Writing Dusty DW And The Otaku Kid [PG-13]

[TheShinje]

[color=crimson] [dialect=western] Good stuff there DW, as always.

That had me in stitches most of t he time I was reading it,but that's because I exploed with laughter and had to be sewn together again, nevertheless, despite my pain at having blown up, it was a truly witty piece.

You've got a true talent for random comedy, the Syk3 multpile deaths and random exploding cars, not to mention the out-of-nowhere talking bear, were by far some of the wittiest occurences ever written about.

Now, all you need is a little Shinje in your final chapters, and you'll have a classic for the ages!

Reading this great story enticed me to pick up my pen again. But then I blew it up since I use my keyboard to type and the pen was only a stereotypical figure to get the true message of the last sentence across.

Good stuff if I haven't said that already, good.[/dialect][/color]