Art Naruto Sprite Comic

[cancer]

This comic was created by a younger sibling of mine that is interested in sprite comics. It is his first sprite comic. Do comment dearies. <3

[Dragon Warrior]

Haha, it was actually funny. 'Cause they're all like, [b]"It can be bad, okay?" "Okay." "Okay?" "Okay."[/b] It reminds me of something that happened with me and my friend. So yes, it's funny, but the quality is a bit iffy. It looks as if you saved the graphic as a GIF, then later saved it as a JPEG because it looks like GIF quality to me. GIFs are bad quality normally unless you have a program that saves GIFs right. Also, work on the backgrounds a bit more. Just grass and sky is a tad plain.

Otherwise, I'd be interested in more. I don't even watch Naruto. I have no idea what it's about :^D But it's funny anyways.

[Lava Lamp]

hmm....
i like it!
i think there is too much left over space, though

[Chikara Kokoro]

It's kind of funny, and it's definitely cute (whether or not it?s meant to be XD). The last panel made me smile.

There is one thing that really irks me about it. The sky is not, and never will be, teal. That always bothers me when sprite comic artists do that. It just makes it seem like they feel that copying and pasting takes so much effort that they don't have enough energy to put in a real background (sorry, that's one of my pet peeves).

[Retribution]

[QUOTE=darkisMINE]hmm....
i like it!
i think there is too much left over space, though[/QUOTE]
[size=1]darkisMINE, I recommend that you read the [url=http://www.otakuboards.com/showthread.php?t=52171][b]Art Studio Rules[/b][/url] as well as the [url=http://www.otakuboards.com/rules.php][b]Official OtakuBoards Rules[/b][/url] so that you understand what is expected of you as far as post quality goes.

Basically, you should leave a useful comment to the artist, and in reality, you were halfway there. You did in fact leave a helpful comment, but if you could expand upon what you said, it'd help the artist out even more. Instead of "there is too much left over space," try "There's too much space left over in the upper halves of all the cells," so that the artist knows exactly what to fix.

Thanks for your patience.[/size]