Gavin Posted August 14, 2006 Share Posted August 14, 2006 [FONT=Verdana][LEFT][SIZE=1][CENTER][IMG]http://zeitgeistglee.250free.com/Chronicles.jpg[/IMG][/CENTER] The twin suns of the Nyx system had set on third planet, leaving only the pale starlight to illuminate the surface of the dead world. Years beforehand the planet had been cleared for resale, the stench of death was still potent, as though the fallen still lingered in anger against those who had brought oblivion to them. The only source of life was three figures quietly sitting in the face of a large camp fire, nobody spoke, nobody needed to speak, this was just another brief rest on a dead world, just one more in the two decades they?d spent running from Frieza. One of the figures relaxed back against the ground, his tail tied around his midsection like a belt, Bardock never enjoyed these little stops, he always felt that eventually one of Frieza?s goon squad would catch up to them and finish off the last few survivors from Planet Vegeta. Bardock was pushing fifty, and yet didn?t look a day older than thirty, that was the nature with Saiyans, they reach their prime quick and stayed there for decades before eventually meeting their end in glorious combat against an entire world of enemies, or at least that?s what every Saiyan wanted, they might not live long enough to do so. Toma and Seripa sat nearby, Toma was taller than Bardock and a few years younger, he?d been his right hand for as long as Bardock?s team had been a team, now the three of them were the last free Saiyans left in the galaxy. His fingers traced over a few loose stones on the ground, the area was an old battle field, probably the ruins on an old city where the Nyxans had made their last stand against whoever had cleared the planet. Bardock held them between his fingers for a moment before crushing them into dust, against most other beings in the galaxy Bardock and his team were a nightmare, death incarnate, against Frieza and his elites, they were nothing more than corpses. Seripa was the youngest member of the team by far, she?d joined only a few years ago, before Bardock had really earned the notoriety that had put him in such demand, and eventually lead to the death of half his team at Dodoria?s hands. The Saiyan had never forgiven himself for that, he?d lost two good men, two good friends because he didn?t see he was becoming a threat to Frieza, he feared what Saiyans were capable of becoming, eventually the Legendary Super Saiyan would have returned, and that would have spelled the end for Frieza. Instead Bardock sat alone with his remaining comrades, the last remains of a once proud race. Toma it seems had been following the same train of thought Bardock, but it was Seripa who spoke first. ?[b]So we?re it ? No other survivors except for Vegeta?s team ?[/b]? ?[b]It looks that way.[/b]? Bardock returned his attention to the fire, it was a symbol of the rage that burned within him, but he knew he?d never be strong enough to take Frieza, there was only one being who could do that, he?d seen it. Slowly he formed the words, although neither Seripa nor Toma had ever said it to him directly, Bardock?s ?visions? were not something they had complete faith in. ?[b]There may be one other.[/b]? ?[b]Who ?[/b]? ?[b]My son.[/b]? ?[b]Kakarott ? What makes you think he survived ?[/b]? ?[b]As far as I know, he was scheduled to leave for Earth just before the planet blew.[/b]? Toma sighed, they?d been on the run for the last twenty years, sometimes, just sometimes he considered piloting his pod straight for Frieza and meeting his end like a proper Saiyan. But Bardock was his friend, he trusted him and it was that trust which had kept them alive for so long, the didn?t mean however that he wouldn?t question his friend?s plan, especially ones that put them at risk of being caught. ?[b]Still an if.[/b]? ?[b]Even if it is Toma, we need to check it out. He?s a full blood, one of only seven left.[/b]? ?[b]What makes you think he won?t side with Vegeta as opposed to us ? Hell he might even join Frieza.[/b]? ?[b]Because he?s my son.[/b]? ?[b]So?s Raditz.[/b]? Bardock scowled at that sentiment, but Toma was right, Bardock had managed to contact Raditz year back and asked him to join them, his elder son?s response had been that Bardock was a coward to keep hiding and should have met his end on Vegeta like a real Saiyan father. Bardock hadn?t seen Kakarott since he was just a baby, before he?d been sent to Earth, but Raditz had told his father there?d been no word from his little brother since then, it struck Bardock as strange, Earth was a low class planet, it shouldn?t have taken him any longer than a few years to conquer it. Perhaps something had happened to him, but if he had died, then who was it Bardock had seen challenging Frieza on that?s strange world. ?