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[Akieen Cloud]

[COLOR=Purple][B]"ugh...head...pain, need caffoee..."
Umi lurched into the office and looked at the offending, empty coffee pot, pulling out the filter holder she cursed under her breath as she found it too to be empty.
"Any one ever hear about fresh filters?"
She bent over and looked under the cabinet scowling at the leering voice behind her.
"I knew today was a good day but I never imagined this good a veiw first thing in the morning."
She sent him the one fingered salute over her shoulder making the young man chuckle.
"You won't find any, we're out."
"Well damn. I need coffee."
"Hang over?"
"Shove it."
"Told you not to drink so much."
"I said shove it."
She was rinseing out a dish rag and shoveing it into the filter holder and pouring the water through it, without waiting for the pot to fill she grabbed it and filled her mug letting the black liquid splash and steam on the burner. After her overly large gulp she topped off and walked over to her desk sitting down she looked up as another young man sat down ontop of it.
"You know your in bad shape with the boss. You've missed alot of days, not only that, you've brushed him off enough."
"Yeah well, he'll live."
"Blade! Get in here!"
She sighed and looked up at the young man laughing silently on her desk.
"I owe you for this."
She trugded to the office that held her supioior and blinked as folders were thrusted into her face.
"You and your team have a mission. There's a murderer killing peace delagetes, your to go to the mourge and look at the body, report the findins back to me. We're to solve this case if we can, if not, then the FBI gets it so lets wrap it up."
She nodded and walked out looking at her team.
"Briefing room in 10 minutes. Be there."
Walking back to her desk she sipped at her coffee and flipped through the file.

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Name- Imi Blade
Age: 23
Apperance- Stands 5/6, lean and well built she has long black hair and bright blue, green eyes. Her face is fair and simple, She wears the standard uniform for work, black blazor and a smi short black skirt with a white button up under,her shoes are black with a slight heel, her guns and badge in her blazor holster. On her off days she wears mostly jeans and t-shirts, black boots or tennis shoes. Her jewlery is not much, a silver watch and silver bracelet on her left wrist, her left hand has one ring on it as well as her right, her right wrist is graced with a silver bracelet as well.
Personality: She is freindly and open with people but serious when it comes to the job.
Guns- She uses a small pistol that is on her leg when she is wearing her jeans or her theigh when in uniform, her two assighned pistols are in her shoulder holsters and she has an old fashoined 45 Colt that she keeps under her car seat.[/B][/COLOR]

[Sandy]

[color=Green][font=Century Gothic]I'm sorry, [B]Knuckles' Girl[/B], but this game, although it fills all the technical standards, is just too ridden with typos, bad grammar and poor storytelling that I just can't let it stay open with a good conscience.

I've noticed that you like to create game after game after game, but how about, for a change, you focus on the games you've already created? Put more effort to them, spend some more time checking out the spelling, make more innovative stories, all that jazz.

This game, it is no good. Sorry.

If you feel like talking about the quality of your RPGs more, you can always PM me.

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