Writing Sasuke's World 2 [PG]

[Nomura]

Well, I was just brainstorming, and I got the idea of SW 2. It takes place years after the manga and anime, and Sasuke is now 26.

[B]Chapter One: Reunion[/B]

A man stood still at my door step. I didn?t feel like getting the door.

?What do you want?? I exclaim.

The man just stands there. I can?t see his face because of the long veil, but I know he is smiling. Just smiling his heart out. What does he bloody want?

I finally get up from the floor, and I close the door to the shrine, as I walk to the door. Outside, birds are singing. Black birds with big yellow eyes sing. One stares me down. Just staring with cold eyes. I look away.

?Uchiha Sasuke, Konahagakure Ninja, Jonin elite leader, are you not?? says the man.

?Who wants to know?? I ask calmly.

?My name is of no importance.?

I watch him closely. I have my kunai in hand behind my back. I wasn?t about to take chances.

The man just stood there.
[I]
Why was he just standing there?[/I]

Then, with all his force, he struck me across the face.

I stood there a few seconds, then I started laughing. I knew it was him!

?Naruto, you old fool? I say, striking him back.

Naruto pulls off his veil, and invites himself in. His cheerful face is smiling, as he looks around at my house. His long blonde hair comes over his face.

?Hows life as an Hokage?? I say sitting down at my kitchen bar.

?Alot better than my old life as an outcast,? he says sitting down beside me.

?And Sakura?? I ask.

?The best darn teacher of [I]Genjutsu[/I], and Chakra control we could ask for!? he says cheerfully.

I smile, thinking of Sakura?s short pink hair.

?Listen, Sasuke,? Naruto says quietly ?I was thinking about going to the North shrine.?

My eyes open wide, and a frown comes over my face.

?To see Kakashi?? I ask.

?Yeah...?

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Naruto and I stood at the long tombstone of Kakashi. His head band was laying on top of it, along with his kunai and shuriken.

I pushed back my long blue-black hair so I could see it clearly.

Then without warning, a kunai flew at me. I dodged, and looked up at the man who threw it.




So, what did ya think of the sequel to the original? Should I keep it up? :animeswea

[Riku]

[FONT=Tahoma][SIZE=1][COLOR=DarkRed]Holy crap, Nomura. You make the coolest Sasuke stories ever... I swear, I think you were some sort of author in a past life. X3

Anyways, the story's setting so far is flipping awesome that I just can't wait until the next installment comes in. I want to read so much more about what'll happen to Sasuke and Naruto... and maybe even Sakura if she comes in. Although, now that I think about it.... wasn't Sakura killed off during your first Sasuke's World story? Not that I really care, because I love sakura anyways. XP

Anyways, please continue to write your story!! I can't wait to read what happens! You're like the friggin' best, Nomura.

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[Nomura]

Saskura was killed in the first, but it was all just a dream of Sasuke's(or so he thinks). Sooner or later I'll write the next chapter...

EDIT: Ok, I've got the second chapter ready for lift off.


[B]
Chapter Two: Sound, Sound, Sound![/B]

I looked up into the tree tops, then back at the weapon that was thrown at me. Crap! A bell was attached to the kunai. The kunai was to distract me...but, from what?

I looked back at Kakashi?s tombstone. I let out a gasp, and fell to my knees. Kakashi?s tombstone was wide open, and within was just dust. Someone had taken Kakashi?s dead body, and carried it far away.

The only clue to whom did it, was the bell attached to the kunai. Sound Ninja must?ve did this.

And then, I finally realized, Naruto was gone.

?Naruto!? I yell out to the sky. My voice lets out an echo, and a reply calls back.

?Help...Help...? says a rugged voice far away.

I look to the direction of the voice.

?Move you vermin!? I exclaim to a black bird. It moves, and I can see a glimpse of Naruto?s Hokage kimono. I run to the white color, and stop at a large oak tree.

Naruto is unconcious, with several different shuriken stuck into his limp body.

I couldn?t speak, and I couldn?t move. I was too shocked...

It took a few minutes, but I finally picked his motionless body up, and I took it to the house down hill, where an old hermit lives. It was the only place I could take him.

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?What did you two do?? ask the old man, getting some polly-leaf from his cabinet. He shoves the leaf into Naruto?s mouth, and turns back to me.

?Some jackass attacked us and stole our friend?s dead body.? I say.

?What?? He croaks out.

?[I]Long story...? [/I] I mutter.

Then, I notice a piece of paper pinned to the side of my shirt.

It says:

[I]Sound Ninja. Come to Land. [/I]

I didn?t get it at first, but I caught on later.

I must go to the land of Sound...

