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[size=1][i]...Its a stormy night, the wind howls through the trees, and the ground quakes with each clap of thunder...

...Its pouring down rain, and the moon has been blocked out by clouds, large chunks of hail falling from the skies...

...The dirt path is filled with trenches of mud, and the leaves blow over the ground...

...The forest is a cruel mistress in the presence of a storm, the sound of thunder filling your ears, while your haunted by the odd and frightful cries of the fauna...

...You look in all directions, searching for a way out of this hell...

...A bolt of thunder strikes a tree only feet away, throwing you into a temporary state of panic, as you close your eyes and dart off...

...Minutes later, you open your eyes, and slow down, panting to catch your breath...

...You soon notice, the ground is made of stone, and not dirt...

...Looking up, you seen ruined buildings in all directions, and hope for shelter, but the skies are so dark, you can barely see...

...Running deeper into the town, you search for a sign of life, before you quickly come to a halt, and look up...

...A massive catherdral stands before you, as you gaze in awe, wondering for a moment, why this is the only standing building...

...Looking to the very top, you blink for a moment, as a bolt of lightning illuminates the sky...

...Opening your eyes, you see the silhouette of a figure, but for only an instant, as you blink again, wondering if your eyes are playing tricks on you...

...Shaking your head, you quickly dash to the front doors of the church, and to your suprise, find its open, but, rather than think about it, you decide the best course of action is to escape the fury of the storm...

...Inside, a figure stands in front of the alter, looking right at you, his face covered by a pair of glasses, and a brown cloak covering his body from neck down, a piece of metal hanging above his left shoulder, possibly the hilt of a sword...

...A quick flashback, reminds you that this was the figure atop the chuch, as you quickly take a fighting stance to defend yourself...[/i]

[align=center]-=Sign Up=-

Name; Hyper
Age; Unknown, he's died so many times that its impossible to keep track, with all the variables and whatnot.
DOB; Unknown, its also assumed that he was never born.
Hair Colour; Black
Eye Colour; A Nightmarish Shade Of Purple
Race; Human?
Hieght; 5'10"
Wieght; 131 lbs.
Build; Also unknown, as he's almost always covered by a cloak.
Blood Type; Unknown
Relatives; None
Personality; Sometimes sarcastic, sometimes intimidatingly evil, other times completely silent, his personally differs from foe to foe.
Likes; Nothing.
Dislikes; Those who call themselves "Elite", weaklings, arrogance.
Appearence;
Hyper always wears a light brown cloak that covers everything from his neck down, mana, seems to be woven into the fabric. On the inside, its pitch black, and, if someone were to touch the inside of the cloak, they would see thier hands pass into the darkness, into the etherneal realm. His midnight black hair, hangs down his back, reaching about halfway down. On his face, a pair of black shades, with black lense', rest, though, the right lense is missing.

Weapon; Rephlexion
This Broadsword is forged of an unknown metal, which, resembles titanium in some properties, but at the same time, also exhibits properties of reflection. This blade, has been coated in a layer of mana, also, which, has brought thermal energy unto itself, and constantly remains at negative two hundred and fifteen degrees celcius, but, the temprature can be altered, to go from absolute zero, to freezing cold, to room temprature, to the temprature of a thermite explosion, and higher.

As for the reflection properties, as photons come into contact with the blade, they will be almost instantly absorbed, and re-emmited. But, this blade holds a few different properties than your normal reflecting item. Energies, such as kinetic, gravitational, electromagnetic, weak and strong nuclear forces, most forms of basic magic, mana, etherneal energy, and almost everything else, can be absorbed, and re-emmited.

Sound, however, will be absorbed into the sword, but not all of it. Smaller sound waves, will be absorbed, and re-emmited, but large ones, such as something coming from a sonic grenade, will not be fully absorbed, meaning, most of it will be reflected, but not all of it.

While matter is absorbed, but yet to have been re-emmited, it can be augmented by mana, and other energies.

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[font=Palatino Linotype][size=2][color=darkgreen]Before the moderators [or anyone else for that matter] start to ask you questions on the matter of your post, let me be the first...[/color][/size][/font]

[font=Palatino Linotype][size=2][color=navy]- I understand this is a spar but...[/color][/size][/font]

[font=Palatino Linotype][size=2][color=darkgreen][color=navy]a:[/color] A random player who was to join in on the SPAR (assuming it is a one-on-one battle and that any ONE person can join) would have to know what to create to be effective [against your character] in the first place. You gave no type of character building template or anything of the sort.[/color][/size][/font]

[font=Palatino Linotype][size=2][color=darkgreen][color=navy]b:[/color] You're character (cool as he sounds) is broken, period. He's too strong, you know? Your sword can counter / deflect / absorb just about anything and it has two elemental properties at it's disposal (Fire and Ice, respectively).[/color][/size][/font]