[b]Bardock?s right Toma, even if Raditz wouldn?t side with us, at least he never told Vegeta we survived. Kakarott is our best chance for an additional man. He?s probably in his twenties now right Bardock ?[/b]? Seripa hadn?t spoken since the conversation began, but generally if she agreed with something, it was the best course of action. She?d become the voice of moderation among the three, if Toma was too pessimistic or Bardock?s plans were too rash, Seripa was not above letting either of them know it. ?[b]Yeah.[/b]? ?[b]How far away is Earth ?[/b]? Having given in to defeat, Toma wanted as much info as he could about the next stage in this little sojourn. That way at least he could form some kind of back up plan in case something went wrong. ?[b]About six months in the pods.[/b]? ?[b]Better get going then.[/b]? Toma and Seripa stood up from the fire, dusting themselves off. Bardock stayed sitting a moment, reflect the events of his life that had brought him to this moment in time. He wasn?t happy about it, the Saiyans as a race had grown complacent and arrogant, failing to teach their sons how to be men as well as warriors, and they?d paid the ultimate price for that. ?[b]Thanks.[/b]? ?[b]You don?t need to thank us Bardock, we?re still a team.[/b]? ?[b]Still.[/b]? The hum of the pods activation was enough to relax Bardock?s nerves. His eyes closed as he tried to picture what his son would look like, of course that fact that most Saiyan children resembled their parents meant that Kakarott would look nearly exactly like his father, but perhaps there would be differences, he?d just have to wait and see... [center]|[B]Underground[/B]|[/center] OK if you're reading this then obviously you've seen the thread in the Inn, or perhaps you've not and this just piqued your interest. If you've not already go check out the Saiyan: Chronicles thread in the Arena for the Prologue and Sign Up details. As I said in that thread, I would be providing a cast list from which people could pick their desired character from, this will include the Z Fighters and even villains for those who would like to only participate for only one Saga. Ok so without further delay I?ll get to the casting. [center]|[b]Cast[/b]|[/center] [b]Saiyans[/b] Bardock [[b]Played by Myself[/b]] Toma [[b]Played by Yoda[/b]] Seripa [[b]Played by Ezekiel[/b]] Kakarott/Goku [[b]Played by Chaos[/b]] Vegeta [[b]Played by Andrew[/b]] Gohan [[b]Played by Sakura[/b]] [b]Z Fighters[/b] Tien & Chaozu [Available] Krillin [Available] Piccolo [[b]Played by White[/b]] Yamcha [Available] [b]Supporting Cast[/b] Chi-Chi [[b]Played by Lady Katana[/b]] Bulma [Available] Master Roshi [Available] North Kai/King Kai [[b]Played by Myself[/b]] Kami & Mr. Popo [[B]Played by Shy[/b]] Dende [Available] [b]Villains[/b] Raditz [[b]Played by The Boss[/b]] Nappa [[b]Played by White[/b]] Zarbon & Dodoria [[b]Played by Mystic Ninja[/b]] Ginyu Force [[b]Played by Dragon Warrior[/b]] Frieza [[b]Played by Mystic Ninja[/b]] Now as you might expect I don?t anticipate filling each and every one of those slots. Those characters who are not picked will become NPCs for the RPG, however I would like to get plenty of people to sign up. [center]|[b]Set Up[/b]|[/center] Despite the fact I have little love for them, Saiyan: Chronicles will be a chapter based RPG, but only in the loosest sense, I will be giving a cast list for each of the two Sagas and only the characters mentioned will be able to post. In the cast of the Saiyan Saga this will mean all Frieza Saga applicants will have to wait a little while before being able to post. This is just so we can keep everything neat and orderly. [center]|[b]Everything Else[/b]|[/center] As per usual this is an Underground thread, so any questions or suggestions you may have can be posted here.[/SIZE][/LEFT][/FONT] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options... Zen Posted August 14, 2006 Share Posted August 14, 2006 [color=darkred][size=1] I sent you a PM concerning my wish to play [b]Raditz[/b] with a different fate at hand. I am very interested in this, DBZ being my first loved anime, I still have a soft spot for it. Check it out.[/color][/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options... Gavin Posted August 15, 2006 Author Share Posted August 15, 2006 [SIZE=1]Seeing as we've the whole thing ironed out now Mike I've got no problem with you playing Raditz, I think the encounter between you, Bill and whoever plays Piccolo will be an interesting one. Just of note I've added two more "accepted" people to the cast list. Sakura who will be playing the role of Gohan, and Shy who's agreed to cameo as Kami and Mr Popo.