[KKC]

[size=1]:O You made Kaka dead!!! *crys* And then someone stole his dead body... eww.... that's just nasty.

I'm not a big Sasuke fan, but I read your first stroy, so I might as well read this one. I like how you made Naruto Hokage and though it's sad, I like the whole "Kakashi's dead and his body has been stolen" thing. And the bell was freaky... I bet Kakashi's really alive and he's testing them! Yay!

Can't wait for the next chapter![/size]

[Riku]

[FONT=Tahoma][SIZE=1][COLOR=DarkRed]That was another very interesting chapter, Nomura. It really made me fall off the edge of my seat. Anyways, I wonder who stole Kakashi's body? And how could you make him dead?! He's like the coolest character in there!!! Aw well, anyways, continue with the story and I'll keep reading. I want to know what happens!!!

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[Nomura]

lol, i forgot about this...lol OK! I will keep it up! :animesmil

EDIT: Well, I finally got it together, LOL. You should read the first Sasuke's world if you havn't. You'll understand more, anyway...

[B]Chapter three: Limb from Limb, Eye to Eye[/B]

[I]?Nice. We have only one more limb to go...?[/I]

Five cloaked men stood around a body. They were doing strange magic on it. Something that not even the body had done before. Kakashi?s body was motionless. Just dead.

Sasuke flew from tree to tree. He would find Kakashi?s body if it was the last thing he?d do. His limbs were aching, and his forehead was bleeding from several tree branches hitting him.

Smoke was coming from a house about a mile away. Sasuke could see it clearly from the giant oak he was perched on. The smoke was constantly changing colors. From black to blue to pink and suddenly forming a circle. A giant circle. And then, a hole formed in the middle of the circle as smoke disappeared. It was similiar to an eye.

Sasuke jumped from the tree and ran to the house. He slowly entered, trying not to alert anyone. A single cloaked figure stood over a long table.

?Hello Sasuke, I?ve been...waiting for you.? said the cloaked figure. The voice was familiar.

The man took off his cloak and looked over his shoulder at Sasuke. A headband covered his left eye. His blue hair was pulled back in a braided pony tail.

?Have you seen my friend?? Sasuke asked, cautiously and slowly.

?Was your friend a member of the diceased??

?Yes actually.?

The man?s expression formed an evil smile. From ear-to-ear. Never faltering.

Sasuke would?ve struck the man by now, but he was frozen. Not physically, but mentally. He was scared. He didn?t know why.

?Hello...[I]friend[/I],? said the man.

The man, pulled his headband up. A Sharingan eye.

Sasuke suddenly started making hand signals, trying to perform chakra techniques, and the man did the same. Flames exploded from the two ninjas? mouths. Flames were pushing against each other in an endless battle.

Mesmerized, Sasuke watched them. He hadn?t noticed the man was now running towards him.

A kunai planted into his stomach, Sasuke fainted. Blacking out onto the cold floor, with the man walking slowly away laughing. A land of Sound. A laughing sound. Poor Sasuke stuck in the Land of Sound Ninja.

[Riku]

[FONT=Tahoma][SIZE=1][COLOR=Navy]Oh my gosh.... that was so good. I've been waiting for the next installment since, like, FOREVER (note that Nomura. XD) Anyways, that's a really good way to start it off again. I can't believe that that Sound ninja has a Sharingan eye... I wonder how he got it. So, anyways... I can't wait to read the next part. It's so cool!! Keep it up!! Poor Sasuke... I love him!! XD

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[Nomura]

[B]Chapter four: Waking, Fainting, Waking [/B]

A tall skinny woman stood over a young man. She constantly slapped his face, trying to wake him. She looked back at a man, with a frown, and then she finally kicked Sasuke hard, making her blonde ponytail flying from side to side.

Sasuke awoke, holding his head and clutching his stomach. Bloody bandages were in piles around him.

?What a nuisance.? said a man to the right of the woman. He was smoking a cigarette and looking down, so it was hard to see his face.

?Shut-up Shikamaru, he would?ve been dead if we hadn?t put up with him.? said the woman.

Another man came through the front door of the little cabin. He was holding a gigantic fish. ?Dinner?s here! I call first dibs!? He happily exclaimed.

?G?day Choji, how ?bout saving a li?l for me, eh?? said Shikamaru, pushing his cig into a small ashtray on a round dinner table.

Sasuke couldn?t remember these three, but they were familiar.

?So, Sasuke, how?d you get lost way up here?? said the woman. ?The boys, Sakura, and I were on a li?l trip and we just saw you hanging from a tree half-dead.?

?Sakura?? Sasuke asked, letting go of his head.

?Yep. Don?t you remember...who we are?? said she, looking concerned.

?I?ve never seen you before in my life.?

