Writing Choke [PG, S,V]

[sakurasuka]

[SIZE=1]I think I'll keep a collection of my [terrible] poetry here. Fun, fun.

[B]Choke [My last suicide note][/B]

You [i]choke[/i] down your misery.
I [i]choke[/i] down your lies.
You [i]choke[/i] down your medication.
The only thing left keeping us alive.

[INDENT][i]Do you even care?
Do you even understand?[/i][/INDENT]

The blade pierced my flesh.
There is no more [i]pain.[/i]
There are no more [i]tears.[/i]
There is no more [i]time.[/i]

[INDENT][I]Calling out one last time.
Choking now, on my own blood.[/I][/INDENT]

Don't tell me you love me.
[I]It's too late.[/I]
You can't take back the past.
[i]This is the end.[/i]



That's all for now. Comment, if you so wish.[/SIZE]

[2010DigitalBoy]

That was quite interesting. I take it the speaker had killed themself at the end, right? I liked it a lot, especially the stuff after the first stanza. I'd be interested in seeing more of your work.