Writing Words of Life: My poetry (E)-(M-VLS)

[Veritas]

[size=1][color=darkred]Ok Well I tend to write poems randomly, I do them quite often as blogs on myspace, but sometimes I feel like that site is full of nothing but complete idiots. Anyways I though I would make a thread where I can put my poetry and get some feed back, as well as share them. I put the rating E and M-VLS, because I'm most likely going to post more than one poem, and so most likely some of them will be mature.[/color][/size]
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[size=1][color=darkred]This poem is one I just barely wrote today, I did it rather spontaniously as a blog on myspace. It is just a description of how my love life is, how I feel about it, and what I hope it will become. It isn't the best and I could still probably mess around with it, but I like it so enjoi.[/color][/size]
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[size=1][color=darkred] [u][b]WAITING[/b][/u][/color][/size]

[size=1][color=darkred][i]It seems it's taken years for me,[/i][/color][/size]
[size=1][color=darkred][i]To realize the things I need,[/i][/color][/size]
[size=1][color=darkred][i]A girl to treat faithfully,[/i][/color][/size]
[size=1][color=darkred][i]A girl to be the one for me.[/i][/color][/size]
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[size=1][color=darkred][i]To be with on my quiet nights,[/i][/color][/size]
[size=1][color=darkred][i]Sitting in the candlelight,[/i][/color][/size]
[size=1][color=darkred][i]Maybe we will get in fights,[/i][/color][/size]
[size=1][color=darkred][i]But in the end we set things right.[/i][/color][/size]
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[size=1][color=darkred][i]A girl that can hold me down,[/i][/color][/size]
[size=1][color=darkred][i]And rememdy this ugly frown,[/i][/color][/size]
[size=1][color=darkred][i]One that walks so gracefully,[/i][/color][/size]
[size=1][color=darkred][i]The one and onely that I see.[/i][/color][/size]
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[size=1][color=darkred][i]But if I find her will I know,[/i][/color][/size]
[size=1][color=darkred][i]Or will I let her walk and go,[/i][/color][/size]
[size=1][color=darkred][i]These things I cannot say,[/i][/color][/size]
[size=1][color=darkred][i]For they are for another day.[/i][/color][/size]
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[size=1][color=darkred][i]I guess I must trust my heart,[/i][/color][/size]
[size=1][color=darkred][i]And try not to act so smart,[/i][/color][/size]
[size=1][color=darkred][i]For your mind never tends to think,[/i][/color][/size]
[size=1][color=darkred][i]Clearly about love and illogical things.[/i][/color][/size]
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[size=1][color=darkred][i]So next time that I look to the sky,[/i][/color][/size]
[size=1][color=darkred][i]Or I see into her eyes,[/i][/color][/size]
[size=1][color=darkred][i]I'll throw away all the lies,[/i][/color][/size]
[size=1][color=darkred][i]And follow the dreams I have inside.[/i][/color][/size]
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[size=1][color=darkred]Jeremy Nelson, 3/10/06[/color][/size]