[/SIZE] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options... Shy Posted August 15, 2006 Share Posted August 15, 2006 [strike][size=1]Is this RPG going to be using some form of the chapter system for posting, or will it be free-for-all? On that note, since I'm playing as a supporting cast member I'd like to have some idea of how often I should post once this starts up. -Shy[/size][/strike] [size=1][b]Edit:[/b] Yes there are! Reading is fundamental![/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options... Gavin Posted August 15, 2006 Author Share Posted August 15, 2006 [QUOTE=Shy][size=1]Is this RPG going to be using some form of the chapter system for posting, or will it be free-for-all? On that note, since I'm playing as a supporting cast member I'd like to have some idea of how often I should post once this starts up. -Shy[/size][/QUOTE] [SIZE=1]Yeah, we'll be using chapters, but no posting order. The details are covered under the "[B]Set Up[/B]" heading of the original post, but to elaborate further, while there will be a Cast List for each Saga, anyone who is on that list will be able to post as regularly as they like, so long as it doesn't become excessive of course. [[b]Edit[/b]] Just a quick edit, Yoda will be playing the part of Toma.[/SIZE] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options... Dragon Warrior Posted August 16, 2006 Share Posted August 16, 2006 [size=1]Okay, I'll crack a question at you, my fellow Gavin :) In your cast list under "Villains," you have the Ginyu Force all as one. Would I have to sign up as the whole Ginyu Force or can I just be one of them? Jeice was always my favorite character in the Dragon Ball series, so I can't help but be kinda partial to just him :)[/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options... Gavin Posted August 16, 2006 Author Share Posted August 16, 2006 [SIZE=1][CENTER]|[B]Update: August 16th[/B]|[/CENTER] OK now that we've talked it over, I'm happy to announce Dragon Warrior will be playing the multiple roles of Frieza's hilarious Ginyu Force. This brings the number for the RPG to ten.[/SIZE] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options... Ellerby Posted August 19, 2006 Share Posted August 19, 2006 [color=#555555][FONT=Tahoma]I plan to be signing up as either Piccolo or Nappa but I have a quick question; [INDENT][I]If I decide to go with Piccolo and I get him, when we're on Namek would I be playing Nail while he's around aswell?[/I][/INDENT][/FONT][/COLOR] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options... Gavin Posted August 23, 2006 Author Share Posted August 23, 2006 [SIZE=1][CENTER]|[B]Update: August 25th[/B]|[/CENTER] Given the number of spare spots that have gone unfilled in the RPG, I'm giving players the option of taking on a secondary character. In my case, I'll be taking on the role of North Kai as well as Bardock, and White has agreed to play Piccolo as well as Nappa. Your secondary role will not require the same level of effort as the primary, but that isn't to say I will accept sloppy posts, you've all got far too much talent for that. As well as this, I've invited Neil [Chaos] for the role of Kakarott/Goku, which reunites several of the oldest DBZ RPers still frequenting OB.[/SIZE] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options... Guest Mystic Ninja Posted August 26, 2006 Share Posted August 26, 2006 This thread has caught my interest, and I was wondering if I could play the part of Frieza and Zarbon/Dodoria? I am a die hard DBZ fan and your thread caught my interest. I would've wanted to be Burter, but he's under Ginyu force, and that's taken. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options... Gavin Posted August 26, 2006 Author Share Posted August 26, 2006 [quote name='Mystic Ninja']This thread has caught my interest, and I was wondering if I could play the part of Frieza and Zarbon/Dodoria? I am a die hard DBZ fan and your thread caught my interest. I would've wanted to be Burter, but he's under Ginyu force, and that's taken.[/quote] [SIZE=1]Given that I haven't seen anything by you Mystic Ninja, I'm going to ask for a sample post from you to gauge whether or not you've got the level of quality required for this project. If I'm happy with it, then I have no problem with you taking Frieza.[/SIZE] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options... Guest Mystic Ninja Posted September 1, 2006 Share Posted September 1, 2006 [quote name='Gavin][SIZE=1']Given that I haven't seen anything by you Mystic Ninja, I'm going to ask for a sample post from you to gauge whether or not you've got the level of quality required for this project. If I'm happy with it, then I have no problem with you taking Frieza.