Sign Up Conquest Pokemon rp (pg-13 language)

[madwitch5]

story- Time has passed in the pokemon world and a new evil organization called Team Sengrave has arisen from the ashes of all befor it, time passed and they came to rule all of Kanto but a group of trainers came together to fight against Team Sengrave they called themselfs Team Conquest. Time went on and the battle raged, when in the last ray of hope for the world went out when team Sengrave defeated Team Conquest. But now 12 years after 1 boy Craige Tanner will bring back the team and beat Team Sengrave and save the world once and for all.
Back story-
Craige Tanner His father and Mother met in team Conquest they were the leaders they had their sun recently after the team Disbanded, he left home with his trusty team of pokemon to bring back Team Conquest. He challenged team gruntz and won he them met his rival in the exact place the battles were joining up with Sengrave he rised in their ranks and is now 1 of Craiges top priorites.
With your help Craige will take down team Sengrave!
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Rules-
1. no legendarys
2. no god modding when figthing another trainers
3. your pokemon can only know 4 moves
4. your pokemon start at lvl 10 and can go up to 50(5 battles to gain a level)
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Sign up-

Name:
Age: (must be in between 11 to 15)
Gender:
Personality:
Discription:
pokemon party:
1 pokemon that is yer most loyal conpanion:
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heres myn

Name: Craige Tanner
Age:15
Gender:male
Personality: courageous and inteligent he loves Pokemon and Hates Team Sengrave
Discription:Hes 5'8 and 165 pounds he has black hair with blue streaks he always wears a black hoodie and baggy jeans.
pokemon party: Arcanine, Umbreon, Pidgeot,Marowak,Venusaur,Charzard
1 pokemon that is yer most loyal conpanion:Umbreon
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any questions Pm me thanks!

[Sandy]

[FONT=Century Gothic][COLOR=DarkGreen]Hey, [B]madwitch5[/B]!

I'm sorry to say this, but this thread isn't quite up to par with the quality we want to maintain here at the Adventure Arena, so I have to close it.

First of all, your grammar needs a lot of work. It's hard to understand what you're trying to say when you have no [B]periods[/B] or [B]commas[/B], [B]capital letters[/B] here and there (except in the places where they ought to be) and [B]typoes[/B] everywhere.

Also, we require all the recruitment threads to have [I]at least[/I] [B]three paragraphs of background text[/B], as well as a proper [B]rating[/B] (PG is enough, no need to add the age).

Please work on these things. Me and other Arena mods are always just a PM away if something is still unclear to you.

-[B] Sandy[/B]

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