Manga The Forgotten Memories Manga

[tomboy2xxxkoy]

Hi,
I've been working on my manga, The Forgotten Memories for about 5 months
And I've been wondering what people really think of it (don't try to be nice)

Short Summary:
Mashiko Yamatashi was a girl with amnesia. In the beginning of her first year in high school, Mashiko met up with her "old friend," Takashi Atori, who had been oversea for a year. However, there seems to be more to it than just friendship between those two. Regarding Mashiko's memory lost, no one wanted her to remember her past. What could be so bad about "the past" that no one wanted to tell her about it?

Here's a sample:
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Go to this site to continue on reading: [url]http://www.freewebs.com/theforgottenmemories/Home.html[/url]

Please check it out & leave comments, critics, suggestions, ect.
& don't be shy,
I won't get mad at you for saying something bad about my manga as long as you have your reasons :D
Thank you!^^


oh! i also uploaded in theotaku at the fan manga section
([url]http://fanmanga.theotaku.com/view.php?action=retrieve&id=112[/url])
you can read it there if you want<-(??? XP)

[han ki-tae]

Hey I loved it. The storyflow is what I admire the most plus the fact u can draw eyes, clothes and dynamic scenes so well.

I cant. hehehhe

I'll PM you with some of my artwork, because you know what I've been looking for someone to work with for a long time, but I'll talk about it later.


I really liked the story, use of tones really worked to create atmosfere (specially on the flash back scene). definitelly let me know when more comes up.

Thanks for sharing with us.

[mushrumluver]

After reading Chapter one and what's done in chapter two, I kinda like the story for two reasons. One is the mystery why do they want to keep that girl from remembering. It adds suspense and curiosity. Two is what happened to the two guys. From being friends to becoming not friends at all. Sorry if I forgot their names, because I'm not really good at memorizing names.

For the artwork, It's cool, nice and not painful for the eyes and mind. I really admired people who can draw that well, since I myself can't do it like that. The not painful for the eyes and mind part is the scenes are understandable and their actions are easy to understand.

Keep it up and I'll look forward to this manga's ending. ^ ^

[Nony]

Like people have already stated, the manga keeps a certain mystery about it, that makes the reader want to keep going with the story.
I'd like to see how the manga really is overall later on, as far as character development and all. It's kind of hard to judge from just two chapters. XP
Of course, the artwork is great. The best I've seen from theOtaku fanmanga so far, to be honest. The artwork does get better after the first few pages, like you said that one time.
The only big thing I've noticed is that you have quite a few spelling and grammatical errors. That tends to take away from the experience when you're reading.