Art d gray man chalk drawing

[Sparky3000]

Here are some pics of my D Gray man chalk drawing

It took me a long time to do . It took me 5 days to plan out everything, three days to do sketch the derawing out with pencil and two for the drawing. i r8uined the skin of all my fingers rubbing the chalk on the ground. It will take a week or so till i fell the fellingi in my fingers again.

enjoy.

please tell me what you think

After 5 hours
[URL=http://imageshack.us][IMG]http://img119.imageshack.us/img119/9776/chalk001uu5.jpg[/IMG][/URL]

After 1 day and 10 hours
[URL=http://imageshack.us][IMG]http://img335.imageshack.us/img335/3113/chalk002wu6.jpg[/IMG][/URL]

Final drawing:
[URL=http://imageshack.us][IMG]http://img335.imageshack.us/img335/2011/chalk003ek2.jpg[/IMG][/URL]

[Guest millionsknives8]

[QUOTE=Sparky3000]Here are some pics of my D Gray man chalk drawing

It took me a long time to do . It took me 5 days to plan out everything, three days to do sketch the derawing out with pencil and two for the drawing. i r8uined the skin of all my fingers rubbing the chalk on the ground. It will take a week or so till i fell the fellingi in my fingers again.

enjoy.

please tell me what you think

After 5 hours
[URL=http://imageshack.us][IMG]http://img119.imageshack.us/img119/9776/chalk001uu5.jpg[/IMG][/URL]

After 1 day and 10 hours
[URL=http://imageshack.us][IMG]http://img335.imageshack.us/img335/3113/chalk002wu6.jpg[/IMG][/URL]

Final drawing:
[URL=http://imageshack.us][IMG]http://img335.imageshack.us/img335/2011/chalk003ek2.jpg[/IMG][/URL][/QUOTE]
nice job!^^ i think it looks cool! =)

[Retribution]

[quote name='millionsknives8']nice job!^^ i think it looks cool! =)[/quote]
[size=1]Welcome to OtakuBoards, millionknives8.

If you could elaborate why you think it looks cool, that'd help the artist out alot more. Without saying what you like about it, the artist doesn't really know what they did well or what could be improved. So, try something like:

"I really like the colors and the pose, but you could work on the proportions."

That helps the artist out by naming what you liked and what could be improved.

In addition, please read the [url=http://www.otakuboards.com/showthread.php?t=52171][b]Art Studio Rules[/b][/url] for more information on how the forum works. Thanks for your cooperation and patience.[/size]

[John]

I'd critique some of the problems with the shapes and proportions you used, but I really can't imagine that hindering the drawing at all, as it's sidewalk art. Seeing that kind of stuff ever so occasionally makes me happy enough that neither the subject nor skill can generally hamper it. As I see it, the point of things like this isn't to be great, it's to be [i]there[/i]. To add something to someone's walk, give 'em some color to appreciate for a second.

That said, the only thing I would've done if I were you is omit the signature. Anonymity is the vessel that draws the viewing passerby closer to humanity when he sees the drawing, and I doubt anyone will be so lame as to claim it as their own work anyway.