Writing Naruto fanfic?(Teen maybe?)

[eyesofthedemon.]

Ok, this is my first fan-fic here. Enjoy the beginning. Or hate it.(please don't! :( )


"Mommy, Daddy?", asked a young girl of 9 years.(Akira)She looked around her house.She had long black hair, and brown eyes. After searching most of the house, she finally found her parents, but they were dead,lying in small pools of blood. Akira took one look, and burst into tears. She lay over their bodies, sobbing. There was one more than one person at this tragic seen, a young boy, hidden by the shadows. He looked away,and took off.


Akira woke up, in a cold sweat. It was a flashback, she thought wearily. She looked at her arm.It had the japenese symbol for fire. Akira put it down, and looked outside. Another day was beginning, and she had to be at the Academy soon. She rose and began to get ready.

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When Akira arrived at the academy, Sakura was waiting for her. "Hey Akira!" Sakura cried out. Akira shyly waved, and smiled. They had been best friends since Akira had came here(age 10). Sakura eagerly waved at Hinata, another female ninja to come over. Hinata soon came over,and they walked inside to the Academy. Akira looked at her clothes. She had dressed poorly for today. She wore a plain shirt under a grey jacket, and wore black shorts. Sakura looked far more more elegant than her(as usual). Inside, they grabbed some seats, waiting for Iruka-sensei to begin the lesson. Naruto, as usual, was goofing off. Akira waved to him and started to laugh,and Naruto grinned back. She saw another ninja, with blackish-clue hair and wore a blue shirt. She turned to Sakura." Who is he?" she asked, a bit confused. " Only the cutest ninja around, Sasuke," she said dreamily. Hinata and Akira both grinned at each other. It was too obvious. She liked him. "Hey Hinata.." whispered Akira."Who do you like?" she asked gently. "Oh..." Hinata started blushing. She quickly pointed to Naruto, and looked away, as if he saw her blushing. "That's cute!" whispered a happy Akira. Great, that left her out she thought. She didn't like anybody, and neither did anyone else. Iruka-sensei walked in. He cleared his throat. "Today we are pairing up and practicing some fighting. You can't hurt your oppenent." He started to pair up random ninja against each other. Sakura was paired up with Ino, and they appeared to have fire in their eyes. That was probably about Sasuke. Hinata was paired against Naruto. She grinned at Akira, who gave her the thumbs up. Akira, who wasn't paying attention, didn't know who her partner was. She looked around. It was the ninja with the blackish blue hair. That was her partner, she thought

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Sasuke just took one quick look at Akira, and turned away. Sakura, meanwhile, was having a cat fight with Ino about Sasuke. Hinata and Naruto were just talking about something, and she was blushing. Akira appeared to be alone in this situation, so she just went along with the whole group of ninjas going out to their areas to fight. She followed Sasuke, and ended up near the edge of the forest. Sasuke stood there for a moment and then went into a ready stance. So much for being friendly, thought Akira. She went into a ready stance too, and prepared for the attack. Sasuke came at her with incredible speed, ans she was nearly knocked over. She jumped up, and went into the trees. She began to do some hand positions, and moments later, she had a ball of fire in her hand. She held it, looking for her opennent. She didn't see him, but he came out of nowhere, with a ninja star. She quickly threw it at him, but missed. Akira want deeper into the woods, not looking behind her. She suddenly stopped, panting. He was hard! she thought. She pulled out a star herself, and jumped up into the branches. She waited for a few minutes, but there was no sign of him. She jumped down, not looking anywhere. He popped up from above, with a knife in his hand.( the one they have in the anime) She nearly screamed. He simply jumped down, and stood there. "pay more attention to your surrondings girl," he said shortly. Akira just nodded. " Do you like Sakura?" she asked, quietly. "Why?" he said, slightly curious. " She wante dme to ask you," she said quickly, making it up. " No I don't, so stop bothering me." Jeez, he was touchy. She heard Iruka-sensei's call and jumped down. Sasuke did the same, but more smoothly. They met up with Sakura and Ino. They looked as if they were fighting very intensly. Ino glared at Akira, but grinned at Sasuke. They kept moving, and soon arrived at the academy. Sasuke simply said," You need to practice more" to Akira at the end of the day. Akira glared, infuriated. It's not my fault my parents are dead, she thought furiously.

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After a long day, Akira needed her rest, she changed, and went to sleep. She was awakened by another presence.She rubbed her eyes, and went outside. Akira saw the moon. It was so beautiful, she wanted to look at it all night. She jumped up inot a nearby tree, and climbed onto the roof. She lay there, looking at the moon for sometime. She felt another presence nearby.She looked up, and saw Sasuke nearby on another roof. She decided to go to that roof also, and jumped form rooftop to rooftop. Akira stood there, looking at the moon still. Sasuke looked up to find the girl that he had defeated today was her. She looked ok, with that black robe. What was she doing here? he thought. "Hey, how'd you do that fireball technique?' he asked, slightly curious. Akira just shrugged. "I don't know.. " she said softly. " I think it's because of the fire symbol i have on my arm," she replied, showign her mark.Sasuke suddenly had a flashback. He remembered seeing her before, somewhere before, but long ago. He couldn't remember. Akira lay there beside him, gazing at the stars and the moon. She put out her arm, accidently touching his. " Sorry.." Akira said gently, blushing. " Whatever," said Sasuke, turning on his side. No way. She couldn't LIKE that show-off ninja. He was so rude! she thought. Oh, well... Akira returned to watching the stars and the moon.

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Akira finally returned back to her dormitory, where she found Sakura sleeping soundly in her bed. Akira just smiled, and returned to her own sleep. In this dream, there was a flashback. She was being hauled away from her parent's graves. "NOO!" she screamed. Another flashback came. She was being escorted from the village of the Mist after finding her talent with fire. Poeple were terrified of her, fearing that she was a demon, yelled at her. Her brother made no move to help. He just stood there, and looked away. Everyone hated her. Everyone had betrayed her... Akira woke up, from that horrible dream. Sakura meanwhile, was getting ready with breakfast. Akira got changed, and ate. They left for the academy with Hinata from the other dorm minutes later. They arrived on time, just before Iruka-sensei began the lesson. He cleared his throat." I have an announcement to make. We have a new student joining the Academy,Nerikou Mizu." He pointed to the student beside him. Nerikou had spiked up hair(brown),wide eyes, and carried a sword with him. Nerikou quietly said," I like to practice sword jutsu with my father's sword."Could you pu that way Nerikou?' asked Iruka-sensei." It sort of makes me uncomfortable." Nerikou calmly looke up." It's my father's most prized posession, and I never leave home without it." "Oh,.. ok" Iruka -sensei muttered. He then began the lesson. " Today we are practicing sword jutsu, with (of course) swords." Nerikou excitedly began to pay attention. He(Iruka) went on about the techniques, and defense, etc. Nerikou was pysched about everything! When they got some swords for praticing, Narikou pulled out his own, and showed everyone awesome sowrdmanship. Wow! thought Akira.

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