Allen Posted July 18, 2006 Share Posted July 18, 2006 [COLOR=Red]Hellhole is the title. It starts with there being an explosion undergroud. It takes place in the city of Razz in the present.The city send a construction crew to investigate. All contact is lost with the crew so the police are sent in. After the police enter the sewer it caves in and all Hell breakes loose. The main charecter is John Pirrce, a rookie cop thats been on the force for 2 months.While undergroud he finds a huge labratory filled with slaughtered scientist cops and all sorts of people.The story sort of picks up from there.[/COLOR] [COLOR=Red]Its supposed to be a horror manga. In the labratoy Jake meets some of the scientist,a construction worker, some fellow cops monsters and a whole lot of monsters.During his escape he unravles the mystery of the lab and the monsters. :D [/COLOR] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chikara Kokoro Posted July 19, 2006 Share Posted July 19, 2006 Could you possibly give more description of the main characters and what the story is about? As of right now I don't like it, but maybe you can change my mind (especially with spaces between sentences; those make me happy). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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