Sign Up Deep in the night M for (V,L,and possably S)

[sky]

[SIZE=4][FONT=Times New Roman]In the heart of Chicago there lived seven kids. Now these kids were not normal in any way, they were all vampires. they all lived in different styles of of life. Some could've been rich or poor or just in the middle but none of them new the others were out there. None of these kids had ever met each other face to face. But a man was trying to make their lives horrible by telling the entire world about them and making them outcasts.

The seven kids all wanted to stop this man but they all figured they couldn?t because they were all just one person. Until one day when they all ended up meeting. They realized that there was more than one vampire out there that wanted this man dead. They all rallied together and are now going to fight this man.

Okay so there will be seven kids I will be one of them and then someone could be the evil guy.

Here are the things you will need

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[Sandy]

[COLOR=DarkGreen][FONT=Century Gothic]Welcome to the Adventure Arena, [B]sky[/B]!

Before you start creating RPGs here, you should read the [URL=http://www.otakuboards.com/showthread.php?t=44318]sticky[/URL] about Adventure Arena Basics [I]thoroughly[/I].

Once you have, you will learn that we require a few specific things from our games: that the writing is readable and has a good grammar, that an appropriate rating would be put to the headline, and that the introduction would be at least three paragraphs long.

Now, although you do have a rating, your grammar is quite sloppy with many obvious typos caused by typing too fast, and your story is poor and confusing. You need to focus more, put more thought to it and spend some more time with it.

I'm going to have to close this thread now, but if any more questions arise, we moderators are only a PM away!

Thanks!

[I]- Sandy[/I]

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