[font=Palatino Linotype][size=2][color=darkgreen][color=navy]- Usually...[/color] [/color][/size][/font]

[font=Palatino Linotype][size=2][color=darkgreen][color=navy]a:[/color] You would PM someone to SPAR you. However, your post is (As [color=darkred]Gavin[/color] would put it) interesting, quite interesting... Hmmm. Now that I think about it, creating a SPAR challenge for anyone to challenge you sounds quite promising. However, there is one [and only one] problem [that I see] concerning that...[/color][/size][/font]

[font=Palatino Linotype][size=2][color=darkgreen][color=navy]a1:[/color] ...If someone was to enter the SPAR that knew how to RP their butts off (i.e. [color=darkred]Gavin[/color], [color=darkred]Raiyuu[/color], [color=darkred]Sandy[/color], etc...), you would be OWNed. Hell, i'd problably be OWNed! [color=navy]=D[/color][/color][/size][/font]

[font=Palatino Linotype][size=2][color=darkgreen]Other than that, [I think] it's a very well thought out SPAR post. [color=navy]=][/color][/color][/size][/font]
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[SIZE=1][[Actually, this spar was supposed to be between me, and someone named Doublehex, who contacted me over MSN yesterday. And as for people here OWNing me..thats a joke. I read a spar here yesterday, and never in my life, have I seen so much godmodding, autohitting, and speedhacking, in one thread. Hell, you don't even have militaries here. As for my sword, this character, Hyper, also known as the Ninteenth Angel, Abbadon, was designed, on a different site, to be used in militaries.

Now, there is nothing wrong with my character, as, if any of you were actual fighters, who knew anything about physics, you would be able to do something about my sword, as, reflective properties, are'nt that strong.

Edit; Also note, my sword, does'nt have elements. Its thermal energy, which isn't an element, and simply allows me to control the temprature of the blade.

Now, it should be obvious, that my sword has a decent weakness to sound waves.

Now, I am an RPer, with four years experience, who excels in fighting. Like i've said once before, I am a physics fighter, which, judging by your members, I am willing to bet none of you, know what that is, so here is an example of what you might see from a physics fighter...

[I]...With a snap of his fingers, a cloud of mana shot forth from his body, instantly latching unto the particles and atoms within the area, as the mana, begans to manipulate the thermal energy around [foe], as the temprature rapidly begins to drop, until it reaches -273.15 degrees celcius...

...Now, mana, being non-physical, isn't bound by kinetic energy, meaning, this would happen near instantly...

...The area, around the foe, would be trapped in absolute zero, an area, in which, kinetic energy, practicly comes to a halt, along with gases, such as oxygen, freezing solid...

...Because kinetic energy, comes to a halt, it would be impossible to move, as you would be trapped there, like a stone statue...

...Hyper, would immediatly, leap forward, mana, spinning around his blade, as he sliced into the area, with a horizontal slash, left to right, aimed at the abdomen, the mana around his blade, augmenting the thermal energy around it, bringing the temprature up, by exactly, one hundred degrees, allowing kinetic energy to exist around the blade, as he cut [foe] clean in half, the two halves still frozen solid...[/I]

Now, you probally call that a godmod, because after looking at your RPers, I see that your good with story telling, but the lot of you can't fight, without godmodding, speedhacking, and autohitting, which I shall speak of, in a moment.

Now, if someone were to use said attack on me, this is how I would counter;

[I]...As the mana blazes towards Ryou, a slight amount of his mana, would swiftly meet the other mana, as Ryou's mana, would form a Chaotic Mirror, which, would absorb the mana, as Ryou, would simply snap his fingers, causing said mirror, to cease to exist, on all planes of reality, meaning it would be an omniplaner attack...

...As Hyper lept forward, Ryou, would create yet another chaotic mirror, as said mirror, would wrap around the blade of Rephlexion, absorbing the mana, before Ryou, would snap his fingers once more, causing the mirror, and mana, to cease to exist, as Ryou, would throw his left hand, horizontally, right to left, the buster sword, Yoshitsuna, forming in his grasp, as he countered the slash, and, because of Yoshitsuna's size, the kinetic energy would be much greater, knocking Rephlexion from Hyper's hand, as Hyper, would be cut in half, which, would be quite ironic...[/I]

Now, because it is possible to counter something, it is not godmodding. Whether you CAN counter it or not, is a whole other story, because, just because the RPer sucks, does'nt mean a move isn't beatable.

Now, onto my points on godmodding, autohitting, and speedhacking.

