Writing OB: Survivor Game On! - Talkback [PG-LV]

[JJ]

[Color=DarkBlue][B]Samus and the Metal Hand[/B]

[B]Diddy Kong[/B]: Hoohoo! It?s me! Diddy Kong! I?m the host of the show!

[B]Producer[/B]: Diddy! Once more with more feeling.

[B]Diddy[/B]: I?m give you one more time with a banana where the sun don?t shine.

[B]Producer[/B]: Hey, just because you didn?t make Survivor and now you have to talk with everyone that?s been deleted doesn?t mean you can get snippy with me. Besides, I know a certain pretty boy that?d love your job?

[B]Diddy[/B]: Whoohoo! It?s me! Diddy Kong! I?ve been chosen to host this year?s edition of, ?Talkback?. Our first guest tonight is?

[B]Producer[/B]: Samus Aran.

[B]Diddy[/B]: Samus Aran! Let?s welcome the bit?I mean bounty hunter.

[I]Samus walks on stage, her visor still up. She walks up to her seat and sits down, noticing the empty chair beside her.[/I]

[B]Samus[/B]: Who?s the other chair for?

[B]Diddy[/B]: What the?That?s for your guest you were supposed to bring with you.

[B]Samus[/B]: I?m a bounty hunter. Why would I bring any with me? I kill most people I know at one point or another anyway.

[B]Diddy[/B]: (in secondary microphone) You have to be kidding me. I?m not going to do work like this!

[B]Producer[/B]: You stupid monkey. You?re on live right this very second. GET BACK TO THE SHOW!

[I]Diddy chuckles nervously and grabs a banana from the bowl sitting on his desk.[/I]

[B]Samus[/B]: Where?d that desk come from?

[B]Diddy[/B]: I?m the host here and with that in mind, I make/read the questions, understood?

[I]Samus lowers her visor and the male audience swoons.[/I]

[B]Samus[/B]: This things always loaded. Don?t you dare push me you little?monkey.

[I]Samus locks her cannon in the ?loaded? position. Diddy laughs.[/I]

[B]Diddy[/B]: Right. Well, anyway, Samus, how was it being on a team with the same people the entire time?

[B]Samus[/B]: Ling and Ada and I seemed to become really great friends through the entire thing. Voting off Mitsi and Dante was hard and I almost felt sorry for CJ after he voted off after the Pokemon challenge.

[B]Diddy[/B]: On that note, you seemed to not catch a whole lot of Pokemon in that challenge, any reason why?

[B]Samus[/B]: I did not want to ?catch ?em all.?

[I]Samus put the phrase in quotation fingers, causing Diddy to giggle.[/I]

[B]Diddy[/B]: What did you think of the opposing team? The Heroes, I mean.

[B]Samus[/B]: They were a bunch of pushovers who couldn?t find their way out of a paper bag. We kicked their butt in every challenge up until the race, in which they had an advantage.

[B]Diddy[/B]: Yeah, that vote put you here in this seat right now.

[B]Samus[/B]: The guys won?t see this until afterwards, correct?

[B]Diddy[/B]: I guess you had better hope that.

[I]Samus, with a smile on her face, aims her arm cannon and fires it directly at Diddy, causing him to duck. Samus clicked her visor over her head once more as she begins to fire into the audience, at Diddy, and even the camera man[/I]

[B]Samus[/B]: I?ll stop when I got the promise that my last statement'll be stricken from the record.

[B]Diddy[/B]: OK, OK! Whatever you say.

[I]whispered[/I] stupid crazy biatch.

[B]Samus[/B]: You saw what happened to CJ, now I can finally beat someone down!

[I]Samus jumps up and down as she begins to chase Diddy down.[/I]

[B]Diddy[/B]: CUT THE FEED! CUT THE FEED!

[B]Producer[/b]: No can do. This is too good. Have fun my monkey friend, this is your last show.

[I]As the screen fades black, Diddy is shown, flipping the camera off. His face quickly changes as Samus?s metal coated hand meets his face.[/I]

[B]Kirby[/B]: Next time, on Talkback! We?ll talk with Mitsurugi, the first idiot..I mean player that was deleted. I?ll be your host!

[I]Kirby tries to look as cute as possible as the commercial ends. The screen fades to black and you change the channel.[/I][/color]

[Color=Indigo]This is the first in a list of hopefully 16 interviews that I?d like to write for each ?deleted? player of Game On!. Now, of course this one was a bit off, but you got to know, Samus just got back into the real world, she?s still out of it. ;) All the new ones?ll be a bit crazy and that makes it all the more fun.

If anyone's interested at all, post a comment. If you don't like it, tell me where I can better myself. Comments are wanted. :>

PS: If you have a question you want me to ask mitsurugi, post it. I'll take the best two or three along with a couple of my own each interview.[/Color]

[Charles]

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[Sandy]

Hey, it's good to see this thing in execution. ;D Like I said, this is a really good idea, and it adds a whole lot to the "reality show"-theme.

I hope you get all the evicted players to answer you, but don't be encouraged if you don't, okay? Just keep this thing going on.

I, for one, will be reading this. ;D (Well, it [I]is[/I] my game, really, so I kinda have to.)

[Baron Samedi]

[quote name='Sandy']I hope you get all the evicted players to answer you, but don't be encouraged if you don't, okay? Just keep this thing going on.[/quote][size=1]
ROFL

That's right JJ, don't be encouraged if they don't result. They obviously want you to fail!

Great idea though, although Samus' behaviour was... erratic.[/size]

[Charles]

[QUOTE=Baron Samedi][size=1]
Great idea though, although Samus' behaviour was... erratic.[/size][/QUOTE]
I think that's my main problem with this other than the total lack of narrative. The characters are not true to their identities at all. Instead of Diddy or Kirby, you could just as well throw in names like Theodore or William. When you're working with previously established characters with distinct personalities, it is important to capture them authentically.

[JJ]

[Color=Indigo]See Charles, how hard was that to type up? :p

But yeah, this is why I like feedback, because it lets me work from there and [B]improve[/B]. I will look into that for Mitsurugi's interview, although, I'm still wondering how much of a personality he has.

Jiggywigg's not going to answer anything I send, so anyone else?[/color]

[Charles]

[QUOTE=JJ][color=indigo]See Charles, how hard was that to type up? :p

But yeah, this is why I like feedback, because it lets me work from there and [b]improve[/b]. I will look into that for Mitsurugi's interview, although, I'm still wondering how much of a personality he has.

Jiggywigg's not going to answer anything I send, so anyone else?[/color][/QUOTE]
But, remember a picture is worth a thousand words. ;)

[Revelation]

[size=1][color=#B2566B]... ... ... Uhm....ok. Comical, strange, and just plain o_O. I must say I like it. Just imagining how the deleted players find their time to step out of their bitterness and resentful manner and approaching an interviewer who asks them questions that'll probably make them snap at any moment, reminds me of Annie and our dear brother, Gen but that's beside the point.

I can't wait for Mitsurugi's interview.[/size][/color]