Writing Sasuke's Wish [PG-13]

[Riku]

[FONT=Tahoma][SIZE=1][COLOR=DeepSkyBlue]Well, here is one of my fanfic stories about Sasuke that I've recently started. I know that it might not be that good because I don't really know that much about Itachi, but I think it might be a good story anyways. I'll be writing down the chapters until it's done, so yeah. If you could post comments and stuff, I would totally appreciate it. n.n

[B]Chapter One[/B]

The wind was blowing harsher than ever on this night, for a raging thunder storm was coming from the west and it was coming in fast. It was pitch black as far as the human eye could see and only the pale light of the moon showed what the wild terrain produced. Two shadowy figures were standing on the branches amongst the trees; the leaves blowing and the wind howling louder and louder.
Sasuke stood on the branch, clasping onto the tree trunk to steady himself from the violent wind before it totally blew off his balance. He kept his right hand tightly locked onto the tree and put his left over his eyes so that he could see the other figure in
the moonlight before losing him in the deep darkness. "I have to keep myself hidden," he thought to himself, sweating from keeping himself steady on the branch, "Crap... it's hard enough to keep my balance in this blistering wind and to hide..."
Suddenly, he looked back to where his enemy had been hiding, only to see that no one was there but the shaky branch of the tree. "Damn!" he thought loudly, grabbing a kunai out of his right leg holster while steadily continuing to hold onto the tree, "Lost in my own thoughts and it caused me to put down my guard carelessly," he continued.
He hopped from branch to branch, frantically looking for a mistake to give his attacker away. Finding nothing, he stopped onto a tree branch and thought slowly, "I can't find him rapidly searching like this... I must stay in one spot and listen closely to his moves...? Sasuke then hopped onto the nearest branch and steadied himself, closing his eyes and shunning out of his mind the unnecessary noise made by that of the wind; solely focusing on mysterious noises of any kind. Then, he heard the ring of a sword from behind him and yelled, "Attacking from the back, eh?!" He then jumped up and twirled his body around in the air and threw his kunai (that he had held all that time) toward the attackers back.
The shadowy figure turned around just in time to block the flying dagger with his samurai-like sword, causing it to bounce off of his sword and fall down towards the never-ending line of trees. He then looked up toward the sky to see Sasuke falling rapidly towards him, fist first. Sasuke angered his face and tightened his fist, "Try to dodge this!! Rage of the Lions!!!" he yelled, plummeting his fist onto the attackers face, causing the figure to face the impact of the force and fall backwards. His arms were flying in the air and blood came gushing from his mouth. Sasuke then fell legs-first towards the falling figure and raised his left leg up high and yelled, "Force of the Dragon!!" in a loud voice, bringing his foot down hard onto the falling figures stomach, causing him to fall faster towards the never-ending bottom of trees.
Sasuke teleported himself onto the nearest branch to look down towards where the figure fell. He then threw kunai and shuriken towards the bottom, just in case he didn't kill his enemy enough. "Heh," Sasuke snickered to himself, "I'll see you in the afterlife... only, you'll be in hell," he continued.
"My dear brother, is that any way to talk to your older brother after such a long time?"
Sasuke suddenly turned around to see the figure standing on a tree branch above him, his kunai and shuriken stuck in the flesh of the figure's body, blood dripping down from the open wounds. "What?" Sasuke stuttered, "But, from all that loss of blood, you should be..."

"Dead?"