I don't know what your rules on fighting are, or if you even have any, for that matter, but godmodding;

'Sora smiled at Riku and gave him a thumbs up. "Riku... even though you were better than me before, don't mistake me for the little boy I once was."'

Now, that was a post in a spar, from the character, controlling Riku. Saying what your opponent does, is a blatant, godmod, because your controlling your foe.

'yelling, "Freedom!" His blow had landed a critical hit and had caused Sora to fly upwards, mildly dazed.'

Now, thats autohitting, because your not giving your opponent, a chance to block, evade, nor defend, your just saying whats happening to them. Its also a more primitive form of godmodding.

Now, I won't quote a post with speedhacking, because it would be too long, but, speedhacking, is unleashing to many attacks, in such a short amount of time. Its impossible to unleash 20 or 30 attacks in ten seconds, with melee only, which is what i'm reffering too. Well, actually, if you could start moving near light speed, in which time seems to slow down, it would be possible, but, I doubt any of you know how to do that.



I think i've made my points quite clear with that post.]][/SIZE]
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[COLOR=DarkOrange]Ooookay, I am stepping into this before it becomes a flamewar, an arguement, or even just a heated discussion of RP styles.

[b]Acheron[/b], RP threads in the Inn are not to be used for conversation or debate; that is for the Underground (if the RP has one) or to be left for private messages. Part a1 was also somewhat rude. OB roleplayers specialize in a style of RP called collective storytelling - our new friend specializes in spars. Just because you see a signup of one style doesn't mean that the signee is incapable of the other.
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HyperZeroX[/B], welcome to Otakuboards. This signup is a large improvement over the last one, thank you for reading the rules and being so fast to comply. You seem to have picked up on the most important parts of OB RPG/SPARS, but you missed one thing: unless you plan on having a team / many v. one spar, it's usally customary to put who you're having the spar with, as it closes that spar to you and the opposing player. Once the spar is closed to the two of you, you can invite more players, but they don't post in your signup threads unless you ask them to.

That being said,

[quote=HyperZeroX]
And as for people here OWNing me..thats a joke. I read a spar here yesterday, and never in my life, have I seen so much godmodding, autohitting, and speedhacking, in one thread. Hell, you don't even have militaries here. As for my sword, this character, Hyper, also known as the Ninteenth Angel, Abbadon, was designed, on a different site, to be used in militaries.[/quote]

There is no need to be insulting or condescending just because the regulars here have different specialties when it comes to RPs. The spars you see are usually between players who are used to collective storytelling (as I told Archeron) and used to being permitted to use the other player's character for short periods of time. On straight-up RP sites, however, yes, controlling a character for even the merest millisecond is considered godmodding, especially during a spar. But there is no need to condescend just because we're a different style than you are used to.

Now. This thread is remaining open, but only for Doublehex and other players posting [b]with signups[/b]. Any further discussion between you two can be taken to [b]PM[/b]. Any further argument in this thread, and it will be [b]closed[/b].

Thank you, have a nice day.[/COLOR]
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[SIZE=3][FONT=WHITE][CENTER][b]The Wanderer[/b]

[b]Name[/b] Sieg Schicksal[/SIZE]

[SIZE=2][b]Age[/b] 24

[b]Appearance[/b] [url=http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v143/Doublehex/ps2_chaos_screen049.jpg][color=#ffffff]Sieg[/color][/url]

[b]The Weapon[/b] [url=http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v143/Doublehex/zangetsu.jpg][color=#ffffff]Leben Steihlst[/color][/url]

In the world of realities, there are tales of mythical and fantastic weapons. These weapons, which date back to the days of Gods, of when Odin would cast his eye into the Mymir Well for unspeakable knowledge, of when Zeus would indulge himself into the lives of mortal women, are called the Unknowns. The Unknowns hold powers that a normal mortal is not able to comprehend.

The Leben Steihlst was created by ancient Germans who still belived in the coming of the Ragnarok when their fellow Vikings were being turned to Christianity. They prayed to Tyr, the God of War, for a weapon to speak to them, to preserve their tradition. The diety answered them with the blade.

Sieg is a distant descendant of the Jarl who commanded this blade. Surely, these two blades, Rahplexion, and Leben Steihlst, were destined to meet in combat.

[b]Fighting Style[/b] Sieg's style of fighting could be stated as, to be blunt, chaotic. He always goes in, blade first, into any ecounter that would recquire it. Sending off chaos energy towards his opponent at random times isn't that much of a rarity, either.

That's not to say, however, that Sieg does not calculate as the battle goes on. His brain is quick to think on his foe's battle tactics. However, he is not good at mirco-managing, and when he is thinking on how to better fight the opponent, his strikes become more sluggish, slow and predictable.

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OOC:: Sorry for being so late Hyper, but Bleach, general life, and writing got in the way of things.
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