Writing He [PG]

[vegeta rocker]

This poem refers directly to this post [URL=http://otakuboards.com/showthread.php?t=51934]here[/URL].

i would welcome and crit as usual.

[CENTER]He[/CENTER]

[CENTER]He holds me captive
guarding my heart in a jar
that rests beside his bed

when my sweet taste is craved
i am uncorked and he
drinks from my mouth

my form diminishes and grows stale
as my love drips from his
barb wire lips

each sip drains my soul
and strains my emotions away

i force myself into a semi-content state
as i slowly deteriorate with
his every craving[/CENTER]