Sasuke turned around to see another version of the figure on a tree branch beside him, except this version was unharmed and had no blood. Suddenly, the copy of the figure vanished, leaving behind a thick cloud of dark-blue smoke. Sasuke, engulfed in the smoke, closed his eyes and coughed until the smoke dissipated. He then slowly opened his eyes; his face and voice stern, "I see, the infamous art of the doppelganger...? he mumbled, then slowly turned to the real version on the side of him. He then grabbed his demon shadow shuriken from his brown pack around his waist, fully opened it up and placed it in front of his face, readying himself for anything his enemy was willing to throw.
The figure crossed his arms and laughed a laugh that echoed throughout the forest; his eyes glowed bright red from the pale light of the moon.
Sasuke grew angry at his laugh and yelled in annoyance, "What the crap is so damn funny?!"
The shadowy figure then chuckled until he could regain the strength to speak, "*Sigh* Gomen, my dear brother," he paused and then continued, "I just thought that it was so funny when you pulled out the shadow shuriken because...."
"Because what?!" Sasuke yelled, seemingly irritated by this conversation.
The figure then focused his blood-red eyes toward Sasuke's, smirking and chuckling at the same time, "Why, you don't even know who I am, do you?? Was our years apart that long?"
His eyes wide open, Sasuke tried to speak, "Wh....what are you talking about??? he stuttered, ?You....you can't mean that you're my...my...?
The figure smiled an evil smile and started to speak in a kind voice, which then trailed on to a loud yell, "Why yes I do, I mean that from the bottom of my heart.... MY DEAR BROTHER!!!!" He then widened his eyes and yelled, "The Konhagakure Art of Paralysis!!"
Sasuke looked deep in his blood-red eyes and tried to move, but his body would not obey his command. "Guh... my... my body won't... won't move..!" he tried to speak.
"Why of course not, silly, weak brother of mine," the figure said. He then lifted his right hand up over his head onto his dark black coat and pulled it down, causing the whole cloak to come off from his body. "Now you must know who I am," he said.
Sasuke looked on toward the figures body, his eyes wide open and his mouth agape. His body shivered and sweated from his fear of what he was seeing; he tried to talk from all his fear, ?It...it can't be...I...Itachi?? What?" He then lost his voice because of the fear that he felt.
The figure stood before Sasuke, wearing a black coat with red outline and a red with white outline smoke design, his collar covering his chin, his long black sleeves covering his arms and white leg-socks cover his legs from knee to ankle. His Konohagakure headband glowed in the dim moonlight, revealing the everlasting deep scar over his metal Konohagakure leaf design. Itachi then crossed his arms and snickered, "Well, at least you remember my name, even if it did take you a while to remember..." He then reached to his left side to slowly reveal his gleaming sword toward the paralyzed Sasuke.
"Why... why did you kill mother and father!? Why the whole entire Uchiha clan?!" Sasuke yelled, trying to hold back the tears, "What did you gain from it?! ANSWER ME!!!"
Itachi lowered and shook his head; he looked back up towards the frightened Sasuke, "The same reason as you, my one and only brother... to gain the ultra secret power of the Uchiha Clan." He paused, then continued. "Even though I was one of them, I didn't care... as long as I got the power all to myself, no matter what needed to be done. And you, my brother, shall be just like me...?
"Why would I want to be like a blood thirsty killer who only wants power?! " Sasuke yelled at the top of his lungs.
"You cannot hide it," Itachi continued, "all these years, you've traveled in order to get stronger and to avenge mother and father by killing me. The only road you?ve walked is the path of an avenger, is it not?? He stopped, but looked deeply into Sasuke?s frozen eyes. ?Your eyes?,? he continued, ?they tell me that you have been alone ever since the day that the Uchiha clan was annihilated many years ago??
?Stop acting like you understand my whole life,? Sasuke mumbled while looking down, tears coming down his flushed face, ?you ruin everything that I hold close to me and you still enter my life as if nothing?s happened??
Itachi watched Sasuke, as if his tears triggered something deep inside his soul? something that he? he never felt before in a long time. He stopped and thought about it and then said while clenching his heart, ?brother, if? if you truly feel this way, then?? Itachi removed his hand from his chest and grabbed hold of his sword, ?then I must kill you, for you are the one who holds the sacred Uchiha crystal deep within your flesh and blood.?
Sasuke quickly looked up at Itachi, confusion on his face, ?What Uchiha crystal? Do you mean the one that is said in legend? It? it can?t be! It was lost thousands of years ago through the sands of time! I couldn?t have it in my body!?
??The great and almighty crystal of the powerful Uchiha clan shall be put into the one who shall defeat the coming evil upon Konohagakure village,?? Itachi said. He raised his right hand and pointed his finger straight at Sasuke. ?You are the only one left of our clan and you are willing to give up your life for everything that you hold dear. You, my sibling,? he paused, looking down, and then continued, ?are the one that will save us all from complete destruction.? He lifted his sword over his face, ?that is why I must kill you, for I want that crystal to not save the world? but to destroy it from within my grasp.? He then crouched down and lowered his sword, reading his attack.
?No, no you can?t! I have an oath to protect the people I love!? he yelled, trying to move out of the paralysis spell, ?you can?t?!?
?Sayonara, my brother,? Itachi said, ?may you now truly know peace in your chaotic soul.? He jumped from the branch towards Sasuke and raised his sword over his head, ready to slash Sasuke in one full swing.
Sasuke yelled, ?Noooo!!? as it faded to black?
??Gasp!? Sasuke woke up in his bed, covered in glistening sweat in the dim sunlight. He was gasping for air; his fists clenched tightly onto his white sheets and shivering from fear. He then raised his right hand, which was also trembling, and put both hands over his sweaty face.
?Why? why does this dream continue to come to me every night?? he softly said to himself as if someone was listening, ?what does it mean?? He then looked down on his bare chest and put his hand over his heart, ?do I truly have the ancient crystal inside of me?? He bent his legs to clasp his arms around them and buried his head in. Scared and lonely, he wanted someone to lean on, ?what will become of me?? he said as his voice quivered. He then became silent, whereas only sobs could be heard in the dawning of the sunlight?

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[Nomura]

You go girl. LOL. 9.5. The text is a little hard to read for me, too small, and the color makes every thing a little blurry and clingish...(Well something like that). The writing is pure awesome, except for when Sasuke curses, and it says, [I]Thought loudly[/I]. I think loudly is word for saying something, not thinking lol. Anywho, great job Wielder, don't worry, the posts of fans will start rushing in, LOL.