Guest Matt Posted December 22, 2001 Share Posted December 22, 2001 i submitted these to otaku poetry, like?? the first one i made in english class just for fun, cause we had to write a short narrative poem with the rhyme scheme aa,bb,cc,dd,ee etc.... Title: Ferret There once was a ferret, this ferret had a lot of merit. This merit filled ferret ran and ran, until he ran into a man. The man took the ferret as a pet, but was careful never to get it wet. If the ferret got damp, it would bite down like a clamp. He finally decided to let the ferret go, but that was ages ago. Title: Prince I am a Prince, I live for battle. But with ki blasts flying threw the air, do I dare hide? run? do I dare, FIGHT! I'll fight! It's my right! For I am a Prince. But low-class fighters beat me. Why? For I am a Prince. I am better than them. But still, they defeat me, humiliate me. But I shall seek me revenge. For I am Prince Vegeta. comments, questions, concerns..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
woody Posted December 22, 2001 Share Posted December 22, 2001 The Ferret one was funny, and I like the pattern of the poem. It's rhyme. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deedlit Posted December 22, 2001 Share Posted December 22, 2001 OOC: I liked the Prince one. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- here's some: [B]The Cat[/B] The sorrowful Caroline Cratt, Liked to stand on the cliff with her cat. One night, such a pitty, She tripped on her kitty, And fell off the cliff with a [I]splat!![/I] [B]Snore[/B] There once was a girl named Lauren, Who really hated snorin'. Her mom did it loud, Wich her father allowed, Because he was good at ignorin'. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
woody Posted December 22, 2001 Share Posted December 22, 2001 very nice accrosstic poem Kool. I make this one last year, it's in a form of a sonnet. I don't have the original copy, so I just type what I can remember. [color=red]Even we're both in someone else arms Only memories left to remember Once upon a time, your arm kept me warm In a cold evening of November Leaves fall, flowers bloom, as seasons change What's love, brought us together then apart Though thought toward each other never change Your name always remainging in my heart ( [size=1]I forget the actual line I wrote [/size] ) Many raindrops and sunshine days I watch To forgot some memories of the past Heal the wound to every single scratch For all the love, that's no longer last If we never met, and never begin No story to remember, deep within [/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deedlit Posted December 22, 2001 Share Posted December 22, 2001 Thank you. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Matt Posted December 22, 2001 Share Posted December 22, 2001 that's some funny stuff kool. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Darkness Bu Posted December 22, 2001 Share Posted December 22, 2001 heh funny poems Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragonballzman Posted December 22, 2001 Share Posted December 22, 2001 Thats some good poems you got there :) I WANT MORE!!! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest DrunkenMaster88 Posted December 23, 2001 Share Posted December 23, 2001 ok this one is kinda dark: [SIZE=3]HELL WITHIN CLOSED WALLS[/SIZE] My life, an empty hole The smell of wood is thick in the air the walls slowly close in as time tortures my body I only see sheets of pile atop the boards in front of me They tear at my soul like a sworm of locusts With laws as master without reason, I stay a slave to these fools As their soft voices are silent yell of commands, I refuse to give in to this pit of motionless hell My freedom comes near but only to start again at next sunrise I shall enjoy my time of bliss freedom But they hold me captive because of my soul's expression for my mind and body I have no regrets to what I did but I can say this, " No one will change me, EVER!" And for that I am going insane. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Darkness Bu Posted December 23, 2001 Share Posted December 23, 2001 need more funny poems MUWHAHAHAHAHA..:blulaugh: err...never mind Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
woody Posted December 24, 2001 Share Posted December 24, 2001 Here is a poem about spring [color=green] Comes spring, The birds, the bees The butterflies Cover the trees Comes spring, The grass, the ground The greenish grass Cover around Comes spring, The leaves, the lives The love that's dead And now alive [/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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