Writing Knights of the Old Republic- Bane of the Force (Mature- VL)

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[SIZE=2][COLOR=Teal]Chapter 1: The Betrayal of Friends[/COLOR][/SIZE]

Traya was defeated. The Force was safe. the 2 Exiles Magnus Antari And Bane celebrated but the Happiness would be shattered by betrayal. Bane, Magnus's most close and valiable friend turned on him. Magnus was surprised"Bane what are you doing?!!"Bane replyed with a smile most foul" Taking my place in the galixy Magnus though it may pain me I CAN NOT LET YOU LIVE SO FROM NOW ON I AM YOUR ENEMY!!!" Just as he said that the Ebon Hawk came from the chasm below and Magnus jumped on to the top of it and esaped.

Magnus thinking he had esaped his former friend Bane land on the core world of Couresant. But Bane somehow tracks Magnus down and finds him on top of a building where Magnus was waiting. "Bane, of all that has happened... the death the Sith and Kreia. Through all of this I would not believe you would betray me.Even when Kreia warped your mind to the dark side, I still concidered you a great friend. But apprently I was wrong. So let us end this bloody chapter of betrayal and deception." Magnus then swicthed on his silver doublebladed lightsabers and Bane swicthed on both of his red lightsabers. Then they clash in a shower of sparks both thrusting, cuttin and slashing each other their sabers making searing sounds as they do. Bane then shunts and stabs Magnus in the shoulder with his right hand lightsaber and force pushs him away.

Then the appretices Handmaiden, Atton and Bao Dur join in the fight as well. Bane just turns to them and smirks, "So... you also want to bring me down. Ha! Bring it." Atton was the first to attack with his green lightsaber and wildly attacks Bane, him blocking all of the attack easily and then finally just chopping his hand off and stabbing him in the stomach. Then easily kills Handmaiden with a force crush. Bao Dur however just gets his mech arm cut away. And Magnus seeing his apprentices and his love, Handmaidin die made him angry and he starts attacking rapidly and fiercely. But bane shunts and kicks him off the building barely hanging on to the edge. As Bane go in for the kill a blaster shot rings out and hits Bane but how did he not since the presence of the shooter?

The shooter walked through the steam that was riseing from the building that they were on. A droid with rusty red paint and carbon scoring on most of his body. "Threat: If you so much as singe a hair on my master I will rip out your inards and use them as Oremental assessories." said HK-47 holding a blaster pointed directly at Bane's head. "Ah... HK... Why do you support this weakling? You of all things should apprecitate what I am trying to do... Rid the galaxy of such weakness." said Bane in a calm voice. "Unappearent Explaination- When I kill I do so with purpose and with a distinct hum in my memory core that tells me that it was for a purpose. You however Kill without purpose... Because of this meatbag you aren't worthy of my skill. Addenum- Plus as I see it right now you are in for a fight."
This left Magnus an opening so he lifted him self up and started fighting with Bane again.

Magnus uses force push to faze him but Bane was barely affected when he retaliates with Force Storm. This brings down Magnus real good than HK gets ballsy and goes close range with a pistol this distract Bane enough so that Magnus?s smoldering body can Recover Bane hacks off one of HK?s arms than turns back to Magnus "This is all you could muster Magnus Your pathetic more pathetic than your apprentices" Then Magnus in a rage uses Force Wave to knock Bane of of the building and into the streets. This knocks Bane off the building entirely so a fight in the Coresant streets begins.

Magnus and Bane are jumping from car to car Sabers clashing and the force wavering with every attack it is a fight that could level a city... They finally jumped to the top of a building this is where this battle would be decided they fought and fought but finally fatigue was kicking in. Magnus with scorched cuts on his body let go a attack that not even bane had seen a bolt of fire spewed out of Magnus's hand an attack calls Force Fireball (settle down I know its not a real attack but something had to match the Lightning) This stunned Bane forcing him to back up to a skylight and finally Magnus stabbed Bane in the Stomach. Bane fell back wards and fell in to a carbon-freezing chamber for containment of criminals. But Magnus finally succumbing to the wounds on his body fell...

Bao-dur the only one Bane did not kill came and picked up Magnus. Hours later he put Magnus in a kolto tank for recovery. KInowing there was no way Magnus could survive Bao-dur put Magnus in Stasis Field until his wounds healed he knew it was not possible with the current tech. So he made sure Magnus would stay hidden until it was that advanced. No one knows where Magnus lay hidden.