[/SIZE][/quote] Ok, like a sample story, or a sample normal post. If you want a story, then I'll give you one here. Frieza sat upon his hovercraft looking quite pleased with himself. After all, why shouldn't he be, he was another step closer to achieving immortality. And the best part was, he didn't have to do anything to get it. "Lord Frieza," said Zarbon. "We have located another village to the north. It appears to have a dragonball." "Excellent work, Mr. Zarbon." Frieza couldn't be happier with the way things were going. They had been there less than a week, and they already had four of the seven dragonballs. "Let's go and pay them a visit." And without another word, Frieza, Zarbon, Dodoria, and the rest of Frieza's henchmen flew off towards the large cluster of power levels. The Namek's had no idea that they would soon be dead. Most were working on the hydrangea trees that populated the landscape. So it was a surprise to them when Frieza and his men arrived at their peaceful little village. The villagers stopped what they were doing at once. They turned to look at these newcomers. The same question popped into every villagers mind. "Who are these newcomers, and why do they have the dragonballs?" "Hello," said Freiza politely, "I would like to speak to the village elder." An old looking Namek came out of one of the bigger rock-like houses. "I am the elder of this village,? said the Elder, looking skeptically at Frieza and his men. "What do you seek?" "Well, not much." Said Frieza. "Just your dragonball. Hand it over and no one will get hurt." "I cannot give the dragonball to someone who is evil," replied the elder, ?and I sense much evil in you.? "The other elders said the same thing," replied Frieza with a smirk on his face. "But in the end, they gave it up. Won't you cooperate?" "No! I cannot give the dragonballs to someone so evil!" "Well, if you?re sure. Mr. Zarbon! Mr. Dodoria! I would like you to persuade him to give us the dragonball." "Yes, Master Frieza!" replied Dororia and Zarbon. And without another word, they slaughtered all the villagers in front of the village elder. All the elder could do was watch as namek after namek were killed. Until only he remained. "Y-Your a monster!" "Come now, why don't you give us the dragonball. If you do, I'll spare your life." "D-do you swear by that?" "Of course. Just give me the dragonball and you can go free." "Ok. I-I'll get it." The elder walked back into his abode and came back out with an orange ball with 5 stars on it. "H-here." "Good. See what happens when we cooperate?" Zarbon took the ball and added it to the others. "But now that I have the dragonball, you are no longer needed." An evil grin appeared on Friezas' face. "Mr. Zarbon, relieve the elder of his duties." Zarbon raised his hand, and a blast of Chi shot right through the elder. "Y-You prom-is-ed tha-t you-u woul-d, yo-u woul-d...." And with that, the elders' life ended. "Now I have four dragonballs in my possession." And then Frieza did something he almost never did. He smiled. "My dream of immortality is almost a reality. Mr. Dodoria, where is the next dragonball?" Dodoria pushed a few buttons on his scouter. "Master Frieza, the closest village is 20 km east of here." "Hmm. Mr. Dodoria. Mr. Zarbon. I would like you to take care of it for me. I will take these dragonballs to the ship and await you there. Understood?" "Yes sir!" they both replied. And with that, they parted ways. "I'm so close to achieving immortality. Muhahahahaha!" Frieza kept laughing all the way back to his ship. Little did he know that just then a ship containing Vegeta had landed along with two warriors from Earth. How was that? I?m much better at writing a one on one fight though. But I had to include Zarbon/Dodoria, since I wanted to play them too. So, I hope it?s at least readable, if it is, I?m glad even if I don?t get the part. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options... Gavin Posted September 5, 2006 Author Share Posted September 5, 2006 [SIZE=1][CENTER]|[B]Update: September 5th[/B]|[/CENTER] To be honest Mystic Ninja, I'd have preferred if you PMed it to me, but I suppose this way is fine as well. There's nothing really wrong with it, save that Frieza refers to Zarbon and Dodoria as "Mr" a title he never used in the Anime and Frieza should be referred to as Lord, not "Master". However aside from that I'm happy, so you're in as Frieza, Zarbon and Dodoria. Congrats.[/SIZE] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options... Create an account or sign in to comment You need to be a member in order to leave a comment Create an account Sign up for a new account in our community. It's easy! Register a new account Sign in Already have an account? Sign in here. Sign In Now Share More sharing options... Followers 0
