Manga my manga

[blackfireknight]

im currently writing my own manga. Its called "Order of the Phoenix" and no i didnt rip that of Harry Potter. It takes place 20 years from now in japan. There are 6 main characters. Each has the ability to control and minipulate a diffrent element. the prolog helps to bring the story up to speed. its kind of funny and serious at the same time.

[cyborg715]

well lets see here you may want to change some things such as the elemental munipulaters um you dont want to make an empression like its a rip from avatar the last airbender

[blackfireknight]

[quote name='cyborg715']well lets see here you may want to change some things such as the elemental munipulaters um you dont want to make an empression like its a rip from avatar the last airbender[/quote]

thanks for the advice. its more like my charaters use their individual elements to increse their own fighting abilitys

[Chikara Kokoro]

Perhaps you ought to change the name though, even if it's just a subtle change (ex Order of the Kelpie, or whatever). If you have to explain that you didn't steal the name, perhaps you should scrap the name altogether, no? Also, make sure that the character's personalities don't correspond with the elements they're using because that is very overdone and cliqué (in my opinion the whole elemental thing is overused, but if you can do it well, then that's fine)

[blackfireknight]

i like the use of elements because they can represent personalitys. like fire could represent a hot head, but the person who controls fire in my story is cool and collected