Art ~Art~ Drawings...

[Disenchanted]

Ah, well first of all thanks for giving the time to view this.
I draw quite a bit and wanted some feed back from people other than close firends and family.
I'll be posting my stuff here and i would appreciate it if you could coment and give me some feed back.

Thankx :)

[IMG]http://img65.imageshack.us/img65/8427/scan00018ck.jpg[/IMG]

sorry for the bad quality scan, its actually alot neater than it appers.
This was suposed to be Ayato from RahXephon. Its not actualy finished, i dont have alot of time these days but when i get it done it should look alot clearer.

V-Fox

[Random]

[COLOR=DarkRed][SIZE=1]Well, Amanda, I like the drawing. For not being finished, it's quite good. I don't know who Ayato is, nor have I ever watched RahXephon, but it's really a good drawing, nontheless.

The only problem I have with it is that the face seemes a little...off. I'm not sure why, but maybe it has something to do with the positioning. From the outline, it lookes like you tried to have it off-center, but the eyes and hair, as well as the shading, contradict that.

Also, facing the picture, the left side is in good proportion...but the right side seemes a little [i]too[/i] far to the right. It's out of proportion with the other side, and it makes the picture look a bit lopsided.

On the good side, I really like the eyes. Good detail. The hair, although needing a bit of work, is good. And his jacket is working out quite nicely, as is his neck, although his neck is a little bit undefined. That could just be the "unfinished" talking, though.

Well, keep it up! Finish this picture, post it, and we'll see how good your talents really are...I'm looking forward to more "subscriptions," if you will...lol ~.^

-Random[/SIZE][/COLOR]

[Disenchanted]

and finished product looks like! *drum roll*
Im quite proud of this effort.
[IMG]http://img152.imageshack.us/img152/1938/scan00025vz.jpg[/IMG]

Comments are very welcome!

~Illusion~

[Retribution]

[size=1]I think it's excellent on the whole. While you still have the eye placement a bit off, it doesn't really detract from the quality of the picture. The only real problem I have with it, is that I think you oversimplified things -- you got rid of a few lines that really gave his face a good 'vibe,' more notably the chin line (it's a bit too dark -- a lighter line would've done better).

I'm glad you're sticking around and posting your art. Keep it coming![/size]

[Doukeshi]

[SIZE=1]Great image, but I must say I prefered the eyes in the original 'unfinished' drawing. The whole gradient shading of them seemed to me to give the image much more depth. On the whole though its a pretty good piece of work. Maybe you should have a go at colouring it ^_~[/SIZE]

[Disenchanted]

And thats exactly what i shall do!

Im not really happy with this. i think that the shading around his face on the neck is to dark, this was also done in pencil and doesnt look to well. It was done rather quickly as i wanted something relaxing to do after school. Another virson below is done with harder outlines.

I think i will re do this in paint (acrylic or water colours) or just re do it in pencil again.
(click the thumbnails)

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Thank you for all the comments thus far. People at home here never give me proper critisism about my works. The comments help alot !
I know this isnt perfect but still, its a developing work in progress!
:)

~Illusion`