Zen Posted August 14, 2006 Share Posted August 14, 2006 [color=darkred][size=1] I sent you a PM concerning my wish to play [b]Raditz[/b] with a different fate at hand. I am very interested in this, DBZ being my first loved anime, I still have a soft spot for it. Check it out.[/color][/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gavin Posted August 15, 2006 Author Share Posted August 15, 2006 [SIZE=1]Seeing as we've the whole thing ironed out now Mike I've got no problem with you playing Raditz, I think the encounter between you, Bill and whoever plays Piccolo will be an interesting one. Just of note I've added two more "accepted" people to the cast list. Sakura who will be playing the role of Gohan, and Shy who's agreed to cameo as Kami and Mr Popo.[/SIZE] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shy Posted August 15, 2006 Share Posted August 15, 2006 [strike][size=1]Is this RPG going to be using some form of the chapter system for posting, or will it be free-for-all? On that note, since I'm playing as a supporting cast member I'd like to have some idea of how often I should post once this starts up. -Shy[/size][/strike] [size=1][b]Edit:[/b] Yes there are! Reading is fundamental![/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gavin Posted August 15, 2006 Author Share Posted August 15, 2006 [QUOTE=Shy][size=1]Is this RPG going to be using some form of the chapter system for posting, or will it be free-for-all? On that note, since I'm playing as a supporting cast member I'd like to have some idea of how often I should post once this starts up. -Shy[/size][/QUOTE] [SIZE=1]Yeah, we'll be using chapters, but no posting order. The details are covered under the "[B]Set Up[/B]" heading of the original post, but to elaborate further, while there will be a Cast List for each Saga, anyone who is on that list will be able to post as regularly as they like, so long as it doesn't become excessive of course. [[b]Edit[/b]] Just a quick edit, Yoda will be playing the part of Toma.[/SIZE] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragon Warrior Posted August 16, 2006 Share Posted August 16, 2006 [size=1]Okay, I'll crack a question at you, my fellow Gavin :) In your cast list under "Villains," you have the Ginyu Force all as one. Would I have to sign up as the whole Ginyu Force or can I just be one of them? Jeice was always my favorite character in the Dragon Ball series, so I can't help but be kinda partial to just him :)[/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gavin Posted August 16, 2006 Author Share Posted August 16, 2006 [SIZE=1][CENTER]|[B]Update: August 16th[/B]|[/CENTER] OK now that we've talked it over, I'm happy to announce Dragon Warrior will be playing the multiple roles of Frieza's hilarious Ginyu Force. This brings the number for the RPG to ten.[/SIZE] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ellerby Posted August 19, 2006 Share Posted August 19, 2006 [color=#555555][FONT=Tahoma]I plan to be signing up as either Piccolo or Nappa but I have a quick question; [INDENT][I]If I decide to go with Piccolo and I get him, when we're on Namek would I be playing Nail while he's around aswell?[/I][/INDENT][/FONT][/COLOR] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gavin Posted August 23, 2006 Author Share Posted August 23, 2006 [SIZE=1][CENTER]|[B]Update: August 25th[/B]|[/CENTER] Given the number of spare spots that have gone unfilled in the RPG, I'm giving players the option of taking on a secondary character. In my case, I'll be taking on the role of North Kai as well as Bardock, and White has agreed to play Piccolo as well as Nappa. Your secondary role will not require the same level of effort as the primary, but that isn't to say I will accept sloppy posts, you've all got far too much talent for that. As well as this, I've invited Neil [Chaos] for the role of Kakarott/Goku, which reunites several of the oldest DBZ RPers still frequenting OB.[/SIZE] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Mystic Ninja Posted August 26, 2006 Share Posted August 26, 2006 This thread has caught my interest, and I was wondering if I could play the part of Frieza and Zarbon/Dodoria? I am a die hard DBZ fan and your thread caught my interest. I would've wanted to be Burter, but he's under Ginyu force, and that's taken. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gavin Posted August 26, 2006 Author Share Posted August 26, 2006 [quote name='Mystic Ninja']This thread has caught my interest, and I was wondering if I could play the part of Frieza and Zarbon/Dodoria? I am a die hard DBZ fan and your thread caught my interest. I would've wanted to be Burter, but he's under Ginyu force, and that's taken.[/quote] [SIZE=1]Given that I haven't seen anything by you Mystic Ninja, I'm going to ask for a sample post from you to gauge whether or not you've got the level of quality required for this project. If I'm happy with it, then I have no problem with you taking Frieza.