Raquel Posted December 26, 2001 Share Posted December 26, 2001 here are the rules: it has to be yours it has to be at least 4 lines long we need 5 judges... post that you are going to be one if you want to... anyone can post... if you think it's cra.p post it anyway... here we go ~~~~~~~~~~ black sun, dark moon, the shattered laughter resounds through the soul forever after black sails loom out of the silver mist dry runs the blood after nightbringers kiss heart of darkness soul is cold gather light into your hold falling, falling into fear clutch your loved ones oh so near the crystal tinkleing of a shattered tear makes the purpose just to clear -robin powell Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Heaven's Cloud Posted December 26, 2001 Share Posted December 26, 2001 [color=indigo][b] The Cloud Drops its Tears They Fall from the Heavens High Provide us with life The Heavens now shout Lifes Resounding Song of Joy The Rain Falls Anew--[/b]HC[/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raquel Posted December 26, 2001 Author Share Posted December 26, 2001 nice... ~~~~~~~ cold as winter, solid as stone i face the darkness all alone the silver warrior; a reflection a mirage; a recollection no return; no going back the past is gone the, future, black i view my world through the eyes of others black and white; there are no colors between the lines i see a grey everyone will some day pay i look down upon my broken youth a shattered mirror shows a shattered truth -robin powell Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Heaven's Cloud Posted December 26, 2001 Share Posted December 26, 2001 [QUOTE][i]Originally posted by stormwing [/i] [B] cold as winter, solid as stone i face the darkness all alone the silver warrior; a reflection a mirage; a recollection no return; no going back the past is gone the, future, black i view my world through the eyes of others black and white; there are no colors between the lines i see a grey everyone will some day pay i look down upon my broken youth a shattered mirror shows a shattered truth -robin powell [/B][/QUOTE] [color=indigo][i] That one is really good, I have an idea, why don't you make this a game, you know, have people post poems that they make up on the spot...anyway here is another on[/i] My shattered dreams flowed upon the streams of a darkened mind that had grown unkind to the harsh reality of the worlds formalities and existence's trivial nature But a ray of hope helped me cope and through the mist arose tears of bliss As I came to see that there were many like me And I was not alone in my pain[/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raquel Posted December 26, 2001 Author Share Posted December 26, 2001 good idea... i'll edit my first post Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
woody Posted December 26, 2001 Share Posted December 26, 2001 Is it kind of like Shakespeare's play style? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raquel Posted December 26, 2001 Author Share Posted December 26, 2001 [COLOR=blue][SIZE=4]the contest starts now!![/SIZE] [/COLOR] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
woody Posted December 26, 2001 Share Posted December 26, 2001 I want to be a judge. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Heaven's Cloud Posted December 26, 2001 Share Posted December 26, 2001 [color=indigo] The moon's light radiates it cascades over the hills. Hues of blue dance upon the black nightscape Tiny Dancers piruet across the darkened field. They celebrate their creator, the Harvest Moon [/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raquel Posted December 26, 2001 Author Share Posted December 26, 2001 i pit myself aginst life itself careing not 'bout friends nor health careening into unknown space gather the courage to search this place hear the chime of midnights hour feel the rush of the darkest power fills the veins to the brim thicker than blood spills over the rim try to scream with all your might now you realise your deadly plight fangs of pearl peirce the skin of some sit back relax and let death come ~~~~~~~~~ that was very dark... i dunno where that came from Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deedlit Posted December 27, 2001 Share Posted December 27, 2001 Can I be a judge? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Heaven's Cloud Posted December 27, 2001 Share Posted December 27, 2001 [color=indigo] I watched my fate As it was thread through a needle and cut short. But while the reapers blade is sharp and dictates my paths end only i chose the path I travel.[/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest DrunkenMaster88 Posted December 28, 2001 Share Posted December 28, 2001 My life, an empty hole The smell of wood is thick in the air the walls slowly close in as time tortures my body I only see sheets of pile atop the boards in front of me They tear at my soul like a sworm of locusts With laws as master without reason, I stay a slave to these fools As their soft voices are silent yell of commands, I refuse to give in to this pit of motionless hell My freedom comes near but only to start again at next sunrise I shall enjoy my time of bliss freedom But they hold me captive because of my soul's expression for my mind and body I have no regrets to what I did but I can say this, " No one will change me, EVER!" And for that I am going insane. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raquel Posted December 28, 2001 Author Share Posted December 28, 2001 nice... this might take years... so don't get too excited Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sere Tuscumbia Posted December 29, 2001 Share Posted December 29, 2001 I have a couple . . . they're a bit . . . happier . . . Dark, drab world Empty grayness Surrounding everything Open a door And enter into a world Of color Look back The drab world Holds you prisoner No longer Shut the door Be free *~*~~*~*~~*~*~~*~*~~ He stands Defending his land The luxurious sword He holds in his hand He swings And it meets Metal against metal Sword against sword Each crash creating a Quiet riot of its own SilverFox against SilverEagle The master finally met His match *~*~~*~*~~*~*~~ That's all for now . . . until I can find more . . . I have tons I've written and now I CAN'T FIND THEM!!! :wigout: :wigout: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stardust Posted December 29, 2001 Share Posted December 29, 2001 I HOLD IN MY HAND [COLOR=blue]I hold in my hand a seashell, I found along the shore As I walk along the beach, I find many more I hold in my hand some water I collected from the ocean The sun shines on the waves More beautiful with every motion I hold in my hand a starfish The tide has brought to me I set it back down in the sand And the tide has swept it out to sea I hold in my hand a grain of sand It covers the beach It holds a million memories All within my reach I stood there for a moment As the sun fades into night I stay a little longer And the stars shine forever bright [/COLOR] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest DrunkenMaster88 Posted December 29, 2001 Share Posted December 29, 2001 that was pretty :love2: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Heaven's Cloud Posted December 29, 2001 Share Posted December 29, 2001 [color=indigo]Stardust, that was pretty good, none of my other ones were close to that good. I need some time to think, instead of writing what comes off the top of my head...I'll think for a while, and then I will write another one...[/color] OKay here is another [color=sienna]FATE I travel amongst the tops of trees, an autum leaf caught in a breeze. To and fro I'm tossed about the sky, no cares at all, no fears to hide. For if I fall to the ground my journey may end but my destiny will be found.[/color] ______________________________________________ I am inebriated so I wrote a poem about Alcohol (I may revise this throughout the night) Alcohol It is Fun Alcohol Whiskey, Gin, and Rum Alcohol it tastes oh so sweet Alcohol it makes my head feel neat alcohol it blurs my preception of girls Alcohol I think I'm gonna hurl..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest DrunkenMaster88 Posted December 31, 2001 Share Posted December 31, 2001 cool i usually write romance poems instead of dark poems Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lady Macaiodh Posted December 31, 2001 Share Posted December 31, 2001 hai, this is my type of thread. i wrote this when i was fifteen. i picked it out completely at random. oh, sorry about the dots, i had to use them for fomatting purposes, they're not supposed to be there. [I]Ache [/I] ......... for Eric no my darling you know you are beautiful to me even as the sun moon stars .........................rain The Earth in all its glorious night compares not to the splendid curve of your ever occasioned face and you taste as scrumptious-- so these airs you put on I do not need for you see my darling i already ............................................BREATHE YOU-- your scent hypnotizes my body and looking at you could only be wickedest ..........................................................PLEASURE .....because ...........I ache .........for you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sere Tuscumbia Posted December 31, 2001 Share Posted December 31, 2001 Oooo . . . that's nice . . . I like!! :D :D :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest DrunkenMaster88 Posted December 31, 2001 Share Posted December 31, 2001 i've loved u sinced u first hugged me, ur warm effection is all i need to get me through the day i need every bit of u to stay alive i want to caress ur beautiful body in my arms ur eyes are are lovely shimmering saphires to soon hold u to me and embrace a romantic kiss of passion would be the only wish i could ever make i would charrish u in any way u like though my love seems to be very inconsiquential it will always be there for u, my only love ur sage of charm would always be one of very few i recive from u but i love them non the less i love you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raquel Posted December 31, 2001 Author Share Posted December 31, 2001 nice!! ok now... myself, kool_aid13 and woody are judges... i'm gonna pm them to tell them to judge... pick out your best one and post it in blue... i'm gonna have them pm me with their votes and in 2 days we'll tell you who we picked cheers! ~siren~* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Heaven's Cloud Posted December 31, 2001 Share Posted December 31, 2001 [color=blue]FATE I travel amongst the tops of trees, an autum leaf caught in a breeze. To and fro tossed about the sky, no cares at all, no fears to hide. For if I fall to the ground my journey may end but my destiny is found. [/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest DrunkenMaster88 Posted December 31, 2001 Share Posted December 31, 2001 i don't know how to put it in blue but here is my entry HELL WITHIN CLOSED WALLS My life, an empty hole The smell of wood is thick in the air the walls slowly close in as time tortures my body I only see sheets of pile atop the boards in front of me They tear at my soul like a sworm of locusts With laws as master without reason, I stay a slave to these fools As their soft voices are silent yell of commands, I refuse to give in to this pit of motionless hell My freedom comes near but only to start again at next sunrise I shall enjoy my time of bliss freedom But they hold me captive because of my soul's expression for my mind and body I have no regrets to what I did but I can say this, " No one will change me, EVER!" And for that I am going insane. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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