BloodRainShadow Posted March 25, 2006 Share Posted March 25, 2006 Hello people, anyways this is one of my art work. Hope you like it. :catgirl: [url]http://i2.tinypic.com/s6sooz.jpg[/url] [COLOR=RoyalBlue][b]EDIT:[/b][/COLOR] This is another picture I drew during one of my classes dieing of boredum, feel free to tell me what I need for it and so on. Enjoy. :catgirl: [url]http://i2.tinypic.com/s6spxk.jpg[/url] [COLOR=RoyalBlue][b]EDIT:[/b] [size=1]For future reference, please don't post pictures that stretch the OB layout. It makes 56k users suffer unnecessarily, and it makes things look bad and annoying in general. Please read the [url=http://www.otakuboards.com/showthread.php?t=52171][b]Art Studio Rules[/b][/url] for clarification on this specific rule. Also, if you're going to be posting several images within a short period of time, do so in the same thread as your previous work. That way, the forum doesn't get cluttered with alot of repetitive threads. Feel free to PM me with any questions or comments. - Retribution[/size][/COLOR] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jigglyness Posted March 26, 2006 Share Posted March 26, 2006 I think you need to work on basic body structures/proportions, for instance, her left thigh is MUCH shorter than her right thigh. It looks as if its half the length they are supposed to be. Her arms also seem very out of proportion. Try looking at the people around you and imagine they're body structures and put them onto paper. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BloodRainShadow Posted March 26, 2006 Author Share Posted March 26, 2006 WOW :animeblus I made that many mistakes. Well that's how the picture looked like. :animecry: I wish I can make it perfect for once. By the way, thanks for telling that, I'll try my very best to make it the best MWHAHAHAHA jk lol :animeswea Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
she_who_howls Posted April 20, 2006 Share Posted April 20, 2006 i really like your art. it very abstract, and beautiful. and your sigy is awesome!!!! i think ill sign your guest book :D Thanks; Ayoyama Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Retribution Posted April 20, 2006 Share Posted April 20, 2006 [QUOTE=she_who_howls]i really like your art. it very abstract, and beautiful. and your sigy is awesome!!!! i think ill sign your guest book :D Thanks; Ayoyama[/QUOTE] [size=1]She_who_howls, please elaborate on what you like and dislike. Just saying it looks "abstract and beautiful" helps no one. [i]What about it makes it look abstract and beautiful? Is there anything that could be changed to make it look better?[/i] Ask yourself those questions while critiquing someone's work. Honestly, folks, I'm getting a bit tired of repeating myself four times in a row. Let's try to pull things together, please?[/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zero Tolerance Posted May 2, 2006 Share Posted May 2, 2006 [COLOR=Red]Your art is very good. It's different from all the other stuff that you see here all the time (ie- just flat out anime stuff.)[/COLOR] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jigglyness Posted May 2, 2006 Share Posted May 2, 2006 Well, this IS an anime forum, is it not? lol. The dragons are very well drawn. I love the details you put into it, especially the teeth of each individual. It must've taken a lot of patience. ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xwoodlandelf Posted May 6, 2006 Share Posted May 6, 2006 I think it looks GREAT! ~*~ Cho-lin Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Stafal-chan Posted May 6, 2006 Share Posted May 6, 2006 ^_^ your art is good ^_^ but you need to work on your propotions ^_^ i love the amount of detail you put into your dragons ^_^ they look very good ^_^ hee hee yaaay for doodleing in class...i suppose that's better than sleeping right :animeswea hee hee that's what i do :animeswea Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ashwolf Posted May 9, 2006 Share Posted May 9, 2006 The proportions of the body are a tad bit off but honestly that's not half bad! I'm not so good with getting proportions right myself. =P I like the way you drew the head of your dragon. Very fearsome looking. The frills above the eyebrows...nice touch. Ever considered tyring your hand at adding some scale detail in the future? Just a little suggestion I thought I'd throw out there. =) Might I also suggest that in the future you try sketching as opposed to drawing hard lines? It makes it A LOT easier to go in and make the necessary changes (if you want to). And maybe one of those giant pinky erasers...er or whatever. Those are nice too. *ahem* Other than that,keep practicing and you'll get better in no time. *thumbs up* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stuart Posted May 9, 2006 Share Posted May 9, 2006 [FONT=Trebuchet MS][QUOTE=xwoodlandelf]I think it looks GREAT! ~*~ Cho-lin[/QUOTE] Seeing as this is the second time you've done this, maybe you skipped over our Art Studio mods first warning post. [QUOTE=Retribution][size=1]Welcome to OtakuBoards, xwoodlandelf! Since you're new here, you really should read [url=http://www.otakuboards.com/showthread.php?t=53330][b]what's expected of your posts[/b][/url]. What you've said is nice, but it doesn't benefit the artist. Instead, trying saying what you think is done well and what could be improved. Thanks![/size][/QUOTE] So, let's try to work on improvement, please. Thank you.[/FONT] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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