Sign Up the evil rain M(v realistic nonstop violence and gore )(L some intence language)

[madwitch5]

basic story
a group (5) of 15 year old friends from a small town no ones herd of befor go to school one day and this school has a very bloody history that was locked away from the students by the town. but anyway they go to school and find an old text book written in blood it says "put this in <><><><><>" its all scratched out and then it says"and find out the truth" this intrigs the friends and they try to find out more. The story kicks off here and we are supposed to uncover the mystrey and find the door the book gose in, then we'll start a new thred to think of the montrous things that happen ide like to include everyone.

The story of the school back story

in 1955 a school was built on the portal to hell, when the school was up and running satan was enraged and sent these monstrous god awful creaturs to kill the teachers students and the town. When the portal was opened it stayed open and 5 students took guns knives and anything els they could find down the portal and close it forever but the sucky thing was there souls were stuck in the portal forever accept one she escaped and wrote in her oun blood "put this in" she was attacked thats what made the scratches she got away and wrote "and find out the truth" and died. After everything in the town was cleaned up the whole town got together and decided to keep this a secret from future generations.

now in the year 2006 there are new teachers new students and a new suspicious mayor his name is Mayor Bradly Jake has a funny feeling about him he just cant put his finger on it. At the start of the new school year jake is alone and no one wants a thing to do with him untill he meets these kids (this is where you guys come in) and become best friends. (Sorry blaze this is all i can think of)

sign up info
heres how it should be filled out i need 4 people for the friends i will read your sign up info and decide whos i like best, there will be more positions in the second chapter.

Name:

description of charicter:

wepon of choice: (reminder you will use this in the future to fight)

heres my'n as an example

Name: jake

description of charicter: tall, muscular, hes a witch(which means hes wiccan)
and is very misunderstud because of his religion

Wepon of choice: Pistol with a laser sight.

i hope you enjoy reading the rpg and for the people who get picked good luck with my first rpg.

[Blayze]

[size=1]Hello there, [b]madwitch5[/b]. I am Blayze, your friendly Arena Moderator.

Unfortunately, while there is nothing wrong with the rating of this thread, or the actual content itself, it does fall well below Arena quality guidelines. We insist that all RP backstories are at least three paragraphs long, and it is usually a good idea to take heed of what the Moderators suggest. It is very difficult for someone to get into a story with that little backstory.

You may also want to use a spelling and grammar checker on this. I also sugget having a look at the [b][url="http://Adventure%20Square%20Basics%20Sticky"]Adventure Square Basics Sticky [/url][/b][url="http://before%20you%20go%20posting%20anything%20else.%3Cbr%20/%3E%0A%3Cbr%20/%3E%0AI%27m%20going%20to%20leave%20this%20thread%20open%20for%20you%20to%20edit%20the%20backstory,%20but%20if%20I%20don%27t%20see%20an%20improvement,%20I%20will%20be%20forced%20to%20lock%20the%20thread.%3Cbr%20/%3E%0A%3Cbr%20/%3E%0ADon%27t%20hesitate%20to%20PM%20me%20or%20one%20of%20the%20other%20Arena%20Moderators%20if%20you%20have%20a%20question.%3Cbr%20/%3E%0A%3Cbr%20/%3E%0A-Blayze%3Cbr%20/%3E"]before you go posting anything else.

I'm going to leave this thread open for you to edit the backstory, but if I don't see an improvement, I will be forced to lock the thread.

Don't hesitate to PM me or one of the other Arena Moderators if you have a question.

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