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[HeartStopper]

This story takes place in the year 2198, Global Warming has finally started to make a gigantic change on Earth. Enourmous Ice Caps in the north pole began to melt revealing a temple. Archeologist began to excavate the sight. The Archeologist were medaling with something evil.
The Archeologist found a hidden chamber that held a astonishingly well preserved body, but what the Archeologist didn't know was that the body was "preserved" it was ALIVE.
The "monster" awoke and killed all the Archeologists. The monster is known as Tevon Hesone. He is a alien hybrid sent to Earth to enslave all humans. Once Tevon was awokened he summoned an army of Super Hybrid Warriors and he also summoned an army of Gigantic Organic Mechs.
Tevon Heson went public and announced to the world he was the Mosiah and tried to become to king of the world. A top secret team called W.R.A.T.H. World Resistance Against Tevon Hesone. Nations involved in this team are Japan, U.S., India, and Russia.
Now W.R.A.T.H. is recruiting 3 highly trained fighters to take on Tevon Hesone.


Like it? I'll post images of the characters, and I'll update the story ;)

[Guest Ayumu_rocks]

It's a bit odd...

And don't you mean the Mesiah?
[COLOR=DeepSkyBlue][SIZE=1][INDENT][B]Ayumu_rocks[/B] , It's great that you took the time to respond, but your criticism is useless to the author, you didn't take the time to explain why you felt it?s a bit odd. You didn't give them anything on how they could improve their story. In the future if you are going to comment on someone?s story, try to at least explain yourself so the author has something to go on for either improving or expanding their story. ~indifference[/INDENT][/SIZE][/COLOR]

[Guest xXGelXx]

It is interesting but it also sounds a lot like that movie Alien VS. Predator.
[COLOR=DeepSkyBlue][SIZE=1][INDENT][B]xXGelXx[/B] , It's great that you took the time to respond, but your input is useless to the author, you didn't take the time to explain why you felt it?s like the movie Alien vs. Predator or why you thought it is interesting. You didn't give them anything on how they could improve their story. In the future if you are going to comment on someone?s story, try to at least explain yourself so the author has something to go on for either improving or expanding their story. ~indifference[/INDENT][/SIZE][/COLOR]

[Guest Dogwaffle]

lol, it sounds like AVP and queen of the damned mixed...anyway
i'd read it
[COLOR=DeepSkyBlue][SIZE=1][INDENT][B]Dogwaffle[/B] , It's great that you took the time to respond, but your input is useless to the author, you didn't take the time to explain why you felt it?s like AVP and queen of the dammed mix or anything else for that matter. You didn't give them anything on how they could improve their story. In the future if you are going to comment on someone?s story, try to at least explain yourself so the author has something to go on for either improving or expanding their story. ~indifference[/INDENT][/SIZE][/COLOR]