Art SPX revealed

[SaiyanPrincessX]

[SIZE=1]Oh my, a thread from teh SPX. Its been months since I posted a thread, or so it seems.

Anyway, here is recent piece of artwork I'd like to indulge your senses with. It is suppose to be me. :animeknow

Please give me some good C/C.

Er, forgive me, you must go to DA to view it, stupid size limit. ¬_¬
[url]http://www.deviantart.com/view/26372926/[/url][/SIZE]

[r2vq]

I like your style a lot.
The two things I have to point out first are the hand, and the neck. The hand doesn't look very right, and the neck seems a little strange, but it might just be the shoulders... or it may just be that I'm tired.

I think the detail at the bottom and the sleeves of the sweater look nice, but it makes it seem like the bottom of the pants need more detail.

Like I said, I like your style, and it would be shway to see this inked.

-Arvi

[Ezekiel]

[SIZE=1]First of all: omfg, the pants are love.

I like your style, too, but there's a couple of points I'd like to point out.

With the hand, I agree with r2vq in that it looks a little off, I do believe it's because the positioning of where you're started the thumb and where the knuckles are is out of proportion, which makes the hand look too big when in actual fact, the thumb and knuckles are too far back. The 'back of the hand' should be longer and the wrist should be more defined. It?s a simple mistake; I do it a lot too. x.o

Also, the face looks a little too wide to me, but that could be your style so I'm not going to say it's wrong. I know people's style varies so maybe I'm just being picky. ^_^;

Apart from that, I love the pic. The position is interesting and you have lovely little details on the clothes. I hope you don't mind, but I'd like to watch you on devART. ^_^

[B]Edit:[/B] Just looked at the pic again, and I think the reason why I thought the face was too wide is because of the position/width of the neck. My mistake, sorry. x.x[/SIZE]

[SaiyanPrincessX]

[SIZE=1]Yes the neck is too small and the hand is screwed up. Heh. With the hand, I knd of just slapped that on, so I wasn't really putting much into that. :animestun

Thank you for the comments/critiquing.[/SIZE]

[Boo]

[size=1]Apart from that the neck and hand are awkward, I can't really see anything to stop me from saying this is a really nice picture. Great job, Ninja lass.

[spoiler]By the way: I like lemon/apple pie.[/spoiler] [/size]