City Police Department. Too bad he came during the eye of the storm, just within a few weeks of his transfer the Anarchy Riots broke out.

Local crime bosses and terrorist groups let loose such a chaotic mess that the JCPD finally cracked. With thousands of rioters running rampant, fire bombs going off, and local thugs battling it out with police, the department collapsed. The Captain, the Lieutenants, most of the Sergeants were assassinated over the course of the week long riot. The federal?s were forced to call in the 101st Airborne and the 1st Infantry to restore order, and once they left everything was still in shambles. With Canku being one of the few Sergeants still left alive, he assumed Chief of the department and quickly took what was left and grabbed some more. He demanded more firepower from the federal government, more funding, and more equipment. His crackdowns crowned him the nick name ?Cane Man.? Not only for his ornate cane he carries, but for his ruthless discipline of the city.

Despite all these efforts however, Justice City is far from safe. The JCPD can?t get enough recruits and is horribly undermanned. Crime is still rampant, super villains literally control sectors of the city, and the police can barely hold downtown. Its a long haul for this old man, but who else is going to drag it through?

Special Skills: Expert detective, Master of the martial art of Xing Yi Quan.

Weapons/Gadgets: A HK-G36-C is always attached to his belt under his trench coat along with a Vikhr SR-3 submachine gun.


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