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[Ginkaze]

[SIZE=1]It is based off the animated series Wolf's Rain. It is PG13. Language and Violence. It tells of a tragic journey of danger, suspense, and love. There can be MANY main characters, and here is the prologue of the story(according to my main character)[/SIZE]

[I][COLOR=DarkSlateBlue][SIZE=2] It was dark, real dark as Silver wandered aimlessly, searching for a mere place to rest. She came to a small, rotten town, the stench of decay drenching it horrendously. Amazingly, Silver was attracted to it. Something was in there, calling her, to her heart. Her small, young legs could barely support her much longer. With a resigned sigh, she stumbled through the main gates, and came to rest of the foot of a young girl. The girl not paying any attention to the young wolf, ate a sandwhich hugrily, waiting for someone. Sensing danger, Silver cloaked her body, making herself look like a young, exhausted human. she reached out, and touched the young girls foot. She looked down, and gasped in surprise. She ran towards her mother. Silver sniffed the air. A faint scent, was on the air, the scent drawing her. An unidentifiable scent. They came back, and reached down to pick up Silver. Silver sprang to her feet, and looked up at the kind humans in terror. She had heard awful stories about humans, hunting down wolves almost to extinction. Seeing their kind faces, she thought, "I'll stay here a bit, I need to rest after all." And it ended up she stayed for 10 more years. Later escaping off a runaway train searching for the Rakuen she had heard about in elders tales, before her town of wolves was disinagrated by the nobles. She later meets up with more wolves, going through the barren landscape in a place that many thought didn't exist. The group later gets chased by a notorius noble ship, rumored that it had a nasty grudge against all wolves alike. Being separated in the steadily warmer and wetter climate, they later meet up again, with two members deadly ill from a deadly summer fever. One gets better, the other dies. Then, as they neared the gates of paradise, following the scent of lunar flowers, following another member (Not me.) The come up to a small, desolate town, with blood thirsty wolves unreasonably defending their turf. After a big battle, they finally escape. They then meet up with the noble that had chased them in the first place, and the tired, hungry wolves have to fight, or be killed. They barely get away alive, and (Finally) Make it to paradise. Two of the characters fall in love, but it is difficult to love another on such a perilous journey![/SIZE] [/COLOR][/I] [SIZE=1]This is just the basis of the plot, and it is meant to be a long plot for it might be the ONLY plot for this thread. I need AT LEAST 3 more recruits. Anyone up for it? :animesmil [/SIZE]

[Sandy]

[FONT=Century Gothic][COLOR=DarkGreen]Hey, [B]Ginkaze[/B], and welcome to the Arena!

I see you remembered to add a [B]rating[/B] to the title after creating this thread, but it's not the only requirement we have when it comes to RPGs here.

Now, there's nothing wrong about your grammar, but you have written a "wall of text", so to speak, which is very difficult to read and comprehend. I advice you to [B]put on some spaces or empty lines between paragraphs[/B], that's the best way to make your text readable. Also, there's a [B]minimum of three paragraphs of background story[/B] required for our RPGs here.

Also, you might want to have one of them [B]character sheets[/B], to help people join your game. Just take an example from the other threads here at the Inn; the sheet can be as simple or as complex as you want, but it's good to be there.

I want you to take another shot of this, so I'm closing this thread down. Spend some more time on the writing, add the things that I adviced you to, and you'll have a great game to start with.

If you have any questions concerning your game or roleplaying in general here in OtakuBoards, you can freely send a [B]Private Message[/B] to either me or one of the other Adventure Square moderators.

- [B]Sandy[/B]

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