Writing Angels [PG VL]

[The_Mix_Breed]

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[COLOR=Black]Hinata stared at the destroyed remains of a village that was once her home. The sky seemed to be streaked with blood, smoke billowed out of every window. At least, every window where the building was still standing. The air burned her lungs and crackled under the intense heat. Konoha was no more[/COLOR]

Sparkling angel I believed
You are my savior in my time of need.
Blinded by faith I couldn't hear
All the whispers, the warnings so clear.
I see the angels,
I'll lead them to your door.
There's no escape now,
No mercy no more.
No remorse cause I still remember

[COLOR=Black]'Naruto. Why?'[/COLOR]

The smile when you tore me apart.
You took my heart,
Deceived me right from the start.
You showed me dreams,
I wished they turn into real.
You broke a promise and made me realise.
It was all just a lie.

[COLOR=Black]She turned and faced the other surviors. There weren't many. Sakura was tending to the injured while Iruka tried to keep the newly found orphans from crying. Out of the rookie nine, Sakura, Hinata, and Akamaru were the only one's left. Yes Akamaru, not Kiba.[/COLOR]

Sparkling angel, I couldn't see
Your dark intentions, your feelings for me.
Fallen angel, tell me why?
What is the reason, the thorn in your eye?
I see the angels,
I'll lead them to your door
There's no escape now
No mercy no more
No remorse cause I still remember

[COLOR=Black]Lee was currently knocked out, and Tenten was holding Neji headband crying. A few ANBU, Iruka, some genin who were out on a mission at the time of the attack and some non-ninja's were all that had made it out. Not even the Hokage or Jiriaya could escape the raging flames.[/COLOR]

The smile when you tore me apart
You took my heart,
Deceived me right from the start.
You showed me dreams,
I wished they turn into real.
You broke the promise and made me realise.
It was all just a lie.
Could have been forever.
Now we have reached the end.

[COLOR=Black]Hinata turned toward Hokage mountain and was sure she saw the rock figure crying. Naruto had betrayed them all. His mask hadn't just broken, it had shattered. He couldn't take the emotionally abuse anymore. He gave up, and he gave in. With his willpower shattered, Kyuubi had taken control and well, you can quess what happened.[/COLOR]

This world may have failed you,
It doesn't give you a reason why.
You could have chosen a different path in life.

[COLOR=Black]No eye was dry, no heart not broken. The broken bunch slowly bagan to move away from the destroyed village.

"Hey Iruka-sensei?" The brunette looked at the small young girl who had only started at the academy that year.

"Yes, Kiko-chan?"

"Why foxy do it? He was so nice to me."

"The village hurt him, so he hurt them back."

"That wasn't very nice. We should give him a timeout, right Iruka-sensei?"

"Hai, Kiko, we should." The man smiled a soft sad smile as the girl went of to Hinata who gave her a hug and then held her hand as the keep walking. 'Maybe this village will live again, jusy maybe. . .[/COLOR]

The smile when you tore me apart.
You took my heart,
Deceived me right from the start.
You showed me dreams,
I wished they turn into real.
You broke the promise and made me realise.
It was all just a lie.
Could have been forever.
Now we have reached the end.[/B][/I][/COLOR]

Sorry, I had to write something when I heard this song. :animecry: I know it's depressing. . . :animeswea

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[Alannie]

[COLOR=Blue][SIZE=2][FONT=Comic Sans MS]WoW. That's [B]deep[/B]. Did you wrote it. Cuz if you did than you've got talnet. I mean it. If you didn't wrote it than thanks for sharing it with the rest of us. Next time can you please say whose it by. [/FONT] [/SIZE] [/COLOR]
[COLOR=DarkSlateBlue][SIZE=4][FONT=Impact]I Love It. [/FONT] [/SIZE] [/COLOR]

[The_Mix_Breed]

I seriously wrote, no lie. I swear! Or did you read this before I fixed it!? I accidently posted it before the story part was added so it was just a song. The song I didn't write, That's "Angels" by Within Temptation.

[Alannie]

[COLOR=Blue][SIZE=2][FONT=Comic Sans MS]OKay. I believe you. Hey, you added more. It's still cool. I still love it.[/FONT][/SIZE][/COLOR]