Art Any thoughs on this art?

[Guest meiko452]

[CENTER][SIZE=3][FONT=Courier New]Here is a sketch I've done. Opinions . . .[/FONT][/SIZE]

[IMG]http://i26.photobucket.com/albums/c107/meiko452/Geocitiessite/drawingkeria.jpg[/IMG][/CENTER]

[Senko]

I LOVE IT!!!! although i do have a quetion is it kairi from kingdom hearts??? :animeswea

[Retribution]

[quote name='Senko']I LOVE IT!!!! although i do have a quetion is it kairi from kingdom hearts??? :animeswea[/quote]
[size=1]Senko, this is the second time I've warned you about post quality. Please read the [url=http://www.otakuboards.com/showthread.php?t=52171][b]Art Studio Rules[/b][/url], especially the section on "Constructive Criticism."

Your post, while positive in nature, does nothing to help the artist out. [I]What[/I] do you love about it? If you ask that they'll know what they did correctly. As it stands, you've praised meiko452, but not helped.

I'm sorry if I sounded stern, but please, for both our sakes, try to elaborate. :3[/size]

[kagomefruitcup]

[COLOR=RoyalBlue]Wow thats real good. Did you free draw or draw it from a picture u saw. Plus i love kingdom hearts. You're lucky...keep drawing...it'll do you good when you get older.[/COLOR]

[KatanaViolet]

It's very well done.
Looking just at that one sketch makes me want to see more of it, color, shading, perhaps with some background. Something serene, because she looks like she's deep in thought. Like looking at the moon under a tree. I don't know if you can photoshop it or what... but something like that, to give even more feeling into the picture. Even if not, it would be nice to see a full picture ya know.
I don't know much about art and I can't really draw, but I think it would look good, even though it looks awesome as is.

[Delta]

[COLOR=#656446]Hmm, I thought it was the Flower Girl from Wolf's Rain. Anyways...

First up, I've to commend you for them clean outlines. From what I gather, you didn't use ink on this one, just the messy medium that is graphite. Makes its cleanliness a tad more laudable, yeah? Also, the subject's pose looks lovely. Methinks it's how the eye's drawn that gave soul to this piece. (Alright, [i]that[/i] sounded wierd).

I am rather doubtful 'bout stuff below the face, though. The breadth of the shoulders looks a bit narrow for the head. The arms are kind of thin, too. But it's nothing too major so cheers to you!

[b]8.5/10[/b][/COLOR]

[John]

I likes, the clean linework is a particular up for me. But like Delta said, the stuff below the head is kinda kooky. I'd put in some more shading or some texture in there, because it took me a while to decide if her left arm was covered up past the elbow with a glove, or if that was just the arm and shirt sleeve, heh.

I still can't decide if the forehead is too low or not, also. I'm thinking it is, but just a tiny bit. :X

Great stuff, though.

[Senko]

[QUOTE=Retribution][size=1]Senko, this is the second time I've warned you about post quality. Please read the [url=http://www.otakuboards.com/showthread.php?t=52171][b]Art Studio Rules[/b][/url], especially the section on "Constructive Criticism."

Your post, while positive in nature, does nothing to help the artist out. [I]What[/I] do you love about it? If you ask that they'll know what they did correctly. As it stands, you've praised meiko452, but not helped.

I'm sorry if I sounded stern, but please, for both our sakes, try to elaborate. :3[/size][/QUOTE]

goodness gracious they are picky. i love how you drew this it gives what you drew a sort of feeling of wonder and well it just looks good because it has lots of human aspects to it :catgirl:

(are you happy art studio staff!? :animeangr)

[Raphael]

Hello.... :animeknow

Cool!!! Great quality of linework and shading, :cool: the character's feeling were quickly understood by whoever seen the picture! :D

Oh by the way, I'm just a little curious about the size of the character's left shoulder, isn't it a little too wide? My english is just not good enough to describe it so I just attach an image which is an edit of your pic done by me.....remember that I'm just advising....(eventhough my drawing couldn't even compare your magnificent draw......:animesigh)

[IMG]http://img55.imageshack.us/img55/5317/kairi0aj.png[/IMG]

Hope you'll understand what I meant....:animesmil I know that there's still problem about the comparison of size between her shoulder and head.....I didn't change her head much because I don't feel like I could edit her head much (with so much shading on it.....you can't expect me to do that....:animesigh)....I'm just suggesting this to you, if you feel agreed to me then try to experiment another size....whatever that might look better than this one....;)

Oh yeah....for the score....I give your pics 8.4/10, you'll get more if you add color and background to the pic ;)

[jigglyness]

Hmm..I think you should probably work on the flow of her hair. it looks a little to chunky. try to make her hair to flow more smoothly. But overall it's pretty good. :)

[OpS]

[QUOTE=meiko452][CENTER][SIZE=3][FONT=Courier New]Here is a sketch I've done. Opinions . . .[/FONT][/SIZE]

[IMG]http://i26.photobucket.com/albums/c107/meiko452/Geocitiessite/drawingkeria.jpg[/IMG][/CENTER][/QUOTE]

In my opinion, it needs some more detail--it all looks kinda flat to me. It's a good drawing but just lacking in detail--shading, depth--that kinda thing.