Synister Posted November 20, 2006 Share Posted November 20, 2006 Dont really know where to post this so if an admin can possibly move it for me to where ever it may belong. so here goes ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- [I]A Japanese man named Hiro sits in a small diner at a table with a woman. A man comes in and approaches them and sits down with them. Hiro looks at him and nods, the man nods back and orders a glass of water.[/I] ?You got the product?? [I]Asked the man[/I] ?Yes, do you have the money?? [I]Hiro responds.[/I] [I]They both pause as the waitress brings the man his water. He takes a sip and lays a five on the table.[/I] ?where?? Asked the man ?It?s in my car, that black Cadillac right out the door.? [I]Hiro responded.[/I] [I]The man pulls a gun under the table and holds it to Hiro?s stomach.[/I] ?Let?s have them key?s. Slowly slide them over to me.? [I]Grunted the man[/I] [I]Hiro smiled large.[/I] ?You are making a very big mistake.. You see my friend across the table there? She?s aiming a sawed off shotgun right at your privates. Now if you value your man hood I suggest you hand me your gun and walk away.? [I]Hiro says[/I] [I]The man slowly hands his gun to Hiro. He then stands up and walks out the door towards his car, unknowingly being followed out by Hiro. As he gets into his car a bullet shreds through the back of his skull.[/I] ?You forgot your change.? [I]Hiro says as he walks away with his arm wrapped around his woman?s waist.[/I] [I]He pulls out his cell phone and dials a number.[/I] ?The job is finished, you can wire transfer the funds to my account.? [I]Hiro hangs up the phone. [/I] ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ It's still a work in progress so if you have any tips or pointers please be my guest and tell me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Revelation Posted November 20, 2006 Share Posted November 20, 2006 [color=#4B5B5B]Hey there [B]Kaos Anarchy[/B]. You?ve come to the right place. A good way to figure out where a thread should be is by reading the stickies seen at the top. If you haven't already checked out the OB Anthology's sticky, [URL=http://www.otakuboards.com/showthread.php?t=44313][B]Click Here[/B][/URL]. I'm glad you decided to post your thread here. The Anthology needed some new stuff but it seems like you?re missing something. One of the main things that a thread in the Arena, in general, needs is a [B]Thread Rating[/B]. A thread rating lets others know what main category it falls under. The main ones are: [B]E[/B], PG, and [B]M[/B]. Once in a while, someone forgets to put it in and it has to be closed because that?s the rule. Any thread without a rating will be closed. The good news is that you can recreate your thread with the proper rating. So, if you have any questions, comments, or just need to know something you can PM me. I?m available to ?be your guide?, so to speak. [B]THREAD CLOSED.[/B][/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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