Art Final Fantsay AMVS

[BanditJing]

i made 2 amvs and wanted to know some feed back their both from final fantsay advent children

here is my first amv i made
[url="http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vNo8ui5z87g"]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vNo8ui5z87g[/url]

second (not as good in my eyes)
[url="http://www.youtube.com/w/Final-Fantsay-Advent-Children%3AAMV?v=abS5yKw2tqA"]http://www.youtube.com/w/Final-Fantsay-Advent-Children%3AAMV?v=abS5yKw2tqA[/url]
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[color=teal]EDIT:[/color] o ya it may look bad but on my comp its fine cause on youtube its UGLY when i upload it so if u wana get it but better talk to me on aim at Nogoodname90

[color=teal]EDIT AGAIN:[/color] [url="http://video.freevideoblog.com/player.aspx?fileid=AE24ACD4-0D04-4E6D-99B6-BE4AE86FCDE6"]http://video.freevideoblog.com/player.aspx?fileid=AE24ACD4-0D04-4E6D-99B6-BE4AE86FCDE6[/url] try that for first one better

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[Retribution]

[size=1]Well, I really do prefer the second one to the first. The first one seems a bit disjointed - as in the music doesn't really match up well with the visual cues, whereas in the second (at least in the beginning) Cloud's motions match the beat.

Also, the first AMV has alot of dead space in it ... there's too much pause where the music doesn't call for it, and at some places, it's just too slow. Try cutting up the clips more, splicing them in with other clips instead of just having big chunks of video, as it gets boring that way.

Keep it up![/size]

[BanditJing]

ok thanks ill try :D