Writing the collected collage [E]

[Mitch]

There's something about the way you look at me
I can see it in your eyes
It's something I don't know, and I wonder if I want to
That look is cemented in my memory

So as I lay there yesterday
Before it became tomorrow which is today
My thoughts wandered everywhere
Not letting me fall asleep

In my head I spun a new world
Where different events made different lives
A world where I said, "You want do something sometime?"
A world where I asked, "What would you like to do?
"What do you like to do?"

And like the sun, rising every day
From a dead yesterday and new today
You said, "Yes" when I know
Like the collected collage of women
I secretly loved but never did
You would turn your eyes and say, "No."

And like the moon, deep in night
From a dead yesterday and a somber night
I would stand in the sky, lunar and cratered
Alone as I have been forever

[2010DigitalBoy]

Your work always stuns me with it's awesomeness, but this one was probably my favorite. The forth stanza, epecially, was great, specifically the line "You would turn your eyes and say 'no' " I liked that. I don't know if it was meant to, but I felt the tone of an Edgar Alan Poe story which I also liked. Brilliant, I can't wait for your next one!