Sasuke stood up and walked out the door. [I]Why was he here? Where was here?[/I] He couldn?t remember. All he could se, were images of a blue headed travelor with a scarred face, grinning evilly.

His head was aching so rapidly and angrily now that he felt sick to his stomach.

The image was getting clearer now, almost as if the man was in front of him.

[I]?I?ve come back for you.?[/I] said the man.

Then, images of Kakashi came into his mind...Then in a burst of color, the two men fused into a man with long braided hair and a head band over his left eye.

The man lifted his headband, and struck Sasuke in the stomach.

Gasping, Sasuke awoke from his dream. A woman was sitting at the foot of his bed. Her pink hair pulled back by her headband.

?You?re awake!? She said happily as he looked up at her.

?Daddy!?

A little child came running through the bedroom door. His short blue hair flew in every direction, and his baggy red shirt bounced as he jumped on the bed.

?Oh, Zakanaru don?t hurt daddy, he?s already wounded enough as it is.? said Sakura, pulling the boy off the bed. ?Ino said you left in a hurry, and fainted in the middle of the forest?

Sasuke stared at the little boy. [I]His son? [/I]

?Sasuke, meet Zakanaru. I had him while you were away...? said Sakura, smiling at Sasuke.

[I]His son...His son looked so much like someone he had met before. [/I]

?Hi daddy...? said Zakanaru, lightly hugging Sasuke.

Sasuke hugged back, with several tears falling from his eyes.

[Riku]

[FONT=Tahoma][SIZE=1][COLOR=Navy]Wow... so... Sasuke is actually a dad... and Sakura is his wife?? That is all so cool... and yet he doesn't even realize who they are... that's so sad. ; . ; Anyways, why the crap was Ino kicking Sasuke? I was like... omg.. WHAT THE CRAP?! XD Anyways, glad you put Choji in there with the food because that totally made me crack up. The storyline is totally heart-breaking, Nomura... it makes you feel as if you are actually Sasuke, feeling all his emotions... it's all so sad, but it's a very good story.

I'm going to post my other story because you influence me!! Thanks, Nomura. X3

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[Nomura]

Heheh! :animesmil Please do! Sasuke and Sakura got together... (they're not married, but they do have a child) Sasuke left for the mountains, and Sakura had Zakanaru while he was away. :animesmil

So, I'm glad I actually posted the others. I almost forgot about this whole thing. :animesmil Well, next one's up soon.

EDIT: Chapter five: Staring at the Sun

Sasuke kissed Sakura a final good bye. He looked down at Zakanaru.

?I?ll be back soon.? He said to the two. He?d be lucky if he did actually come back.

And then, he left. He walked for a day, until he finally got back to the small cabin, where Naruto and the old-man were at. Sasuke entered the little house, awaiting Naruto?s cheerful face. Yet, he didn?t even see Naruto.

?Where?s Naruto?? Sasuke asked the man, sitting at a table with a kettle of tea.

[I]?I?m...afraid...?[/I] the man said, then paused.

?I?m afraid he?s passed.? He said looking down into his cup of tea.
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Sasuke fell on his knees, staring at the wooden cross in the fields. Naruto was dead. And, it was all his fault. If only he?d known that the man was there. If only he knew that the man was waiting to attack, and steal Kakashi?s body. But...He didn?t.

Sasuke got up, and looked into the sunset. He was going to finish his fight with the blue-haired man if it was the last thing he ever did.

?It?s a shame.? said the old man. His voice was different though.

Sasuke gasped, and turned the man around, pulling off his hat.

?[I]You[/I]!? he exclaimed staring at the scarred face.

The man. The man that had a sharingan eye.

?I thought that maybe we could finish our fight, before I begin to rule the Sound land.? He said, laughing cruelly. ?Plus...Kakashi?s body made ours super fast and strong.?

?[I]You hog[/I]! You?re in his body!?

?Yes...My followers needed a body that would make me stronger than before.?

?Who are you?? Sasuke shouted, holding up a kunai.

[I]?My name...just happens to be Zakanaru.? [/I]

[Riku]

[COLOR=DarkOrchid][SIZE=1][FONT=Tahoma]Wow... that plot twist was a really nice addition, Nomura... to think that his own son used Kakashi's dead body for his own use. I wonder what's going to happen next.... like... is Zakanaru going to kill his own father? Or is Sasuke going to kill his own son? OMG... I wanna know what's going to happen!! I'm so excited!! Hurry, Nomura!! Summon up your writing skills and hurry up and write the next installment!! XD[/FONT][/SIZE][/COLOR]

[Guest kuroinuyoukai]

Holy crap Nomura. I enjoyed reading those chapters. It had such originality. Keep going please. :catgirl: