Art My Character

[HeartStopper]

This is my character fro my manga, tell what you think and how he can be better.

p.s. sry if you cant read the letters

[Guest Scione]

That looks sweet, the only thing I would change about him are his clothes I'd give him a bracelet or a necklace or something, the hair is awesome. :animesmil

[Chikara Kokoro]

Ignoring the other characters on the page, there are two major things that catch my attention.

First are the arm things. There are way too many wrinkles drawn on them. It makes him look like he has extremely thick arms and gives him the look of a eleven-year-old body builder. Try to make them look more like gravity is working on them (have them sag more at the bottom), or have them be tight against the arm.

Second is the neck. Not only is it too short, but it's also ignoring the age of the character. A boy usually doesn't go into puberty until he's a teenager, so why is it that this guy already has an Adam's apple? It adds to the eleven-year-old body builder look.

Aside from those two things it seems pretty good, but he reminds me a bit too much of Son Goku from Saiyuki for my liking.

[Kei]

[color=darkblue][size=1]Again, this is more pertaining to art than it is actual story development and the like, so I'm going to forward this on over to the Art Studio.[/color][/size]