Guest Emery Posted May 16, 2006 Share Posted May 16, 2006 [url]http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/33266050/[/url] Check it out for me please, read the description and stuff. :D Bai. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dooxy Posted May 16, 2006 Share Posted May 16, 2006 kickarse pic, but isnt cloud blond ?xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Retribution Posted May 17, 2006 Share Posted May 17, 2006 [quote name='Dooxy']kickarse pic, but isnt cloud blond ?xD[/quote] [size=1]Welcome to OtakuBoards, Dooxy. Your post is not up to par with OB's post quality standards, and you can get a basic understanding by reading the stickies at the top of the forum labeled "Read this before posting." In short, your post should be lengthened so that your comments help out the artist. Saying it's a "kickarse pic" is all well and good, but [i]what about it makes it good?[/i] Please describe the positives of it, as well as mentioning any room for improvement you see.[/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jigglyness Posted May 17, 2006 Share Posted May 17, 2006 The painting is actually really good although i would try to smooth out his face and his shoulder/arm to make it seems more flowy like his blade. Overall very good piece. I especially love the detail on the zipper. I wouldn't have the patience to work on it on and off for 30 hours. =.= i praise you for that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eleanor Posted May 17, 2006 Share Posted May 17, 2006 [color=dimgray] Awesome job! The shading and clothing ends around the shoulder looks a bit odd, but the rest is great. I know that Cloud is supposed to be in a shaded area, but judging from the shading of face, I personally think that the right side of his hair (from my perspective, not Cloud's) should be highlighted just a little. I hope I'm not coming off as pompous, because I've only just started digitally coloring. v_v Anyways... I hope to see more![/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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