[/SIZE] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Mystic Ninja Posted September 1, 2006 Share Posted September 1, 2006 [quote name='Gavin][SIZE=1']Given that I haven't seen anything by you Mystic Ninja, I'm going to ask for a sample post from you to gauge whether or not you've got the level of quality required for this project. If I'm happy with it, then I have no problem with you taking Frieza.[/SIZE][/quote] Ok, like a sample story, or a sample normal post. If you want a story, then I'll give you one here. Frieza sat upon his hovercraft looking quite pleased with himself. After all, why shouldn't he be, he was another step closer to achieving immortality. And the best part was, he didn't have to do anything to get it. "Lord Frieza," said Zarbon. "We have located another village to the north. It appears to have a dragonball." "Excellent work, Mr. Zarbon." Frieza couldn't be happier with the way things were going. They had been there less than a week, and they already had four of the seven dragonballs. "Let's go and pay them a visit." And without another word, Frieza, Zarbon, Dodoria, and the rest of Frieza's henchmen flew off towards the large cluster of power levels. The Namek's had no idea that they would soon be dead. Most were working on the hydrangea trees that populated the landscape. So it was a surprise to them when Frieza and his men arrived at their peaceful little village. The villagers stopped what they were doing at once. They turned to look at these newcomers. The same question popped into every villagers mind. "Who are these newcomers, and why do they have the dragonballs?" "Hello," said Freiza politely, "I would like to speak to the village elder." An old looking Namek came out of one of the bigger rock-like houses. "I am the elder of this village,? said the Elder, looking skeptically at Frieza and his men. "What do you seek?" "Well, not much." Said Frieza. "Just your dragonball. Hand it over and no one will get hurt." "I cannot give the dragonball to someone who is evil," replied the elder, ?and I sense much evil in you.? "The other elders said the same thing," replied Frieza with a smirk on his face. "But in the end, they gave it up. Won't you cooperate?" "No! I cannot give the dragonballs to someone so evil!" "Well, if you?re sure. Mr. Zarbon! Mr. Dodoria! I would like you to persuade him to give us the dragonball." "Yes, Master Frieza!" replied Dororia and Zarbon. And without another word, they slaughtered all the villagers in front of the village elder. All the elder could do was watch as namek after namek were killed. Until only he remained. "Y-Your a monster!" "Come now, why don't you give us the dragonball. If you do, I'll spare your life." "D-do you swear by that?" "Of course. Just give me the dragonball and you can go free." "Ok. I-I'll get it." The elder walked back into his abode and came back out with an orange ball with 5 stars on it. "H-here." "Good. See what happens when we cooperate?" Zarbon took the ball and added it to the others. "But now that I have the dragonball, you are no longer needed." An evil grin appeared on Friezas' face. "Mr. Zarbon, relieve the elder of his duties." Zarbon raised his hand, and a blast of Chi shot right through the elder. "Y-You prom-is-ed tha-t you-u woul-d, yo-u woul-d...." And with that, the elders' life ended. "Now I have four dragonballs in my possession." And then Frieza did something he almost never did. He smiled. "My dream of immortality is almost a reality. Mr. Dodoria, where is the next dragonball?" Dodoria pushed a few buttons on his scouter. "Master Frieza, the closest village is 20 km east of here." "Hmm. Mr. Dodoria. Mr. Zarbon. I would like you to take care of it for me. I will take these dragonballs to the ship and await you there. Understood?" "Yes sir!" they both replied. And with that, they parted ways. "I'm so close to achieving immortality. Muhahahahaha!" Frieza kept laughing all the way back to his ship. Little did he know that just then a ship containing Vegeta had landed along with two warriors from Earth. How was that? I?m much better at writing a one on one fight though. But I had to include Zarbon/Dodoria, since I wanted to play them too. So, I hope it?s at least readable, if it is, I?m glad even if I don?t get the part. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gavin Posted September 5, 2006 Author Share Posted September 5, 2006 [SIZE=1][CENTER]|[B]Update: September 5th[/B]|[/CENTER] To be honest Mystic Ninja, I'd have preferred if you PMed it to me, but I suppose this way is fine as well. There's nothing really wrong with it, save that Frieza refers to Zarbon and Dodoria as "Mr" a title he never used in the Anime and Frieza should be referred to as Lord, not "Master". However aside from that I'm happy, so you're in as Frieza, Zarbon and Dodoria. Congrats.[/SIZE] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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