PWNED Posted July 1, 2006 Share Posted July 1, 2006 Diary Entry 2: June 30th, 2006 [SIZE=1] [I]'Enjoy your time in New York.' That's what I was told when I got here last month, and it's far from what I've done. My Apartment sucks, My jobs crap and I still get lost on my way to the supermarket , or as they call them on this side of the Pacific "General Stores" Big difference here and in Melbourne, the only similarities are that they're both cities and there's a high chance of getting shot or stabbed I was mugged again today; no suprise really. It's summer here so more people are out and about so it makes sense. College is enjoyable though, the only thing that made coming out here worthwhile. It might finally be able to start that band I'm always writing about. With my mad skills at shredding the guitar I could take over the music of the city. I didn't come from effing Woop-Woop to sit around, I came from Woop-Woop to be the 'King of Awesome' as I often put it. Pretty damn late right now, so I'll just make this quick. I've been a lot of better places although Sydney barely beats New York.[/I][/SIZE] Wayde Hahn looked up from his diary and stared blankly out his window into the New York night,various yells of rage were audible in the late night fog. He bet that one of the yellers was old-Tony, the Homeless person that lived on the steps of hte apartment building. The self-proclaimed 'King of Awesome' could never sleep well while staying in a city and he didn't know enough people to feel safe while going out. As he turned away from the window, his gaze lingered on his guitar for a moment before he got up and prepared to go to sleep. "I have the skills" He whispered to himself "Now I just need an outlet for them." as he fell down onto the matress and fell asleep. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ OOC: This RP is telling the story of an Australian Musician that has come to New York both for study and to make it big as a peformer. It's all about his struggle to do well in school and get famous. It's intended as a bit of a humourus rpg and might contain romantic elements to it. Edit: Characters in this RPG can fall under any role; From fellow student, to everyday passerbyer to even a drug-crazed Mugger. The only limit for this is your own imagination. Sign Ups- Can be done in Snippet form or standard form. Name: Age: Occupation: Gender: Appearance: Basic Background: Personality: That's all, It's different to what I usually do so feel free to criticise it if I stuffed stuff up. Additional Edit: I apologise Blayze, My computer doesn't even have Word on it (It's ancient) so I don't have access to a Spell check program. My keyboard is also somewhat unresponsive, I could get a better version up tomorrow from my mums house so just bare with me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blayze Posted July 1, 2006 Share Posted July 1, 2006 [b][size=1]PWNED[/size][/b][size=1], I'm positive that you've been around long enough to know that RPs should have a solid three-paragraph backstory at least. If you want people to get into your RP, then you should include a little more detail into your opening post, after all, this is the part that gets the target audience hooked, as well as the part that set the level of quality for the RP as a whole. Also, give a little more detail about who the characters the RPers will be playing are. Are they friends of the musician? Are they random people from around New York? You know the kind of thing I mean. You might also want to check your spelling and grammar before posting things in future. If there are any questions, please don't hesitate to send a PM to me or one of the other Arena Moderators. -Blayze [/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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