HeartStopper Posted February 17, 2006 Share Posted February 17, 2006 Tell me how to make this crap better! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chikara Kokoro Posted February 17, 2006 Share Posted February 17, 2006 The first thing that caught my attention was the eyes. Most of the time the size of the eyes in proportion to the face is a style thing. I can understand that, but for me the eyes are much too large. The hair just looks like you scribbled a line without thinking about it. Look at other pictures of anime characters with similar hair and try to draw based around those pictures to develop your own way of drawing it. One of my characters has a similar hair style to what I think you were going for, so I'm attaching a file of a very messy sketch of him in case you have trouble finding reference pictures. Other than that I can't really tell you too much since it's just a picture of a head. Try to make the clothes more realistic, though, since the collar of his shirt seems very poofy, and I know I've never seen a shirt like that before in real life. Most of your lines seem to be very "sketchy" in that they aren't continuous lines. It would make the picture look much better if the lines were more smooth. I have to say that the overall shape of the head is well done, and even though the expression leaves me wondering what this character is feeling, it is also well drawn. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kei Posted February 17, 2006 Share Posted February 17, 2006 [color=darkblue][size=1]Seeing as this is more about art than manga itself, I'm gonna shuffle this on over to the Art Studio. ^^ *does so*[/color][/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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