Lord Naraku Posted February 20, 2006 Share Posted February 20, 2006 Alright so Kaian. I guess i'll just post the plot and uhh hope its within the rules and hope everyone likes it...(cause i need some opinions) haha. Kaian takes place on the content of Arnor. During the ancient times after the second great war there was a group of fierce dragons that came over from the lands far off to the west. They began to terrorize the people or Arnor, and its surrounding countries of Eldamar, Sereg'wethrin Hosse, and Neuro Mar. So the elders of each country banned together to discuss what they should do to stop these terror beasts they called Uruloki. The elders, who were also the rules of these countries decided they would make a seperate clan for this special duty. This clan was made of a group of specially trained men and youth from every city in the content. They called this clan The Ndengin'Uruloki, The Dragon Slayers. These men and youth were trained by the humans and N'Shanesti in extreme hand to hand combat and how to fight with an array of weapons from swords to pikes. They were then trained by the elves, in a different way. The elves knew how to use magic. They used these skills to train these boys how to fight in their way of magic and mind deception. The Ndengin'Uruloki fought the Uruloki for many centuries until the dragons fled from the land unable to withstand the bombardment of the Ndengin'Uruloki. Though this almost caused a third war, one between the Ndengin'Uruloki and the dragons. Now in the present time one boy, Kaian, doesn't know that before him awaits an adventure, as he is soon to find out that he has background and ancestors that flow all the way back in history to the first member of the Ndengin'Uruloki. Kaian, a half-elven boy about 16 years old, lives on his farm with his mother Elen and his father Gilemar. They live outside of Oira Me'a, the capital city of Eldamar. His life is about to take a turn for the better or the worst, the decision is his. Well hope its alright. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chikara Kokoro Posted March 1, 2006 Share Posted March 1, 2006 For some reason when I read anything that has Tolkien-esque names with 's in them my eyes kind of glaze over. Perhaps you could come up with a style of names for your world that is completely different from anything you've ever read? It wouldn't be easy, I know, but it would help immensely I think. The name Kalan is great, by the way. The whole plot resonates of something I've read before. There are many stories that contain one or more of those story elements. While I do understand that it can be a challenge to create an original story in the high fantasy genre, this shows no new ideas to me at all. Could you post what specifically the adventure is? Keep in mind that a quest to find anything at all is in the fantasy genre also highly cliché. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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